Submissions by GothicQueen666 (Viviaan)
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction
I love writing poetry and I have been trying to hone in my fiction writing skills. I appreciate honest critique and try my best to gett better with each passing day
FICTIONAL PROSE
Published
8th Jun 2014 2:24am
8th Jun 2014 2:24am
The Kidnappee Diary-- Chapter One
I roll over on my side after hearing my alarm clock go off for twenty minutes, and by alarm clock I mean my sister. "Vi, get your big butt out of bed!" Scar yells loudly from outside my ancient looking bedroom door. Ugh. Another day following in the footsteps of my sister. I slither from under my blankets slowly and grab my clothes for the day.
I walk into the plain, tiled bathroom and look at myself. How people get Scarlet and I mixed up, I have no clue. I have shoulder length black hair and purple eyes while my sister has long, flowing, dark red hair and inhumanly green...
I walk into the plain, tiled bathroom and look at myself. How people get Scarlet and I mixed up, I have no clue. I have shoulder length black hair and purple eyes while my sister has long, flowing, dark red hair and inhumanly green...
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ANGER POEM
Published
11th Apr 2014 5:28am
11th Apr 2014 5:28am
You broke it
This trust I placed
In your care was
At one point a
Very gentle loving creature
Now it is just
A bit of dust
Floating away from me
It's completely broken now
This care free heart
Laid in your hands
Once had unbelievable love
For everyone and everything
Now it hates passionately
Hoping you will die
Because you broke it
Just like everything else
This poor child here
Thought you were perfect
So happy and kind
That didn't last long
She will never love
Because of your lies
She is broken forever...
In your care was
At one point a
Very gentle loving creature
Now it is just
A bit of dust
Floating away from me
It's completely broken now
This care free heart
Laid in your hands
Once had unbelievable love
For everyone and everything
Now it hates passionately
Hoping you will die
Because you broke it
Just like everything else
This poor child here
Thought you were perfect
So happy and kind
That didn't last long
She will never love
Because of your lies
She is broken forever...
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ANGER POEM
Published
7th Apr 2014 4:58pm
7th Apr 2014 4:58pm
Im over you... NOT
I keep saying
I'm over you
But I'm not
I'm depressed and
I miss you
I hate it!
I want you
To go away
I want my
Heart to stop
Feeling this way..
I keep saying
I'm just fine
It's a lie
I want you
To hold me
I need you
To love me
The thing is
I hate you
It's eating me
From the inside...
I keep saying
I'm moving on
Another fucking lie
My heart longs
To be yours
I won't let
Myself do it
I'm so upset
I want to
Bawl my heart
Out until I'm
Really over you...
I'm over you
But I'm not
I'm depressed and
I miss you
I hate it!
I want you
To go away
I want my
Heart to stop
Feeling this way..
I keep saying
I'm just fine
It's a lie
I want you
To hold me
I need you
To love me
The thing is
I hate you
It's eating me
From the inside...
I keep saying
I'm moving on
Another fucking lie
My heart longs
To be yours
I won't let
Myself do it
I'm so upset
I want to
Bawl my heart
Out until I'm
Really over you...
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MISCELLANEOUS POEM
Published
5th Feb 2014 3:56am
5th Feb 2014 3:56am
What The Eyes Can't Hear
The razor breaks
My skin quickly
Leaving bright red
Rivers which scream
Silently in pain
I try to
Hide my song
Under clothes piles
In my room
Why there? Well...
Why would't I?
No one can
Hear the words
They don't bother
To peak through
The obvious cracks
In my music
They don't want
To see what
Their eyes cannot
Seem to hear...
My skin quickly
Leaving bright red
Rivers which scream
Silently in pain
I try to
Hide my song
Under clothes piles
In my room
Why there? Well...
Why would't I?
No one can
Hear the words
They don't bother
To peak through
The obvious cracks
In my music
They don't want
To see what
Their eyes cannot
Seem to hear...
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OBSERVATIONAL POEM
Published
3rd Feb 2014 10:24pm
3rd Feb 2014 10:24pm
Night Fall
I stare out
The icy, frost-bound
Window pane
To the vastly open
Crystal blue sky,
The trees,
Naked from Autumn,
Reach upwards
To hold onto,
For even a moment,
The misshapen umbrellas
That fly just above
Their fingertips,
The wind moans
Softly as a ghost
Days befoe
All Hallows Eve,
As Jack Frost
Threatens to kick
My door down
In a wintery furor,
The luminous orb
Hanging loosely
In the sky
Falls and all
Becomes night
The icy, frost-bound
Window pane
To the vastly open
Crystal blue sky,
The trees,
Naked from Autumn,
Reach upwards
To hold onto,
For even a moment,
The misshapen umbrellas
That fly just above
Their fingertips,
The wind moans
Softly as a ghost
Days befoe
All Hallows Eve,
As Jack Frost
Threatens to kick
My door down
In a wintery furor,
The luminous orb
Hanging loosely
In the sky
Falls and all
Becomes night
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MISCELLANEOUS POEM
Published
27th Jan 2014 8:10pm
27th Jan 2014 8:10pm
Poetry
It's a simple pleasure, really
Putting words I love
In your mind
Putting words I love
In your heart
And BAHM
Magic
I give you emotions
You've never felt before
I say things
You've never heard before
Why?
So you feel
Everything I want
Cuz I say
Anything I want
So again...
It's a simple pleasure
Really
Putting words I love
In your mind
Putting words I love
In your heart
And BAHM
Magic
I give you emotions
You've never felt before
I say things
You've never heard before
Why?
So you feel
Everything I want
Cuz I say
Anything I want
So again...
It's a simple pleasure
Really
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MISCELLANEOUS POEM
Published
24th Jan 2014 10:32pm
24th Jan 2014 10:32pm
Clichés
Clichés are:
Older than dirt
Many people still use them
Cuz their stubborn as an ox
And so often they say
"Love hurts"
Let's put our best foot forward
And find new ways
To let go of clichés
Let's go my friends
And be busy little bees
To the end
*yes I did use Clichés on purpose
Older than dirt
Many people still use them
Cuz their stubborn as an ox
And so often they say
"Love hurts"
Let's put our best foot forward
And find new ways
To let go of clichés
Let's go my friends
And be busy little bees
To the end
*yes I did use Clichés on purpose
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MISCELLANEOUS POEM
Published
24th Jan 2014 10:18pm
24th Jan 2014 10:18pm
Dear Diary
Dear Dear Diary
I'm sorry for the pain
I've written on all your pages
Many with disdain
I thank you for the years
Of secrets that you hold
I beg for your forgiveness
As the truth has been told
It's time to let go
It's time to forget
The fire burns your pages
And I begin to feel regret
Dear Dear Diary
I'm sorry for the pain
But I filled all your pages
Many with disdain
I gave you my love
For years and years
Even though your pages
Hold many of my tears
I'm okay now
I've gotten through
I...
I'm sorry for the pain
I've written on all your pages
Many with disdain
I thank you for the years
Of secrets that you hold
I beg for your forgiveness
As the truth has been told
It's time to let go
It's time to forget
The fire burns your pages
And I begin to feel regret
Dear Dear Diary
I'm sorry for the pain
But I filled all your pages
Many with disdain
I gave you my love
For years and years
Even though your pages
Hold many of my tears
I'm okay now
I've gotten through
I...
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3 Comments
OBSERVATIONAL POEM
Published
24th Aug 2013 2:12am
24th Aug 2013 2:12am
What We Became
He had a limp
From beatings his father gave
And I had a scar
From someone burning my house down
School was our battle ground
The bigger kids
Laughed at us
Smaller kids
Thought we were monsters
We were sent out
Of our classroom
Because we were "distractions"
When lunch rolled around
We would run for our lives
Because they would chase us
They would pull our hair
Call us names
We knew something had to give
We gave our souls
Became part of their gang
Now we are no longer
Terrorized children...
From beatings his father gave
And I had a scar
From someone burning my house down
School was our battle ground
The bigger kids
Laughed at us
Smaller kids
Thought we were monsters
We were sent out
Of our classroom
Because we were "distractions"
When lunch rolled around
We would run for our lives
Because they would chase us
They would pull our hair
Call us names
We knew something had to give
We gave our souls
Became part of their gang
Now we are no longer
Terrorized children...
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LOVE POEM
Published
27th Jul 2013 3:04am
27th Jul 2013 3:04am
Gone..
He was seventeen and cool
Tall, black hair, and kinda handsome
He was a lifeguard at the local pool
And he was a kid everyone knew
I remember when we met
Third period history
Yeah, he was the coolest kid there
Yet he paid attention to everyone
Now I hear
The hard news
When it comes to this
Turns out I am a mess
It was a Monday night
He was out with some kids
Swimming in a lake
An accident they say
But now I sit here
And pray to God
That he is there ...
Tall, black hair, and kinda handsome
He was a lifeguard at the local pool
And he was a kid everyone knew
I remember when we met
Third period history
Yeah, he was the coolest kid there
Yet he paid attention to everyone
Now I hear
The hard news
When it comes to this
Turns out I am a mess
It was a Monday night
He was out with some kids
Swimming in a lake
An accident they say
But now I sit here
And pray to God
That he is there ...
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ANGER POEM
Published
27th Jul 2013 2:49am
27th Jul 2013 2:49am
Nothing...
I pick up the phone
And dial his number
Hoping to talk to him
Even for a minute
One ring, Two rings
And then his voice mail
I grab my cell
And send him a message
"Hey papa, I love you"
Three days pass
And I get nothing
I hop onto the laptop
And send him an e-mail
Telling him I am hurt
And in return
I get nothing
My dad used to be
Everything I tried to become
I used to talk to him
Every single day
But I guess that now
To him I'm nothing
And dial his number
Hoping to talk to him
Even for a minute
One ring, Two rings
And then his voice mail
I grab my cell
And send him a message
"Hey papa, I love you"
Three days pass
And I get nothing
I hop onto the laptop
And send him an e-mail
Telling him I am hurt
And in return
I get nothing
My dad used to be
Everything I tried to become
I used to talk to him
Every single day
But I guess that now
To him I'm nothing
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MISCELLANEOUS POEM
Published
21st Jul 2013 5:04am
21st Jul 2013 5:04am
Four Letter Word
Hate has many meanings
It could mean I don't like you
Though that probably isn't true
It could mean I truly love you
Even if I am hiding my feelings
It could mean anything
But to a lot of people
Its just a four letter word
Love has many meanings
It could mean that you are my one and only
Though that is really hard to believe
It could mean I am just trying to be a friend
Even if that won't happen
It could mean anything
But to me
Its just a four letter word
Baby has many meanings
It could mean that you gave me a...
It could mean I don't like you
Though that probably isn't true
It could mean I truly love you
Even if I am hiding my feelings
It could mean anything
But to a lot of people
Its just a four letter word
Love has many meanings
It could mean that you are my one and only
Though that is really hard to believe
It could mean I am just trying to be a friend
Even if that won't happen
It could mean anything
But to me
Its just a four letter word
Baby has many meanings
It could mean that you gave me a...
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