Submissions by GothicQueen666 (Viviaan)
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poet Introduction
I love writing poetry and I have been trying to hone in my fiction writing skills. I appreciate honest critique and try my best to gett better with each passing day
I Guessed
I guessed it was time
For things to end
I can't believe
I am saying this
But I thought I had to go
I guessed I would be okay
Taking things one by one
But I wasn't
That I always knew
Nothing would be the same
I guess I couldn't take it
When I lost my way
I thought I was strong
But in your eyes
I was just a child
I guess I was right
To take this gun
And pull the trigger
As my last escape
From the world today...
For things to end
I can't believe
I am saying this
But I thought I had to go
I guessed I would be okay
Taking things one by one
But I wasn't
That I always knew
Nothing would be the same
I guess I couldn't take it
When I lost my way
I thought I was strong
But in your eyes
I was just a child
I guess I was right
To take this gun
And pull the trigger
As my last escape
From the world today...
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I am...
I am a red rose,
The world around me
Is cold and dark,
My family has disappeared
Leaving me alone in this world,
I am slowly wilting
Slowly dying,
Soon they too
Will forget me,
As all the rest have
I will no longer be accepted,
I am lost
For they left me here
On the side of the road,
For I am only
A fleeting memory...
The world around me
Is cold and dark,
My family has disappeared
Leaving me alone in this world,
I am slowly wilting
Slowly dying,
Soon they too
Will forget me,
As all the rest have
I will no longer be accepted,
I am lost
For they left me here
On the side of the road,
For I am only
A fleeting memory...
622 reads
1 Comment
What Is Love?
A simple feeling?
A crazy word?
No, It is much more
It is the air,
Which we survive on
It is the sun,
Which lights our paths
It is the moon,
Which controls the tides
And it is life,
Which dwells upon the Earth
A crazy word?
No, It is much more
It is the air,
Which we survive on
It is the sun,
Which lights our paths
It is the moon,
Which controls the tides
And it is life,
Which dwells upon the Earth
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1 Comment
The Feelings Inside V.2
The pain won’t magically disappear
There isn’t a possibility,
Of happiness coming near
I don’t want to smile,
Just let me
Be dead for awhile,
If you want to talk
Go ahead and try
But all you’re going to do
Is make me cry,
I’m dead right now
I really am not sure how,
All I know is that what I feel
Is honestly completely real,
You may not think so
But I certainly know…
There isn’t a possibility,
Of happiness coming near
I don’t want to smile,
Just let me
Be dead for awhile,
If you want to talk
Go ahead and try
But all you’re going to do
Is make me cry,
I’m dead right now
I really am not sure how,
All I know is that what I feel
Is honestly completely real,
You may not think so
But I certainly know…
671 reads
3 Comments
A Special Word
A special word for you and me,
A special bond one can not see,
It wraps us up in its cocoon,
And holds us fiercely in its womb.
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold,
Gently nesting us in its fold,
Like silken thread holds us fast,
Bonds like this are meant to last.
And though at times a thread may break,
A new one forms in its wake,
To bind us closer and keep us strong,
A special world where we belong
A special bond one can not see,
It wraps us up in its cocoon,
And holds us fiercely in its womb.
Its fingers spread like fine spun gold,
Gently nesting us in its fold,
Like silken thread holds us fast,
Bonds like this are meant to last.
And though at times a thread may break,
A new one forms in its wake,
To bind us closer and keep us strong,
A special world where we belong
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2 Comments
That Smile
That smile you put
On my face
Is real
And never out of place
When it comes time
For tears to fly
You put
That smile back where it belongs
You are
My number one
And my true love
Because that smile
Only comes when I'm with you
Thank you
For that smile
On my face
Is real
And never out of place
When it comes time
For tears to fly
You put
That smile back where it belongs
You are
My number one
And my true love
Because that smile
Only comes when I'm with you
Thank you
For that smile
905 reads
4 Comments
Creatures of Fire
We swan-dive into the volcano, burning;
We’re creatures of the fire,
Mingled male and female, yearning
For the heat, the sweet explosion of desire.
I splash into the pleasure, all consuming;
I’m joyfully insane,
My passion for you deep, and fully blooming;
Long after, sweet warm flickers still remain.
You make my body sizzle with your kisses,
And yet there’s so much more;
My heart is kindled, too; It knows what bliss is,
This closeness that I’ve never felt before.
My body and my heart belong to you;
I’m peaceful and complete.
I see more...
We’re creatures of the fire,
Mingled male and female, yearning
For the heat, the sweet explosion of desire.
I splash into the pleasure, all consuming;
I’m joyfully insane,
My passion for you deep, and fully blooming;
Long after, sweet warm flickers still remain.
You make my body sizzle with your kisses,
And yet there’s so much more;
My heart is kindled, too; It knows what bliss is,
This closeness that I’ve never felt before.
My body and my heart belong to you;
I’m peaceful and complete.
I see more...
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1 Comment
The Death Inside
The pain won’t magically disappear,
There isn’t a possibility of happiness coming near,
I don’t want to smile,
Just let me be dead for awhile,
If you want to talk go ahead and try,
But all you’re going to do is make me cry,
I’m dead right now,
I really am not sure how,
All I know is that what I feel,
Is honestly completely real,
You may not think so,
But I certainly know…
There isn’t a possibility of happiness coming near,
I don’t want to smile,
Just let me be dead for awhile,
If you want to talk go ahead and try,
But all you’re going to do is make me cry,
I’m dead right now,
I really am not sure how,
All I know is that what I feel,
Is honestly completely real,
You may not think so,
But I certainly know…
621 reads
2 Comments
Forgetful Love
Don’t forget me
Or the feelings that could be,
If today I was to die
To the heavens I hope to fly,
My dear please know
That I’m not afraid to go,
Please don’t ever be sad
For when I’m gone I’ll be glad,
Please remind me to tell you
I love you too…
Or the feelings that could be,
If today I was to die
To the heavens I hope to fly,
My dear please know
That I’m not afraid to go,
Please don’t ever be sad
For when I’m gone I’ll be glad,
Please remind me to tell you
I love you too…
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Good Bye
I thought you loved me.
But you never did.
I was just a nobody.
I was just some kid.
You just used me.
I was just a tool.
And after you were done.
You called me a fool.
I loved you a lot.
I gave you my heart.
But you took it in your hands
And tore it apart.
So I write this poem,
As my letter
I was saying goodbye.
I thought it was all for the better.
So I take a deep breathe
And take this gun.
I point it at my head,
My life is almost done.
Just as I pull the trigger, you find me.
I fall to the ground with a...
But you never did.
I was just a nobody.
I was just some kid.
You just used me.
I was just a tool.
And after you were done.
You called me a fool.
I loved you a lot.
I gave you my heart.
But you took it in your hands
And tore it apart.
So I write this poem,
As my letter
I was saying goodbye.
I thought it was all for the better.
So I take a deep breathe
And take this gun.
I point it at my head,
My life is almost done.
Just as I pull the trigger, you find me.
I fall to the ground with a...
776 reads
3 Comments
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