Observational Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Poetry about life, society and the natural world
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SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 3:52pm
15th Dec 2024 3:52pm
The Softness Of My Sacred Hebrew Lineage
Are you the one who has invaded my dreams, I am in between the gray area of my existence
Your voice is carrying me through a portal and the gravity is strong in its persistence
My love, before, you can leave the realm of your earth
You must leave the scrolls your words in the wind, before you join me in a divine rebirth
Who are you, I can hear your voice
Yet, I cannot see you by choice
I am the forgotten time in your heart
The light, the dark
Heaven, Earth, the tides who comfort the high seas
My...
Your voice is carrying me through a portal and the gravity is strong in its persistence
My love, before, you can leave the realm of your earth
You must leave the scrolls your words in the wind, before you join me in a divine rebirth
Who are you, I can hear your voice
Yet, I cannot see you by choice
I am the forgotten time in your heart
The light, the dark
Heaven, Earth, the tides who comfort the high seas
My...
#philosophical
#rebirth
#spiritual
#water
#wisdom
291 reads
3 Comments
Villev
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 1:16pm
15th Dec 2024 1:16pm
Facade
In a world so jaded
By sadness and sorrow dominated
The best of the worst come masquerading
Mini material successes celebrating
All the while
The limelight is slowly fading
.
By sadness and sorrow dominated
The best of the worst come masquerading
Mini material successes celebrating
All the while
The limelight is slowly fading
.
#PopCulture
28 reads
0 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 9:55am
15th Dec 2024 9:55am
Bloody Type O
If tears were made of blood mother earth would be stained red.
#sadness
46 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 1:52am
15th Dec 2024 1:52am
A Thousand Years From Forever (Four)
A Queen In Exile
Scotland
1700
My Ladies-In-Waiting, I would like to know why I am having such illicit thoughts of a faceless man, who invades my slumbered dreams
I am lost in this majestic fortress a floating oasis of desired streams
His voice beckons me though a fog of forgotten time
A kaleidoscope I cannot place, the windmills of his heart were mine
How could that be, this is impossible, my Sire, went down in battle, his voice remains in rest, at best
Unto my monarch the softness of my skin is shrouded in hart upon...
Scotland
1700
My Ladies-In-Waiting, I would like to know why I am having such illicit thoughts of a faceless man, who invades my slumbered dreams
I am lost in this majestic fortress a floating oasis of desired streams
His voice beckons me though a fog of forgotten time
A kaleidoscope I cannot place, the windmills of his heart were mine
How could that be, this is impossible, my Sire, went down in battle, his voice remains in rest, at best
Unto my monarch the softness of my skin is shrouded in hart upon...
#mythology
#water
246 reads
5 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 1:50pm
14th Dec 2024 1:50pm
Dark's Psychosis
Torrents of insanity, narcissistic schizophrenia
in the dark's psychosis of self-destruction, now
all turn to shit because they know who I am,
another rambling fool without gage in a river
of bones, with shoes filled with stones, lost
and forgotten, devoured of soul in the mind's
chaos, like a pale horse in the dark's psychosis
preoccupied with, "The House that Jack Built."
in the dark's psychosis of self-destruction, now
all turn to shit because they know who I am,
another rambling fool without gage in a river
of bones, with shoes filled with stones, lost
and forgotten, devoured of soul in the mind's
chaos, like a pale horse in the dark's psychosis
preoccupied with, "The House that Jack Built."
#greed
#hypocrisy
#lies #manipulation
#lies #manipulation
81 reads
2 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 8:16am
14th Dec 2024 8:16am
the only solution to the mess you made is to blow everything up
1. This is our first Christmas without you
I keep thinking it's strange
I don't have to buy you snacks
this year
because what else do you buy
the man that doesn't need anything?
2. There's a division so wide
we'll never conquer it
and so far I'm the only one
thinking about this rift you cultivated
and trying to figure out
why it was easier for you
to put knives in your children's hands
and have them fight each other
for your love
rather than have enough love to give
3. I always thought my...
I keep thinking it's strange
I don't have to buy you snacks
this year
because what else do you buy
the man that doesn't need anything?
2. There's a division so wide
we'll never conquer it
and so far I'm the only one
thinking about this rift you cultivated
and trying to figure out
why it was easier for you
to put knives in your children's hands
and have them fight each other
for your love
rather than have enough love to give
3. I always thought my...
#betrayal
#family
#heartbroken
66 reads
5 Comments
rksingh
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 6:27am
14th Dec 2024 6:27am
Fog
wintry morning sun
lost in a layer of fog
shells of broken eggs
--R K Singh
lost in a layer of fog
shells of broken eggs
--R K Singh
#morning
#winter
33 reads
0 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 5:39am
14th Dec 2024 5:39am
Remembering First
This spell of the world.
Compelling unfurl.
Intelligible.
Non-sensical curse.
What's selling assures.
Your melody mirth.
A skeleton dirge.
Where dwelling meets earth.
Ephemeral hearse.
Exemplary urn.
Heretical church.
Lest hellion rebirth.
Their swelling occurs.
Such leavening slurs.
To tell me disturbs.
Unhealthy disperse.
Our well is but dirt.
Extremity thirst.
Suggestible surge.
Indelible burn.
Dependency searched.
Unhelpfully hurt. ...
Compelling unfurl.
Intelligible.
Non-sensical curse.
What's selling assures.
Your melody mirth.
A skeleton dirge.
Where dwelling meets earth.
Ephemeral hearse.
Exemplary urn.
Heretical church.
Lest hellion rebirth.
Their swelling occurs.
Such leavening slurs.
To tell me disturbs.
Unhealthy disperse.
Our well is but dirt.
Extremity thirst.
Suggestible surge.
Indelible burn.
Dependency searched.
Unhelpfully hurt. ...
#humankind
#metaphor
#morality
#rhyming
#spiritual
46 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 2:21am
14th Dec 2024 2:21am
A Thousand Years From Forever (Three)
An Aqua Palace Fit For Royal
Waterloo Grand Palace The Stairway To Paradise
Allow me to close my eyes and just dine in the liberties of mind
Sit down, relax, I need to softly inhale, exhale, and can I include you in my whoosh moment as you become intoxicated in my cascade of spherical sublime
Once upon a long time ago
There was a beautiful Queen, who has divine powers as she astral traveled through portals to and fro
On her many sacred adventures she became smitten by many Kings
Some loved her...
Waterloo Grand Palace The Stairway To Paradise
Allow me to close my eyes and just dine in the liberties of mind
Sit down, relax, I need to softly inhale, exhale, and can I include you in my whoosh moment as you become intoxicated in my cascade of spherical sublime
Once upon a long time ago
There was a beautiful Queen, who has divine powers as she astral traveled through portals to and fro
On her many sacred adventures she became smitten by many Kings
Some loved her...
#mythology
#water
226 reads
4 Comments
Villev
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 1:39am
14th Dec 2024 1:39am
Harvest Feast
In the hearts and minds of men
The lasting memories of time well spent
The harvest has been gathered
Soon all shall feast once more again
The lasting memories of time well spent
The harvest has been gathered
Soon all shall feast once more again
#fall
34 reads
1 Comment
buckaduck
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 7:45pm
13th Dec 2024 7:45pm
Palimpsest
Echoes of old stone-
Blood, quills, the stars all entwine.
A child's voice ascends.
Blood, quills, the stars all entwine.
A child's voice ascends.
#culture
#haiku
#hope
#humankind
#tradition
49 reads
1 Comment
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 6:51pm
13th Dec 2024 6:51pm
TOE
Great minds can explain the large and small scale structure of the universe through general relativity and quantum theory.
But they have tried in vain to bring both together under one banner The Unified Theory of Everything .
Einstein, Schrodinger, Newton,Curie all have failed but backdeckbenny with the IQ of a cabbage leaf has solved the problem.
My Unified Theory of Everything posits that everything in the universe is connected,changeable and impermanent until entropy and death arrive.After that, connectivity remains but everything now becomes permanent and...
But they have tried in vain to bring both together under one banner The Unified Theory of Everything .
Einstein, Schrodinger, Newton,Curie all have failed but backdeckbenny with the IQ of a cabbage leaf has solved the problem.
My Unified Theory of Everything posits that everything in the universe is connected,changeable and impermanent until entropy and death arrive.After that, connectivity remains but everything now becomes permanent and...
#universe
37 reads
3 Comments
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