Observational Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
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Poetry about life, society and the natural world
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SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 9:14pm
19th Dec 2024 9:14pm
Shh.. Just Listen To The Sandstorm Of My Lineage’s Peace
I define my soft caress unto the gentle wind
Close my eyes, traveling to a land long before the creation of sin
I hear the hooves of chariots as man stand in Allah’s image
Oh, greatness of thou Pyramids, Pharaohs calling within another dimension
The Nile, I bathed the heritage of my melanin in the bosom of its depth
The Ankh, my amulet adorned proudly around my ancestor’s neck
I breathed the air, so laden of roses,...
Close my eyes, traveling to a land long before the creation of sin
I hear the hooves of chariots as man stand in Allah’s image
Oh, greatness of thou Pyramids, Pharaohs calling within another dimension
The Nile, I bathed the heritage of my melanin in the bosom of its depth
The Ankh, my amulet adorned proudly around my ancestor’s neck
I breathed the air, so laden of roses,...
#culture
#moon
#sun
#tradition
#water
189 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 4:02pm
19th Dec 2024 4:02pm
A Thousand Years From Forever (Six)
Sedation In Animation
Waterloo
Below Sea Level
The Dragon Kingdom
My Sire, it has been brought to your First Knightman’s attention
And I would like you to hear it from me before any other Kingdom mention
No one is saying how this…
Everyone is labeling it a cocoon that has come to curse or sanctify waters of the Waterloo as one would hope, where we all have come to wish
This object that was found near the borders of the Waterloo days ago from what I could understand
The official documented words from the...
Waterloo
Below Sea Level
The Dragon Kingdom
My Sire, it has been brought to your First Knightman’s attention
And I would like you to hear it from me before any other Kingdom mention
No one is saying how this…
Everyone is labeling it a cocoon that has come to curse or sanctify waters of the Waterloo as one would hope, where we all have come to wish
This object that was found near the borders of the Waterloo days ago from what I could understand
The official documented words from the...
#mythology
#water
168 reads
2 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 4:03am
19th Dec 2024 4:03am
Children of the Witch
Generational worship
Paid idolatrous ode
To mystery dreams stolen
From faring dragon history
Behind secrecy curtains
Passes on vain imagination
Performance for roses
On stage confidence
Ironic hypocrites
Acting lustful inquiry
Hissing deceitful
Forked tongue bewilders
Slithering in counterfeit vision
Winding selfish
Get rather than give
Appeases oneself fulfilled
As snakes parent
Supposed fame and fate
In unraveling penalty due
To suddenly strike
Raised on cloud...
Paid idolatrous ode
To mystery dreams stolen
From faring dragon history
Behind secrecy curtains
Passes on vain imagination
Performance for roses
On stage confidence
Ironic hypocrites
Acting lustful inquiry
Hissing deceitful
Forked tongue bewilders
Slithering in counterfeit vision
Winding selfish
Get rather than give
Appeases oneself fulfilled
As snakes parent
Supposed fame and fate
In unraveling penalty due
To suddenly strike
Raised on cloud...
#God
#humankind
#morality
#spiritual
#metaphor
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missjem56
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 6:09pm
17th Dec 2024 6:09pm
The Marmite Monster
The Marmite monster
Sometimes leaves
Their sticky footprints
In my hair!
And sometimes
Seemingly everywhere!
But where i like
This Marmite monster most
Is when he's crept
Across my toast!
by Jemia
Sometimes leaves
Their sticky footprints
In my hair!
And sometimes
Seemingly everywhere!
But where i like
This Marmite monster most
Is when he's crept
Across my toast!
by Jemia
#food
#funny
#monsters #satirical
#monsters #satirical
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SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 4:57pm
17th Dec 2024 4:57pm
A Thousand Years From Forever (Five)
The Invasion
Waterloo
Below Sea Level
Throne Room
Council Meeting
Gentlemen in attendance we have been over this time after time
Each Kingdom will pay homage to protect our portals to ensure no Dolphins or any aquatic life are not netted on a fishermen’s casting line
Those mortal manmade vessels who have searched for centuries to chisel into this sacred biosphere
No C.E.R.N governs my abyss, and we walk upright as...
Waterloo
Below Sea Level
Throne Room
Council Meeting
Gentlemen in attendance we have been over this time after time
Each Kingdom will pay homage to protect our portals to ensure no Dolphins or any aquatic life are not netted on a fishermen’s casting line
Those mortal manmade vessels who have searched for centuries to chisel into this sacred biosphere
No C.E.R.N governs my abyss, and we walk upright as...
#mythology
#water
256 reads
2 Comments
oskar
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 10:08am
17th Dec 2024 10:08am
the warped tree (edited)
A Warped Tree
Today, when not arguing with Walter the Jew on Facebook
the ambiance in the house was surprisingly calm since
I got a key to my study in peace to read my latest collection
and found, at times, the poems had an internal rhyme and
were little stories
The pity is that I have to write without a publisher
can't afford to hire one; those I dare to ask run a thousand miles
one of them, a poor man, is a lecturer at Udevalla
Last year, I visited a crooked tree so shy its roots curled
in bashfulness, and its leaves took an autumnal color ...
Today, when not arguing with Walter the Jew on Facebook
the ambiance in the house was surprisingly calm since
I got a key to my study in peace to read my latest collection
and found, at times, the poems had an internal rhyme and
were little stories
The pity is that I have to write without a publisher
can't afford to hire one; those I dare to ask run a thousand miles
one of them, a poor man, is a lecturer at Udevalla
Last year, I visited a crooked tree so shy its roots curled
in bashfulness, and its leaves took an autumnal color ...
#courage
#emotions
#forgiveness
#love
#motivational
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msbellepoetry43
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 5:03pm
16th Dec 2024 5:03pm
It's Just a Hiccup
It's just a SMALL HICCUP
If it bothers you then
Drink some water or
hold your BREATH,
Fix the ERROR,
after that
Just REST,
Don't let the SITUATION
bring you on DOWN,
Work with the GLITCHES and
then MANEUVER on AROUND.
It just a SMALL MISHAP and
it can be FIXED,
It not a BIG DEAL
So go on and HANDLE IT.
It's just a LITTLE HICCUP,
Don't get your
PANTIES in a BUNCH,
It'll work out SOMEHOW,
I'm just giving
you a HUNCH,
When things
GO SIDEWAYS,
or EVEN DOWNHILL, ...
If it bothers you then
Drink some water or
hold your BREATH,
Fix the ERROR,
after that
Just REST,
Don't let the SITUATION
bring you on DOWN,
Work with the GLITCHES and
then MANEUVER on AROUND.
It just a SMALL MISHAP and
it can be FIXED,
It not a BIG DEAL
So go on and HANDLE IT.
It's just a LITTLE HICCUP,
Don't get your
PANTIES in a BUNCH,
It'll work out SOMEHOW,
I'm just giving
you a HUNCH,
When things
GO SIDEWAYS,
or EVEN DOWNHILL, ...
#hope
#motivational
#uplifting
52 reads
2 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 2:35pm
16th Dec 2024 2:35pm
Seedless Soul
Narcissistic porcelain of seedless soul
lonely and sleeveless without a heart
on stormy nights echoing Shakespeare
without shadows, just flames of duress
of unconscious mind contrarious insanity
blinded from the sight of self's endless
epiphany's face in the crowd
lonely and sleeveless without a heart
on stormy nights echoing Shakespeare
without shadows, just flames of duress
of unconscious mind contrarious insanity
blinded from the sight of self's endless
epiphany's face in the crowd
#corruption
#deception
#hypocrisy #manipulation
#hypocrisy #manipulation
70 reads
2 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 7:56pm
15th Dec 2024 7:56pm
Good Boy
Time, if it even exists, does so for no other creature than man.
It's simply a construct, a convention required to keep our complex civilisation running smoothly.
What would life be like without the bullying presence of time?
I'm glad you asked?
Let me introduce my dog.
Here Trumpy, come boy , sit , good boy.
I've got a question to ask you.One woof means yes,two means no.OK you got it.
Ok boy here goes.
Do you know what time it is?
Woof woof
I thought that's what you'd say.Lets go for a walk Trumpy. ...
It's simply a construct, a convention required to keep our complex civilisation running smoothly.
What would life be like without the bullying presence of time?
I'm glad you asked?
Let me introduce my dog.
Here Trumpy, come boy , sit , good boy.
I've got a question to ask you.One woof means yes,two means no.OK you got it.
Ok boy here goes.
Do you know what time it is?
Woof woof
I thought that's what you'd say.Lets go for a walk Trumpy. ...
#dogs
56 reads
6 Comments
msbellepoetry43
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 5:13pm
15th Dec 2024 5:13pm
ABRACADABRA
Abracadabra,
Hocus-pocus,
Vanish into thin air and
out of my focus.
You were the cause of all
of my troubles,
dissappear now and
on the double.
I'm no sorrocer but
one, two, three,
Just a wave of my wand, and
you will no longer Be,
VANQUISH, DEMOLISH and
GO FAR AWAY,
MY WORRIES, MY TROUBLES
will not see
the LIGHT OF DAY!!!!
ABRACADABRA
I VANQUISH
You
NOW!!!
THE NEGATIVE
DISSIPATES and
From this
I SMILE!!!!!
B.R.
Date: 12/14/2024
Hocus-pocus,
Vanish into thin air and
out of my focus.
You were the cause of all
of my troubles,
dissappear now and
on the double.
I'm no sorrocer but
one, two, three,
Just a wave of my wand, and
you will no longer Be,
VANQUISH, DEMOLISH and
GO FAR AWAY,
MY WORRIES, MY TROUBLES
will not see
the LIGHT OF DAY!!!!
ABRACADABRA
I VANQUISH
You
NOW!!!
THE NEGATIVE
DISSIPATES and
From this
I SMILE!!!!!
B.R.
Date: 12/14/2024
#happiness
#motivational
#MyInspiration #uplifting
#MyInspiration #uplifting
38 reads
3 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 3:52pm
15th Dec 2024 3:52pm
The Softness Of My Sacred Hebrew Lineage
Are you the one who has invaded my dreams, I am in between the gray area of my existence
Your voice is carrying me through a portal and the gravity is strong in its persistence
My love, before, you can leave the realm of your earth
You must leave the scrolls your words in the wind, before you join me in a divine rebirth
Who are you, I can hear your voice
Yet, I cannot see you by choice
I am the forgotten time in your heart
The light, the dark
Heaven, Earth, the tides who comfort the high seas
My...
Your voice is carrying me through a portal and the gravity is strong in its persistence
My love, before, you can leave the realm of your earth
You must leave the scrolls your words in the wind, before you join me in a divine rebirth
Who are you, I can hear your voice
Yet, I cannot see you by choice
I am the forgotten time in your heart
The light, the dark
Heaven, Earth, the tides who comfort the high seas
My...
#philosophical
#rebirth
#spiritual
#water
#wisdom
289 reads
3 Comments
Villev
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 1:16pm
15th Dec 2024 1:16pm
Facade
In a world so jaded
By sadness and sorrow dominated
The best of the worst come masquerading
Mini material successes celebrating
All the while
The limelight is slowly fading
.
By sadness and sorrow dominated
The best of the worst come masquerading
Mini material successes celebrating
All the while
The limelight is slowly fading
.
#PopCulture
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