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Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
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Deeper Things

Each first light, misty  
opportunity disperses
our sleep into routine—
unveils the art of kaizen
 
We strive for perfection  
in the everyday mundane—
brewing a pot of tea;  
clearing our sacred space
 
asking not that others change
to suit our needs;  
but, that we walk more patiently
understanding deeper things  
~
Written by Ahavati (Tams)
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Ahavati said:

This is stunning
Words cannot describe the warm feeling I get from this
Thank you
Extra thanks I know you had a long day

LunaGreyhawk
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The Braid

kumihimo
does not become;
rather, is created
in achingly slow
turns of hand;
silken strands
connect the web
of practice

muscle memory,
leaning forward
into Kaizen
remembers
each placement
across the marudai

from this day,
this moment
to the next one,
where my fingers
find their positions,
with new proficiency
Written by LunaGreyhawk
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Valeriyabeyond
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Oct. 2, 2020

Ahavati
Tams
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O o . ( one of my favorite words )

Sonder (Acrostic)

Shakespearean Sonnet, 116, teach
Of the steadfast vow in Love; O, No!  
None wavering impediment occur amid    
Darkest hour of hope. Sickle cannot deter  
Each particle of Star; Time cannot prevent  
Rebirth of who we are.  
~    

poet Anonymous

Ahavati said:O o . ( one of my favorite words )

Sonder (Acrostic)


Mad genius at work here. I would have never thought to go acrostic. And it's got rhyme in it!

Ahavati
Tams
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JohnnyBlaze said:

Mad genius at work here. I would have never thought to go acrostic. And it's got rhyme in it!

Valeriyabeyond
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Anarchitect said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/398569-danielson-quit-karate-kidding-around/


Very creative Anarchitect
Made me go back,  for a second
look.  huh?  Hmm...
Thank you

Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd May 2020
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The Braid

kumihimo
does not become;
rather, is created
in achingly slow
turns of hand;
silken strands
connect the web
of practice

muscle memory,
leaning forward
into Kaizen
remembers
each placement
across the marudai

from this day,
this moment
to the next one,
where my fingers
find their positions,
with new proficiency
Written by LunaGreyhawk
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LunaGreyhawk said:


Luna
Such beauty one of the loveliest poems I have read in a while
Thank you V

Valeriyabeyond
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Oct. 3, 2020


Having a hard time today
Tried to write something
Nothing felt right
Yesterday Chloe my mama kitty was taken from us by a Mountain Lion
She was 1.5 yrs.old
Her brother is calling her and waiting by the door
I may not be around much today
Thanks for listening

Bluevelvete
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Forum Posts: 2349

Valeriyabeyond said:Oct. 3, 2020


Having a hard time today
Tried to write something
Nothing felt right
Yesterday Chloe my mama kitty was taken from us by a Mountain Lion
She was 1.5 yrs.old
Her brother is calling her and waiting by the door
I may not be around much today
Thanks for listening


((hugs))
Here when / if you need
Thinking of you...
💜 💜


Valeriyabeyond
Dhyana
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Bluevelvete said:

((hugs))
Here when / if you need
Thinking of you...
💜 💜



Thank you
Living on a small ranch with free range critters including cats I expect ito lose them and claim to not get too attached
It's not true how can you not?

poet Anonymous

Valeriyabeyond said:Oct. 3, 2020


Having a hard time today
Tried to write something
Nothing felt right
Yesterday Chloe my mama kitty was taken from us by a Mountain Lion
She was 1.5 yrs.old
Her brother is calling her and waiting by the door
I may not be around much today
Thanks for listening


Damn. Sorry to hear about your loss.

LunaGreyhawk
Dangerous Mind
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Valeriyabeyond said:Oct. 3, 2020


Having a hard time today
Tried to write something
Nothing felt right
Yesterday Chloe my mama kitty was taken from us by a Mountain Lion
She was 1.5 yrs.old
Her brother is calling her and waiting by the door
I may not be around much today
Thanks for listening


I’m so sorry, V.  Love and light to you 💜

Ahavati
Tams
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Forum Posts: 16868

Much Love, Val. Losing a member of the family ( and pets are ) is very difficult.  xo

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