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[ WotD ] Danielson, quit Karate kidding around!
You wax sonder
yet wax more offten
about winning
that shiny tropheee ...
Remember the lunging cobra
---Kaizen prepares one to be
wary of such inner coilings;
pride will take you down
quicker than any sweeping
of the leg
yet wax more offten
about winning
that shiny tropheee ...
Remember the lunging cobra
---Kaizen prepares one to be
wary of such inner coilings;
pride will take you down
quicker than any sweeping
of the leg
Published 2nd Oct 2020
| Edited 17th Jan 2022
Author's Note
for the thread "DU Word of the Day. Enter with Enthusiasm" @
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/speakeasy/read/11582/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/speakeasy/read/11582/
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2nd Oct 2020 6:32pm
2nd Oct 2020 6:37pm
"Bonzai, bitches" is nice and raw!
It has ferocity.
I think this poem could really be fleshed out,
and kick the shit out of Cobra Kai.
Throw your concept out there (like you've done),
then cultivate it, for Bonsai trees
take a lot of care and discipline.
Wax on. ...(don't just wax off.)
It has ferocity.
I think this poem could really be fleshed out,
and kick the shit out of Cobra Kai.
Throw your concept out there (like you've done),
then cultivate it, for Bonsai trees
take a lot of care and discipline.
Wax on. ...(don't just wax off.)
2nd Oct 2020 6:38pm
2nd Oct 2020 9:41pm
