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SEVEN DEADLY SINS
afriendoftina
Hendy
Forum Posts: 73
Hendy
Twisted Dreamer
5
Joined 21st Apr 2016 Forum Posts: 73
Poetry Contest Description
Personify one of the seven deadly sins and let us see inside their deadly minds!
As you must well know, there are seven deadly sins, (I recognise that the following are broad definitions and the precise interpretation of these may be open to debate):
LUST: Unbridled and intense sexual desire leading to fornication
WRATH: Uncontrolled anger or rage usually with desire for vengeance
SLOTH: Absence of interest or habitual disinclination to exertion or effort
GLUTTONY: Overindulgence or overconsumption of something to such an excess that it is wasteful
PRIDE: Corrupt selfishness or self-absorption with belief that one's whims and wants are above others
ENVY: Insatiable desire and resentful covetousness for the traits of possessions of others
GREED: Artificial desire and pursuance of material goods
Pick one of the seven deadly and express yourself - in the first person...bring your sin to LIFE.
Bonne chance mes amis!
xoxo
LUST: Unbridled and intense sexual desire leading to fornication
WRATH: Uncontrolled anger or rage usually with desire for vengeance
SLOTH: Absence of interest or habitual disinclination to exertion or effort
GLUTTONY: Overindulgence or overconsumption of something to such an excess that it is wasteful
PRIDE: Corrupt selfishness or self-absorption with belief that one's whims and wants are above others
ENVY: Insatiable desire and resentful covetousness for the traits of possessions of others
GREED: Artificial desire and pursuance of material goods
Pick one of the seven deadly and express yourself - in the first person...bring your sin to LIFE.
Bonne chance mes amis!
xoxo
jaspersilence
Forum Posts: 708
Fire of Insight
7
Joined 12th Dec 2012Forum Posts: 708
Riding a falling empire-
Steady on scattered matter-
All mine.
If a man should reach for my rubble-
I shall take his hand-
His life-
Barred in gold,and pressed tightly into diamond...
I'm carried to the sun reflecting water-to blend with the shimmer...
Steady on scattered matter-
All mine.
If a man should reach for my rubble-
I shall take his hand-
His life-
Barred in gold,and pressed tightly into diamond...
I'm carried to the sun reflecting water-to blend with the shimmer...
MotDi
ConcubinaSumisa
Joined 10th July 2016
Forum Posts: 14
ConcubinaSumisa
Twisted Dreamer
Forum Posts: 14
Harlot©💋
Tides of intuition eroding shores of inhibition, the slut in me rises to the occasion and apprehensions exit.
Behind weary eyes seduction strives and fear makes its presence known. Reproduction is introduced.
Implementing investments of coquettish violation.
Defile me.
Trysts of multiple infractions of fatal attractions.
Generous donations of a hooker.
Habitual.
Pretentious sex offenders.
Established mile high club members.
Wicked tongue provoking cherry plum to Kingdom CUM THY WILL BE DONE.
Lust inspired anthems of resurrection conversing odes of perseverance to my horny.
Reciting interpretations of amazing grace. Hadn’t I worn panties there would be a constant flow of honeysuckle trickling down the back of calf.
Stream spilling into subsequence.
Accumulating into puddles of circumstance & consequence.
Cold sweats on frequent trips to Zion.
Rubbing the same shoulders that I come to cry on.
I cloak you in fabric of hope.
My demons the designer.
The only way to cope is by draining my mimosa between sheets of Egyptian cotton. Body in auction.
A matrix of sexual predicament
Where integrity leaked.
Inside my tunnel of alluring femininity collateral peeked.
You make wrong feel so right.
I was proud to be your whore!
Tides of intuition eroding shores of inhibition, the slut in me rises to the occasion and apprehensions exit.
Behind weary eyes seduction strives and fear makes its presence known. Reproduction is introduced.
Implementing investments of coquettish violation.
Defile me.
Trysts of multiple infractions of fatal attractions.
Generous donations of a hooker.
Habitual.
Pretentious sex offenders.
Established mile high club members.
Wicked tongue provoking cherry plum to Kingdom CUM THY WILL BE DONE.
Lust inspired anthems of resurrection conversing odes of perseverance to my horny.
Reciting interpretations of amazing grace. Hadn’t I worn panties there would be a constant flow of honeysuckle trickling down the back of calf.
Stream spilling into subsequence.
Accumulating into puddles of circumstance & consequence.
Cold sweats on frequent trips to Zion.
Rubbing the same shoulders that I come to cry on.
I cloak you in fabric of hope.
My demons the designer.
The only way to cope is by draining my mimosa between sheets of Egyptian cotton. Body in auction.
A matrix of sexual predicament
Where integrity leaked.
Inside my tunnel of alluring femininity collateral peeked.
You make wrong feel so right.
I was proud to be your whore!
wishfulthinking
Joined 8th July 2016
Forum Posts: 10
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 10
The sloth consumes me
a little more each day
It whispers to me
I want you to stay with me forever
rest a bit you've worked so hard
let someone else take care of it
you've done it 4 times this week
your entitled to a rest
lets take a break
the couch is comfy isn't it
you should skip work tomorrow when is
the last you slept in
a week has passed since I've been out of bed
another comes to greet me
it whispers
eat your fill you deserve it
Another plate wont hurt
have another slice no one will know
might as well buy another box its on sale
as they sit on my shoulders in merriment
I slowly wither away....
a little more each day
It whispers to me
I want you to stay with me forever
rest a bit you've worked so hard
let someone else take care of it
you've done it 4 times this week
your entitled to a rest
lets take a break
the couch is comfy isn't it
you should skip work tomorrow when is
the last you slept in
a week has passed since I've been out of bed
another comes to greet me
it whispers
eat your fill you deserve it
Another plate wont hurt
have another slice no one will know
might as well buy another box its on sale
as they sit on my shoulders in merriment
I slowly wither away....
Anonymous
prisoner of gluttony
beans, beans and more beans
eat until you sleep
24 hour T.V
made the ghost turn and weep
stuck inside white walls
lusting after treats
fill up the tank with cola
soak up the sweat meats
the loss of independence
ushered in a killer
slowly clogging up the blob
corn syrup stomach filler
home became a prison
it then became a morgue
the glutton fetish killer came
from something sinister dot org
beans, beans and more beans
eat until you sleep
24 hour T.V
made the ghost turn and weep
stuck inside white walls
lusting after treats
fill up the tank with cola
soak up the sweat meats
the loss of independence
ushered in a killer
slowly clogging up the blob
corn syrup stomach filler
home became a prison
it then became a morgue
the glutton fetish killer came
from something sinister dot org
afriendoftina
Hendy
Forum Posts: 73
Hendy
Twisted Dreamer
5
Joined 21st Apr 2016 Forum Posts: 73
Not long to go...Excellent submissions so far.
Go on, challenge yourself - personify a sin and expose your soul....
Go on, challenge yourself - personify a sin and expose your soul....
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Forum Posts: 5134
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
154
Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
!!WRATH!!
I spread my arms wide o'er the earth
As I call my children hence near.
To give to me all that you're worth,
I tell you the time is now here!
I seek the revenge I deserve,
Already the movement's begun.
Don't dare fail me or loose your nerve,
Go forth, the four corners undone!
Away, and away to make haste,
In all of the land set the pyre.
Your pillars of flame to lay waste,
Mayhem!, bring to me my desire!
And now I can see of my wrath
The spread of unthinkable cost.
Of vengeance's unholy blood bath,
Of slaughter and innocents lost!
My minion. that's it, give me more,
The terror you spawn to their knees.
It's enough it's me you adore,
I'll never reward you your deeds!
I spread my arms wide o'er the earth
As I call my children hence near.
To give to me all that you're worth,
I tell you the time is now here!
I seek the revenge I deserve,
Already the movement's begun.
Don't dare fail me or loose your nerve,
Go forth, the four corners undone!
Away, and away to make haste,
In all of the land set the pyre.
Your pillars of flame to lay waste,
Mayhem!, bring to me my desire!
And now I can see of my wrath
The spread of unthinkable cost.
Of vengeance's unholy blood bath,
Of slaughter and innocents lost!
My minion. that's it, give me more,
The terror you spawn to their knees.
It's enough it's me you adore,
I'll never reward you your deeds!
gazellemon
Bradley J
Forum Posts: 372
Bradley J
Fire of Insight
6
Joined 6th Mar 2014Forum Posts: 372
Lust
this woman is the shit,
So i pull out my dick,
and she with it,
Big titted,
Gets to lickin,
Swallow when I finish,
Tells me it's delicious,
I ask is you religious?
you ain't like the other bitches,
Consent is a given,
She knows I'm not kiddin',
So orgasms be the mission,
And she not quitin',
Sailin' with the seamen,
For real man, the head of a genius,
And when I'm peakin', shes not speakin',
Just leaking,
Watching me screamin',
My eyes are seepin',
Had me believin' the feelin'
That I would never be leaving,
Dome has me dreamin',
Searching for some meaning,
Between the sheets this evening,
In the middle of the night to no surprise,
Look under the covers and see her eyes,
But can't see my dick,
She Swallowed every inch of it again!
Bitch if you want me to keep my erection,
Call up a friend,
That will bend over for Benjamins,
A freak lesbian,
That'll smile when I send cum in her direction,
And I got no discretion,
But oh my sexual obsessions,
Put a bend in 'er leg,
She sees my aggression,
I'll Suspend the end,
Have her begging for it no question,
Sexual questing,
But When des nuts get to bustin',
No discussion,
Just cum-cusions,
So is she my lover because I fucked her?
Or is she just another bitch on my bucket list?
Fat ass and nice tits,
What an accomplishment,
I took all she could give,
Now she walks away with a limp.
this woman is the shit,
So i pull out my dick,
and she with it,
Big titted,
Gets to lickin,
Swallow when I finish,
Tells me it's delicious,
I ask is you religious?
you ain't like the other bitches,
Consent is a given,
She knows I'm not kiddin',
So orgasms be the mission,
And she not quitin',
Sailin' with the seamen,
For real man, the head of a genius,
And when I'm peakin', shes not speakin',
Just leaking,
Watching me screamin',
My eyes are seepin',
Had me believin' the feelin'
That I would never be leaving,
Dome has me dreamin',
Searching for some meaning,
Between the sheets this evening,
In the middle of the night to no surprise,
Look under the covers and see her eyes,
But can't see my dick,
She Swallowed every inch of it again!
Bitch if you want me to keep my erection,
Call up a friend,
That will bend over for Benjamins,
A freak lesbian,
That'll smile when I send cum in her direction,
And I got no discretion,
But oh my sexual obsessions,
Put a bend in 'er leg,
She sees my aggression,
I'll Suspend the end,
Have her begging for it no question,
Sexual questing,
But When des nuts get to bustin',
No discussion,
Just cum-cusions,
So is she my lover because I fucked her?
Or is she just another bitch on my bucket list?
Fat ass and nice tits,
What an accomplishment,
I took all she could give,
Now she walks away with a limp.
ScarlettA
Scarlett_A
Forum Posts: 24
Scarlett_A
Thought Provoker
5
Joined 2nd May 2014Forum Posts: 24
8th Deadly Sin
you grazed my lips
a sex crazed kiss
and felt my wrath
that you call bliss
took me all in
more than you need
left none to share
obsessed with greed
kept you in bed
all day and night
a sloth, a haze
that you won’t fight
you tote me through
each place in stride
hope they all see
me, you with pride
longingly watch
from far away
lust after me
beg me to stay
can’t get enough
ingesting still
glutton’s surpass
far past their fill
now, I’m in love
with someone new
you envy him
with all you do
commit to these
not just seven
for I’m the eighth
deadliest sin
you grazed my lips
a sex crazed kiss
and felt my wrath
that you call bliss
took me all in
more than you need
left none to share
obsessed with greed
kept you in bed
all day and night
a sloth, a haze
that you won’t fight
you tote me through
each place in stride
hope they all see
me, you with pride
longingly watch
from far away
lust after me
beg me to stay
can’t get enough
ingesting still
glutton’s surpass
far past their fill
now, I’m in love
with someone new
you envy him
with all you do
commit to these
not just seven
for I’m the eighth
deadliest sin
OxyMoronicMe
G.L.
Forum Posts: 1470
G.L.
Dangerous Mind
24
Joined 15th Feb 2016Forum Posts: 1470
I can't choose one
I just got to have them all
Greed is over and above
So here it is
A repost of...
My Lucifer
You're always there never leaving me
Even at times of gore or glory
Like a second voice whispering heart's desire
Like a nemesis challenging gracious hope
Lucifer, your presence was never absent.
Your darkness so tempting
Seducing the light, touching skin to skin
Like a sweet tooth craving hot fudge
Like a vice, addicting and compelling
Lucifer, your existence knows no resistance
Hell or heaven, you offer both
Cloud nine on earth with see thru bed
We know gravity would pull us down
Yet, for a time we want to fly high above the ground.
Lucifer, your offering defies good judgement
My Lucifer, your Lucifer
Disguised as delicious apple
Hiding the poison, deathly potent
He resides in all of us
In a sand castle within our soul
Sin personified, pleasure and pain alike
Gluttony, Envy, Sloth, Wrath
Avarice, Lust or Pride
Feel his touch, bask in his essence
More than a lover, he is my Lucifer
Our Lucifer... Our Sin...
Salvation is calling
God help us all.
I just got to have them all
Greed is over and above
So here it is
A repost of...
My Lucifer
You're always there never leaving me
Even at times of gore or glory
Like a second voice whispering heart's desire
Like a nemesis challenging gracious hope
Lucifer, your presence was never absent.
Your darkness so tempting
Seducing the light, touching skin to skin
Like a sweet tooth craving hot fudge
Like a vice, addicting and compelling
Lucifer, your existence knows no resistance
Hell or heaven, you offer both
Cloud nine on earth with see thru bed
We know gravity would pull us down
Yet, for a time we want to fly high above the ground.
Lucifer, your offering defies good judgement
My Lucifer, your Lucifer
Disguised as delicious apple
Hiding the poison, deathly potent
He resides in all of us
In a sand castle within our soul
Sin personified, pleasure and pain alike
Gluttony, Envy, Sloth, Wrath
Avarice, Lust or Pride
Feel his touch, bask in his essence
More than a lover, he is my Lucifer
Our Lucifer... Our Sin...
Salvation is calling
God help us all.
dejure
vick
Forum Posts: 2880
vick
Dangerous Mind
29
Joined 17th Aug 2015Forum Posts: 2880
the SLOTH
I woke up to the alarm
banging in my ears
still I was wondering
what's the word
ten letters - red state
snoozed it again
for another ten more
but for what?
I should've turned it off
am not gonna go to work
and today is Wednesday
fifty two missed calls
thirteen messages
ninety nine plus on whatsapp
two roaches came out
from the pizza box
but what was that word
seventeen across - red state?
ten letters
my neck stiffed
may be because of the couch
my cheek is wet with sweat
laying on the leather
actually there are four roaches
did I really leave a piece in the box?
well I can't reach the table
whats that poking under my tummy?
oh the remote...
lets turn on the television
what was that word
ten letters, red state?
oh fuck,
where's the paper?
damn!
I used it to sponge the floor
there it is kinda stuck
I think the crossword page is safe
have to get up to find it though
I will wait a little more
till I get a nature call
dont wanna get up
just to pick up the paper
dont wanna waste my energy
throw the pizza box, clean the floor, take a bath
but not now
is that my rubik cube
under the table
was looking for that
my girlfriend gave it to me
she must be pissed right now
office will get on my nerves
fuck it
a roach stared right back at me
tsk, I waved my hand at it
again the alarm on my phone
this time I turned it off
and turned to my right
...
..
.
goddamit
I gotta pee...
I woke up to the alarm
banging in my ears
still I was wondering
what's the word
ten letters - red state
snoozed it again
for another ten more
but for what?
I should've turned it off
am not gonna go to work
and today is Wednesday
fifty two missed calls
thirteen messages
ninety nine plus on whatsapp
two roaches came out
from the pizza box
but what was that word
seventeen across - red state?
ten letters
my neck stiffed
may be because of the couch
my cheek is wet with sweat
laying on the leather
actually there are four roaches
did I really leave a piece in the box?
well I can't reach the table
whats that poking under my tummy?
oh the remote...
lets turn on the television
what was that word
ten letters, red state?
oh fuck,
where's the paper?
damn!
I used it to sponge the floor
there it is kinda stuck
I think the crossword page is safe
have to get up to find it though
I will wait a little more
till I get a nature call
dont wanna get up
just to pick up the paper
dont wanna waste my energy
throw the pizza box, clean the floor, take a bath
but not now
is that my rubik cube
under the table
was looking for that
my girlfriend gave it to me
she must be pissed right now
office will get on my nerves
fuck it
a roach stared right back at me
tsk, I waved my hand at it
again the alarm on my phone
this time I turned it off
and turned to my right
...
..
.
goddamit
I gotta pee...
Simon_III_Msibi
Mandla Msibi
Forum Posts: 92
Mandla Msibi
Thought Provoker
5
Joined 29th June 2013Forum Posts: 92
Father
I am your seed
your son
and now I struggle
with what you are
Father, I saw you in great eyes
not knowing that I am blind
Now that everything is crashing down
I realise that the cracks were at the foundation
A foundation I thought
I could build an empire on
But can a Kingdom built
on Lust really stand
last I checked God
destroys such places
even if my sins are cleansed
I still feel guilty
I judge myself for emulating you
There is an internal fight
I can stop my body but
the eyes of Lust
damage the Heart
the eyes of Lust
strip women where they stand
the eyes of Lust
see the soul in its nakedness
trapping it in desire
and the next thing it is tied to your own
I used to think Habits are copied
by seeing them
now I know its all in the spirit
How you raised us and what you did
just cancelled each other out
How you let Lust destroy your mind
now its all you think about
we thought you raised us in Love
yet we inherited Lust
My mind is at war with its self
the holy land is divided amoungst itself
Lust is defeating Virtue
What can I do?
I am my fathers son
for even Solomon fell for Lust
yet he was set to be wise
but then again I am my Fathers son
In Faith I can Fight
even if I fight with myself
for it is not who I was that matters
but the better person I shall be
I repent to then repeat the same sin
but I get stronger after each fight
Now father please listen to our Father
understand because I don't want to grow a a tree of sin
So I trade in Lust for a much stronger weapon
I trade in the root of Lust
which is deep sorrow
its stem of Hate
and Now I plant seeds
seedss of salvation
but living in this society means I must always be ready for war
For Lust is still within me
and I feel sorry for the women that might make me manifest this self
I only hope to grow in Love
so I can stop the sun
and defeat Sin
Oh sin are you really
stronger than my repentence?
I believe not
I am your seed
your son
and now I struggle
with what you are
Father, I saw you in great eyes
not knowing that I am blind
Now that everything is crashing down
I realise that the cracks were at the foundation
A foundation I thought
I could build an empire on
But can a Kingdom built
on Lust really stand
last I checked God
destroys such places
even if my sins are cleansed
I still feel guilty
I judge myself for emulating you
There is an internal fight
I can stop my body but
the eyes of Lust
damage the Heart
the eyes of Lust
strip women where they stand
the eyes of Lust
see the soul in its nakedness
trapping it in desire
and the next thing it is tied to your own
I used to think Habits are copied
by seeing them
now I know its all in the spirit
How you raised us and what you did
just cancelled each other out
How you let Lust destroy your mind
now its all you think about
we thought you raised us in Love
yet we inherited Lust
My mind is at war with its self
the holy land is divided amoungst itself
Lust is defeating Virtue
What can I do?
I am my fathers son
for even Solomon fell for Lust
yet he was set to be wise
but then again I am my Fathers son
In Faith I can Fight
even if I fight with myself
for it is not who I was that matters
but the better person I shall be
I repent to then repeat the same sin
but I get stronger after each fight
Now father please listen to our Father
understand because I don't want to grow a a tree of sin
So I trade in Lust for a much stronger weapon
I trade in the root of Lust
which is deep sorrow
its stem of Hate
and Now I plant seeds
seedss of salvation
but living in this society means I must always be ready for war
For Lust is still within me
and I feel sorry for the women that might make me manifest this self
I only hope to grow in Love
so I can stop the sun
and defeat Sin
Oh sin are you really
stronger than my repentence?
I believe not
Anonymous
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Hepcat61
geoff cat
Forum Posts: 1028
geoff cat
Dangerous Mind
33
Joined 27th Nov 2015Forum Posts: 1028
GREED:
an ode to the next 2008
(an unrhymed pantoum in iambic quatrameter)
I wake to greyly flaccid light
Where Moon devours red Sun’s heat
A land of sweetly scented Ghosts
Where walking crows leave broken trails
Where Moon devours red Sun’s heat
In streets of bone like broken teeth
Where walking crows leave broken trails
The weight of Ghosts remains unseen
In streets of bone like broken teeth
In rooms that conjure Earthly wraiths
The weight of Ghosts remains unseen
The churches where the corpses eat
In rooms that conjure Earthly wraiths
Of failed incantations brought
The churches where the corpses eat
With airs of golden ashes glut
Of failed incantations brought
The shattered splendor poisoned me
With airs of golden ashes glut
I was the ghost of stolen hearts
The shattered splendor poisoned me
Where once I touched its sacred coin
I was the ghost of stolen hearts
And witnessed Oz that they still see
Where once I touched its sacred coin
I wake to greyly flaccid light
And witnessed Oz that they still see
A land of sweetly scented Ghosts
an ode to the next 2008
(an unrhymed pantoum in iambic quatrameter)
I wake to greyly flaccid light
Where Moon devours red Sun’s heat
A land of sweetly scented Ghosts
Where walking crows leave broken trails
Where Moon devours red Sun’s heat
In streets of bone like broken teeth
Where walking crows leave broken trails
The weight of Ghosts remains unseen
In streets of bone like broken teeth
In rooms that conjure Earthly wraiths
The weight of Ghosts remains unseen
The churches where the corpses eat
In rooms that conjure Earthly wraiths
Of failed incantations brought
The churches where the corpses eat
With airs of golden ashes glut
Of failed incantations brought
The shattered splendor poisoned me
With airs of golden ashes glut
I was the ghost of stolen hearts
The shattered splendor poisoned me
Where once I touched its sacred coin
I was the ghost of stolen hearts
And witnessed Oz that they still see
Where once I touched its sacred coin
I wake to greyly flaccid light
And witnessed Oz that they still see
A land of sweetly scented Ghosts