Poetry competition CLOSED 12th June 2016 00:02am
WINNER
kriticool
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RUNNER-UP: TarnishedMom

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Yeah...I did it.

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Role Play Stowaway

In our heat of night play battles
Our voices had colided with a bang
I begged him loud to take me rough
With his big manly hands round my jugular vein

We role played struggle fantasy
He creeped in through the window
Tied me tight wrists to bedpost
He comanded Ass up and face down in pillow

I cried out loud my NO Please!
(Bologna was our safe word)
He screamed Whore get on your knees!
I obeyed and sucked him like a hoover

We lived in a 5 floor walk up
The old walls were very very thin
Our neighbors had heard everything
Their voyeurism amped our exhibitionism

When Big Daddy was found axe in head
All fingers were thrown fast at me
Dont think it bothered them so much he was dead
But that they no longer had live porn for free

So i bought my self a new identity
Died my hair haggared bleach bottle blond
And as my plane touched down in Figi
I thought i had escaped false persecution

My freedom by far my most perverse act
The loss of friend n family too intense
Not only were they so very far away
By my flight they had lost faith in my innocence

I could not step stilleto tip toe back in the USA
So I hired myself a private Dick
Get your mind out of the gutter y'all
You know i'll put it back there quick 💋

Turns out Big Daddy liked more than pretend
And had gone at a gal in our side alley
Her psychopath of a brawny husband
Laid axe in Big Daddy's head for his ol lady Sweet Sally

The District Attorney put it all together then
Interrogating me we got whiff of phera(moan) through skin
Turns out he too likes a lil kinky play...
Proves sometimes you can go back home again......


Written by calamitygin (Jennifer Michael McCurry)

Artemios
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calamitygin said:Art you fucking freak! Lol

Greek Psycho? You have been into the Easton Ellis again haven't you!?

This was a ball...thanks!


Lol!! haha! I love Ellis! But it's been a while since the last time he freaked me out... lol!
I enjoyed writing it and the weird thing is that I was feeling very feminine while writing, which means that
my feminine side is  more psycho than i was thinking! lol!

Thank you dearest!

Kiss,
Art  

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Artemios said:

Lol!! haha! I love Ellis! But it's been a while since the last time he freaked me out... lol!
I enjoyed writing it and the weird thing is that I was very feminine while writing, which means that
my feminine side is a more psycho than i was thinking! lol!

Thank you dearest!

Kiss,
Art  


Makes complete sense to me...chicks are nuts! Lol
Kisses

Jade-Pandora
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calamitygin said:

Makes complete sense to me...chicks are nuts! Lol
Kisses


I beg your pardon.👺💉

Hepcat61
geoff cat
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BLOODED
(a sonnet)

I wish your steady golden eyes would leave,
For almost forty-years your ghost remains.
You never made a sound, I can’t believe,
With everything smeared in your bloody stains.

How you and that old Chrysler came undone,
And how we got involved, I’ll never know.
But there we are, that group, me with my gun,
And all my older kin said I should go.

That moment sighting down the barrel’s side,
Me praying that you would not turn my way,
But from me and your end you would not hide,
I shot that face, I blew it straight away.

With severed legs and single shot you went,
But left your eyes, my decades long repent.

Author's Note:  I wouldn't consider myself to be a world famous criminal... but I did put a bullet in that cat's face...


calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Lol..Hep..I was taken in completely..
But almost sick...
In a good way lol
I could barely breathe..

Was so relieved when you gave up it was a cat...lol...i needed that giggle...

Great piece doll! Thanks so much!

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Jade-Pandora said:

I beg your pardon.👺💉



Chicks other than Jade Pandora...❤😜

Art..help...

Artemios
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calamitygin said:


Chicks other than Jade Pandora...❤😜

Art..help...


Haha! Jadey has a polite criminal instinct, she wouldn´t make you suffer dear Jen
That´s why you chose Geoff for the crime Jadey, isn´t it?
Well, I agree, chicks other than Jade

Jade-Pandora
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calamitygin said:


Chicks other than Jade Pandora...❤😜

Art..help...


muahahahaaa NObody can help you now!

Where's an emoji of a chainsaw when you need one?!

ggrrrrrr...

calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Every one of the entries was fabulous
...thank you...and thanks to Andrew for the help...


calamitygin
Jennifer Michael McCurry
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Lol....i know you'da cutta...

Artemios
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Congratulations to the winners, Kriticool and TarnishedMom! Really great poems, well deserved!

Thank you Jen for another fab comp. I really enjoyed it, hehe!
Congrats to all the poets!

Hasta la proxima!
Kisses,
Art

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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Jennifer, I'm a little late, but your comp theme made for another great and fun competition!

Not only do I wish congratulations to the winners, Kriticool and TarnishedMom, but to everyone who entered; a great turnout by all!

See you again,
ever
Jadey

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