Poetry competition CLOSED 9th April 2016 7:20pm
WINNER
TinaLouise
TinaLouise
RUNNER-UP:
Jade-Pandora
She He Rhymes
URBAN DEVELOPMENT
He loves to greet me on his knees
As soon as he comes home from work.
He lifts a hem, he's such a tease,
He pulls my thong, and makes me jerk.
Soon, all the clothes lay on the floor,
He wears my passion on his face.
He spreads my legs, goes back for more,
He tongues me deeper, just in case.
The phone can ring, the doorbell chime,
He raises up and slides inside.
He slows the pace, and takes his time,
He grabs me and goes for a ride!
Copyright ©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
He loves to greet me on his knees
As soon as he comes home from work.
He lifts a hem, he's such a tease,
He pulls my thong, and makes me jerk.
Soon, all the clothes lay on the floor,
He wears my passion on his face.
He spreads my legs, goes back for more,
He tongues me deeper, just in case.
The phone can ring, the doorbell chime,
He raises up and slides inside.
He slows the pace, and takes his time,
He grabs me and goes for a ride!
Copyright ©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
Lol..Jade this was so much fun...
I had hoped these would be.
He loves to greet me on his knees
As soon as he comes home from work.
He lifts a hem, he's such a tease,
He pulls my thong, and makes me jerk.
Lol...i love the playful nature of it...
And it kept up the whole way through.
It was sexy for sure..
But had a sweet intimacy i really enjoyed from growlin dove..
I love your intensity you display so well in your writes...
But when you get playful i get a real kick outta it...
I wanted easy fun writes and these have been a ball to read..
Thanks sweetie pie!
I had hoped these would be.
He loves to greet me on his knees
As soon as he comes home from work.
He lifts a hem, he's such a tease,
He pulls my thong, and makes me jerk.
Lol...i love the playful nature of it...
And it kept up the whole way through.
It was sexy for sure..
But had a sweet intimacy i really enjoyed from growlin dove..
I love your intensity you display so well in your writes...
But when you get playful i get a real kick outta it...
I wanted easy fun writes and these have been a ball to read..
Thanks sweetie pie!
Aw thank you so much, Jen, I really appreciate that. And I did both He & She writes in a row, while practically dead on my feet, but I loved the whole experience! One poem lead right into the next, page 1 to page 2. I'm so glad you hosted this competition, I love the theme, lovey!
Thank you everyone for indulging me with your versions of these...I so enjoyed every single one.
Tina...you made my birthday with your sexy She piece...and i loved the He poem as well...flattery will get you everywhere...lol except an auto win...I had two other poets vote, just to make sure it hadn't and you still came out with the win...but thank you so much!
Jade...I wasn't going to give a runner up in this comp...but you had two fabulous entries...and were a very close second in the voting...I loved both your pieces as well. Especially the Medusa piece...i thank you for them both...It is always a delight to read your creations.
Thank you again everyone! Sorry for my delay...but a lotta life happened outta the blue this weekend.
Tina...you made my birthday with your sexy She piece...and i loved the He poem as well...flattery will get you everywhere...lol except an auto win...I had two other poets vote, just to make sure it hadn't and you still came out with the win...but thank you so much!
Jade...I wasn't going to give a runner up in this comp...but you had two fabulous entries...and were a very close second in the voting...I loved both your pieces as well. Especially the Medusa piece...i thank you for them both...It is always a delight to read your creations.
Thank you again everyone! Sorry for my delay...but a lotta life happened outta the blue this weekend.
Thank you so much, Jennifer, for #1: hosting such a great & unique competition, and #2: making a generous exception by allowing an extra place for me. I'm honored, and I so enjoyed creating my entries for you!
And best of all, my loving congratulations to Tina... I'm happy to see your two writes garner a much- deserved win!
See you all again!
And best of all, my loving congratulations to Tina... I'm happy to see your two writes garner a much- deserved win!
See you all again!
