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Poetry competition CLOSED 9th April 2016 7:20pm
WINNER
TinaLouise
TinaLouise
RUNNER-UP:
Jade-Pandora
She He Rhymes
Poetry Contest Description
Write an erotic poem with alternating rhyme...12 lines all but 4 must start with either He or She
Write an erotic rhyme...alternating
Does not need to be structured alternation...I just dont want each line to rhyme with the same sound throughout.
I would like to keep this without explicit terms...or as few as possible...That does not mean it can't suggest whatever your desire.
Other than...unwanted acts especially pedophilia...please.
12 lines in groups of 4...
All but one of the 4 must start with either She (all she) or He (all he)
2 weeks...
Old or New
Enter as many as you please...would love to see one of each...a He and She...
Other than that....go on y'all...
My example....
She
She
She walks with his fire in her eyes
She roars him in her ember tress of hair
All reflect his heat between her thighs
She closes eyes to hold glimmer of her midnight lover there
She rolls her hip in rhythm of his sex
As memory thrusts each purposeful step
She holds herself to feel his touch
She Ahhs as her palms become filled by her breasts
She lays and strokes to moan him in her breathe
She longs to feel his sweet apon her neck
And with a patchouli whiff catch of his scent
She finds her climax and his spent
Does not need to be structured alternation...I just dont want each line to rhyme with the same sound throughout.
I would like to keep this without explicit terms...or as few as possible...That does not mean it can't suggest whatever your desire.
Other than...unwanted acts especially pedophilia...please.
12 lines in groups of 4...
All but one of the 4 must start with either She (all she) or He (all he)
2 weeks...
Old or New
Enter as many as you please...would love to see one of each...a He and She...
Other than that....go on y'all...
My example....
She
She
She walks with his fire in her eyes
She roars him in her ember tress of hair
All reflect his heat between her thighs
She closes eyes to hold glimmer of her midnight lover there
She rolls her hip in rhythm of his sex
As memory thrusts each purposeful step
She holds herself to feel his touch
She Ahhs as her palms become filled by her breasts
She lays and strokes to moan him in her breathe
She longs to feel his sweet apon her neck
And with a patchouli whiff catch of his scent
She finds her climax and his spent
Balance lost
He needed to breathe but not to speak
he enjoyed to laugh but not to sound
behind his mouth he had a counter
he used it to balance his darker wishes.
He found himself giving some information
to the birds, of how they should fly,
he managed to fly once on the love of a guy
he stayed there for a moment or two before he died.
He never knew that sex was not a book
he was trying to get horny by reading his dick
when he realized that there was no culture on it
he just grabbed it, balance lost, eyes shut and that was it.
He needed to breathe but not to speak
he enjoyed to laugh but not to sound
behind his mouth he had a counter
he used it to balance his darker wishes.
He found himself giving some information
to the birds, of how they should fly,
he managed to fly once on the love of a guy
he stayed there for a moment or two before he died.
He never knew that sex was not a book
he was trying to get horny by reading his dick
when he realized that there was no culture on it
he just grabbed it, balance lost, eyes shut and that was it.
Art..baby...we are alone...
But i dig this...
You know how i like your unusual voice...i have a feeling we have similar dark twusted sense of humour.
He never knew that sex was not a book
he was trying to get horny by reading his dick
when he realized that there was no culture on it
he just grabbed it, balance lost, eyes shut and that was it.
I love that!
Great job...thank you!!
But i dig this...
You know how i like your unusual voice...i have a feeling we have similar dark twusted sense of humour.
He never knew that sex was not a book
he was trying to get horny by reading his dick
when he realized that there was no culture on it
he just grabbed it, balance lost, eyes shut and that was it.
I love that!
Great job...thank you!!
calamitygin said:Art..baby...we are alone...
But i dig this...
You know how i like your unusual voice...i have a feeling we have similar dark twusted sense of humour.
He never knew that sex was not a book
he was trying to get horny by reading his dick
when he realized that there was no culture on it
he just grabbed it, balance lost, eyes shut and that was it.
I love that!
Great job...thank you!!
Thank you Jen! There is still time. Hope people will be inspired and write something here. It is an interesting comp and it can be funny, hard and everything!
You are right. I think we have very similar sense of humor!
Kisses,
Art
But i dig this...
You know how i like your unusual voice...i have a feeling we have similar dark twusted sense of humour.
He never knew that sex was not a book
he was trying to get horny by reading his dick
when he realized that there was no culture on it
he just grabbed it, balance lost, eyes shut and that was it.
I love that!
Great job...thank you!!
Thank you Jen! There is still time. Hope people will be inspired and write something here. It is an interesting comp and it can be funny, hard and everything!
You are right. I think we have very similar sense of humor!
Kisses,
Art
He put his hand between her thighs
He removed her panties
He soon felt his penis rise
For sex they were frantic
He saw her legs were apart
He entered her full length
He felt her G-spot start
Her orgasm came full strength
He continued for half an hour
He caused orgasms a plenty
He fucked with full power
Until her score was twenty
Version 2 which does not exactly follow the rules but i think reads better
He put his hand between her thighs
She had removed her panties
He soon felt his penis rise
For sex they were frantic
She lay with legs apart
He entered her full length
She felt her G-spot start
Her orgasm came full strength
He continued for half an hour
She orgasmed a plenty
He fucked with full power
Until her score was twenty
He removed her panties
He soon felt his penis rise
For sex they were frantic
He saw her legs were apart
He entered her full length
He felt her G-spot start
Her orgasm came full strength
He continued for half an hour
He caused orgasms a plenty
He fucked with full power
Until her score was twenty
Version 2 which does not exactly follow the rules but i think reads better
He put his hand between her thighs
She had removed her panties
He soon felt his penis rise
For sex they were frantic
She lay with legs apart
He entered her full length
She felt her G-spot start
Her orgasm came full strength
He continued for half an hour
She orgasmed a plenty
He fucked with full power
Until her score was twenty
Thanks Garden lover...
I love them both...
But actually prefer the top...
It actually brings the focus in on her and his appreciation of what she is feeling...
The intent of the comp..
Will it come out more about the him or her...
I think the all he's are uncomfortable for writers..
We are used to trying to not repeat the same words...but it can be used as a cool effect.
I.much prefer the first...
It is a tighter piece in my opinion.
I.love the piece...thank you so much for the entry...
You can leave the second up..
But think the piece written for the comp stands very well on it's own..
Using the second piece makes it seem as if you arent pleased with the first...
And you should be.
I love the rhyme and sexual abandon...
Awrsome entry thanks!
I love them both...
But actually prefer the top...
It actually brings the focus in on her and his appreciation of what she is feeling...
The intent of the comp..
Will it come out more about the him or her...
I think the all he's are uncomfortable for writers..
We are used to trying to not repeat the same words...but it can be used as a cool effect.
I.much prefer the first...
It is a tighter piece in my opinion.
I.love the piece...thank you so much for the entry...
You can leave the second up..
But think the piece written for the comp stands very well on it's own..
Using the second piece makes it seem as if you arent pleased with the first...
And you should be.
I love the rhyme and sexual abandon...
Awrsome entry thanks!
Temptress
She seduces my mind with her verse
she caresses my soul when she speaks
I long to feel her damp soft purse
she mesmerizes me, pert rounded cheeks
She is aware of her power
she works her magick like a charm
Commanding attention with natural beauty
She is a temptress, her bewitching allure
She enthralls me twirling her dark hair
she undresses me with her enchanting stare
captivating me with large hypnotizing eyes
she invites me slightly parting her thighs
Written by TinaLouise
For Ms J happy bday 💋
She seduces my mind with her verse
she caresses my soul when she speaks
I long to feel her damp soft purse
she mesmerizes me, pert rounded cheeks
She is aware of her power
she works her magick like a charm
Commanding attention with natural beauty
She is a temptress, her bewitching allure
She enthralls me twirling her dark hair
she undresses me with her enchanting stare
captivating me with large hypnotizing eyes
she invites me slightly parting her thighs
Written by TinaLouise
For Ms J happy bday 💋
Awwe!! How did you know it was my Birthday thank you for this...
...you should have..lol
I am not above wanting all kinds of attention on my b day...lol
And this!
Honey this is i think my favorite piece of yours...
So sexy and you captured this temptress beguiling ways...
She seduces my mind with her verse
she caresses my soul when she speaks
I long to feel her damp soft purse
she mesmerizes me, pert rounded cheeks
Damp soft purse...oooh love that..
I feel silly but..did you mean the poem was for me?
Because if so you got my sex goddess apeal spot on...lol
And you could dig for change there anytime...teehee!
Who ever this about..
It is fun and sensual and flirty..
Just great.
I am in love with the rock sway rhythm of it...
Which is how this should be in this style..
Great piece!! Thank you thank you..
Made my b day...
...you should have..lol
I am not above wanting all kinds of attention on my b day...lol
And this!
Honey this is i think my favorite piece of yours...
So sexy and you captured this temptress beguiling ways...
She seduces my mind with her verse
she caresses my soul when she speaks
I long to feel her damp soft purse
she mesmerizes me, pert rounded cheeks
Damp soft purse...oooh love that..
I feel silly but..did you mean the poem was for me?
Because if so you got my sex goddess apeal spot on...lol
And you could dig for change there anytime...teehee!
Who ever this about..
It is fun and sensual and flirty..
Just great.
I am in love with the rock sway rhythm of it...
Which is how this should be in this style..
Great piece!! Thank you thank you..
Made my b day...
HE LOVES HER
He towers her strong and masculine
he gazes upon her with hazel eyes
flashing a warm cheeky grin
he caresses the inside of her thighs
He is the silent type
he exudes sexual dominance
loud with his intentions
he commands her with his presence
He gently brushes against her neck
he finds her erogenous zone, a delicate peck
embracing her in a timely fashion
he seduces, engulfing her with ravenous passion
Written by TinaLouise
He towers her strong and masculine
he gazes upon her with hazel eyes
flashing a warm cheeky grin
he caresses the inside of her thighs
He is the silent type
he exudes sexual dominance
loud with his intentions
he commands her with his presence
He gently brushes against her neck
he finds her erogenous zone, a delicate peck
embracing her in a timely fashion
he seduces, engulfing her with ravenous passion
Written by TinaLouise
Well sista Tina...
This form really suits you..
I just love this one as well!
He gently brushes against her neck
he finds her erogenous zone, a delicate peck
embracing her in a timely fashion
he seduces, engulfing her with ravenous passion
I adore that...
The erogenous zone on her neck
And just a peck..
Sometimes those little touches
Can send a gal farther than any...
Great piece...was hoping to get one of each from people...
And i love the rhyme here...
Thanks sweet pea!
This form really suits you..
I just love this one as well!
He gently brushes against her neck
he finds her erogenous zone, a delicate peck
embracing her in a timely fashion
he seduces, engulfing her with ravenous passion
I adore that...
The erogenous zone on her neck
And just a peck..
Sometimes those little touches
Can send a gal farther than any...
Great piece...was hoping to get one of each from people...
And i love the rhyme here...
Thanks sweet pea!
TinaLouise said:Love you Ms J hahaha I have missed you! I was going to post on FB but didn't want to embarrass you xx yeah on second thoughts lmao I did post and tag xxx
Lol...hope Mom faints...jk...she knows about both my sides...but i love you posted it...this really does mean a lot to me that you thought to do it...
Lol...hope Mom faints...jk...she knows about both my sides...but i love you posted it...this really does mean a lot to me that you thought to do it...
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MEDUSA
She, with dark eyes, can hypnotize,
She sucks your vortex in hunger.
She, her tongue slides in serpent's guise
To draw from you the lust of her.
She, with writhing tendrils crawling,
Coiling 'round full shaft's vein, swollen.
She, the witch of siren, calling,
She, your self by stealth, has stolen.
Languid, yielding bodies' motion,
She will be the one to show you.
She anoints you with her potion,
She surrounds you with her taboo.
Copyright ©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
MEDUSA
She, with dark eyes, can hypnotize,
She sucks your vortex in hunger.
She, her tongue slides in serpent's guise
To draw from you the lust of her.
She, with writhing tendrils crawling,
Coiling 'round full shaft's vein, swollen.
She, the witch of siren, calling,
She, your self by stealth, has stolen.
Languid, yielding bodies' motion,
She will be the one to show you.
She anoints you with her potion,
She surrounds you with her taboo.
Copyright ©2016 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
