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Make a new poem about anything you would like to write about.
Post the poem and a link to the poem.
Whoever gets the best comments will win.
I will also read and comment on each poem.
I might post one myself

Thought this would be a fun way to get people to comment on new poems ^^

Good luck

http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/221579-a-soul-is-missing/


Justice is looking for revenge
A soul is missing
A young boy is singing alone
My echo's lie
A demon so sly
An angel's voice
Life is a rare painting
and its paint is blood

I'm not aware if this is an illusion
or rich imagination
Today is illustrated on the calendαr
it appears to be real
A last chance is send
from beyond the skies
The end is now announced
and it's passing by

Revelation of the truth
of all false prophets
Rescission of the precept
given by clergymen
Unheard prayers of
victimizers and victims
Guilty and innocent
Mass deaths

And I sign a request
renewal for my soul
I'm asking epidural
as I give birth to fears
A bad time's perpetuation
will be my torment
Its moral to me will be
the knowledge of pain

Lover Boy

I don't know..
Maybe it is just me,
Awake dreaming fantasies
of you and me, Because I can't sleep,
Where is the love i so desperately need?
my heart has repeatedly taken a beating,
Maybe the balance of a team will let me find peace with my being,
I need more love,
Not nice things,
Cause happiness comes from within,
Not from material possessions,
So lets tie up these strings I don't think this was random,
Two paths form one and cannot be abandoned,
We stand a chance but who doesn't have baggage?
I manage with my vantage and will keep a bandage on the damage,
I got stamina so for now I search for you in Goldilocks zones,
You know.. the type of space you would grace as your own,
At first words softly spoken,
In spurts emotions begin floatin',
A page turns and soon we start quotin',
Two voices and the breath to grow,
binary stars in our own show,
But we both know the brightest souls are the quickest to fall apart,
We can not quit now, look we are living in art,
Love will always get harder but why else would anyone bother-
To conquer life with a partner?

http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/221527-lover-boy/

I only got two submissions but both really great!
So I’ll just decide on which one I liked the most ^^

Thanks gazellemon and personanongrata
But I think the winner is… personanongrata

Though like I said, I really enjoyed both!

Thank you DevisChild...well
I'm so sorry the comp passed unnoticed
I admit I had forgotten it myself completely
my apologies
The idea was great to get interaction though