Poetry competition CLOSED 13th September 2015 00:17am
WINNER
darksighs
darksighs
RUNNERS-UP:
crimsin
and JohnFeddeler
Same sex erotica
Anonymous
calamitygin said:Yeah! Oh i liked this doll. The seperation so close, tempting. Screw who cares! Sure my partner will elaborate. But i was tickled with this submit!
Temptation and lust fulfilled. The primary call of nature cannot be ignored no matter how slowly society evolves to believe it in all its forms.
"Let us clearly state our claims by breaking "proper" chains."
So clearly expressed as a fundamental right for all.
Nicely composed.
Temptation and lust fulfilled. The primary call of nature cannot be ignored no matter how slowly society evolves to believe it in all its forms.
"Let us clearly state our claims by breaking "proper" chains."
So clearly expressed as a fundamental right for all.
Nicely composed.
Miss underneath! I love that this intimate moment was caught in a crowd. Dead sexy, naked, clothes on.
"She danced, oblivious
to stares, the music, the mood
feral upon the stage,"
Feral suggesting animalistic passion, and certainly freedom somehow. Your desire builds slow and hot!
"obsession to possession"
Turning the page, and for some reason my fav line.
Was happy tickled it never went to bed. Only in my head. Which was filled overflowing with your well crafted images.
Exellent entry.
"She danced, oblivious
to stares, the music, the mood
feral upon the stage,"
Feral suggesting animalistic passion, and certainly freedom somehow. Your desire builds slow and hot!
"obsession to possession"
Turning the page, and for some reason my fav line.
Was happy tickled it never went to bed. Only in my head. Which was filled overflowing with your well crafted images.
Exellent entry.
Anonymous
This is so artistically composed. I love the imagery:
"I find her on tummy.. golden angel asleep,
quietly now, I silent~creep...
My light tongue to toe~curl, lazily licking up,
tasting behind knees.. ~swirl and suck~ "
First-class writing.
"I find her on tummy.. golden angel asleep,
quietly now, I silent~creep...
My light tongue to toe~curl, lazily licking up,
tasting behind knees.. ~swirl and suck~ "
First-class writing.
Anonymous
calamitygin said:Oh darling T. My sweet Darksighs....
This was pure delight. And how!
"Tightest blush line full~licked, my two pinkies push deep, ".........suggests she is so pure, new to sex. And you relish having and loving her. Yes, intamacy.
"ringing her sweet 'V' in fay crescendos of cream..
"As I swallow silken need..my 'bestie' sighs, pleased.
Eyes still in my prize, I smile.. continue slow feed. "
Oh sweet "V" glorious. And seeing you love her taste, to cumming cream, to silken need. You feed, she's pleasured,, you continue out of your own. Need.
Its so sexy, i was washed with sensations, my cozy furnace, about to completely incinerate the rest of me.
Yes please!!!!
This is so artistically composed. I love the imagery:
"I find her on tummy.. golden angel asleep,
quietly now, I silent~creep...
My light tongue to toe~curl, lazily licking up,
tasting behind knees.. ~swirl and suck~ "
First-class erotic writing.
This was pure delight. And how!
"Tightest blush line full~licked, my two pinkies push deep, ".........suggests she is so pure, new to sex. And you relish having and loving her. Yes, intamacy.
"ringing her sweet 'V' in fay crescendos of cream..
"As I swallow silken need..my 'bestie' sighs, pleased.
Eyes still in my prize, I smile.. continue slow feed. "
Oh sweet "V" glorious. And seeing you love her taste, to cumming cream, to silken need. You feed, she's pleasured,, you continue out of your own. Need.
Its so sexy, i was washed with sensations, my cozy furnace, about to completely incinerate the rest of me.
Yes please!!!!
This is so artistically composed. I love the imagery:
"I find her on tummy.. golden angel asleep,
quietly now, I silent~creep...
My light tongue to toe~curl, lazily licking up,
tasting behind knees.. ~swirl and suck~ "
First-class erotic writing.
Note: This post dont match calamityjins comments couse I changed it.
my original was not erotic enough and wouldnt of won nothing
I open the mens bathroom door. in the same moment the door to the outside
opens with a flourish, I know I am being stealthed,
I feel like the feline with the big muscular tomcat on her prowl.
The hole between the two stalls has long been made and seen
much use
I assume the womans role placing my buttocs against the
cold wood
He lubes me up from the other side
my own hard on is uncontrollable
he enters, uncircumsized his head is revealed inside of me
he comes in fourty three thrusts
masturbating my climax is timed with his
He offers me his ass
I ceremoniously rub my flaccid rod onto his
waiting ass
he understands and after a few minutes of freshening up
I peek out to see his face as he turns before he leaves
Wow!! Rabbit, this is a one of a kind write.
I didnt know where you were going from one sec to the next! Doesnt mean it wasnt well crafted, i feel exactly the opposite. It feeels complete in focus without sounding the least bit contrived.
For an instant im thinkin, alright Jen, remember, this is poetry, not every one likes what i say, i dont have to like him. But do need to hear him.
Happy i did.
."Guys in fluffy coats winking at me"
Fluffy c oats! Ha!
n"d that when I'm around men
my eyes drift to staring at their crotch
and imagining the penis underneath
but I digress. this is an erotic thread... "
Brilliant there, the one sexual element of homoerotic writing, and its thrown off, i digress, that cant be sexy, gross!#
But its total admission that there is part of you that wants to see a mans cock! Genius.
Then.....
"My heart fluttered as heard the throaty roar of his Harley
As he opened the door I pounced on him
adjusting his collar buttons "
The unzzziiip, his arugula. Lol tricky dick you.
Making yourself pretty for big harley dude! And then closes with pure intimacy. Adjusted his buttons.
I loved this!!!!!!!
I didnt know where you were going from one sec to the next! Doesnt mean it wasnt well crafted, i feel exactly the opposite. It feeels complete in focus without sounding the least bit contrived.
For an instant im thinkin, alright Jen, remember, this is poetry, not every one likes what i say, i dont have to like him. But do need to hear him.
Happy i did.
."Guys in fluffy coats winking at me"
Fluffy c oats! Ha!
n"d that when I'm around men
my eyes drift to staring at their crotch
and imagining the penis underneath
but I digress. this is an erotic thread... "
Brilliant there, the one sexual element of homoerotic writing, and its thrown off, i digress, that cant be sexy, gross!#
But its total admission that there is part of you that wants to see a mans cock! Genius.
Then.....
"My heart fluttered as heard the throaty roar of his Harley
As he opened the door I pounced on him
adjusting his collar buttons "
The unzzziiip, his arugula. Lol tricky dick you.
Making yourself pretty for big harley dude! And then closes with pure intimacy. Adjusted his buttons.
I loved this!!!!!!!
Lol okay. Three very different entries. My last comment was about the second version , which you had kept some of the first them the end was...?
But this is all new!😷 A glory hole piece lol
And it was brave and gloriously delivered. (see what i did there teeher)
I really, really liked it!
Ive always been curious about how glory hole action is initiated and performed. And it was very well written. And pure entertainment. Ha! Maybe pure isn't the right word.
Way to go rabbit!
🐰🐰🐰
Jennifer
But this is all new!😷 A glory hole piece lol
And it was brave and gloriously delivered. (see what i did there teeher)
I really, really liked it!
Ive always been curious about how glory hole action is initiated and performed. And it was very well written. And pure entertainment. Ha! Maybe pure isn't the right word.
Way to go rabbit!
🐰🐰🐰
Jennifer
It's rather cleverly done.
Anonymous
Jen, I can't find this one in here.
calamitygin said:Wow!! Rabbit, this is a one of a kind write.
I didnt know where you were going from one sec to the next! Doesnt mean it wasnt well crafted, i feel exactly the opposite. It feeels complete in focus without sounding the least bit contrived.
For an instant im thinkin, alright Jen, remember, this is poetry, not every one likes what i say, i dont have to like him. But do need to hear him.
Happy i did.
."Guys in fluffy coats winking at me"
Fluffy c oats! Ha!
n"d that when I'm around men
my eyes drift to staring at their crotch
and imagining the penis underneath
but I digress. this is an erotic thread... "
Brilliant there, the one sexual element of homoerotic writing, and its thrown off, i digress, that cant be sexy, gross!#
But its total admission that there is part of you that wants to see a mans cock! Genius.
Then.....
"My heart fluttered as heard the throaty roar of his Harley
As he opened the door I pounced on him
adjusting his collar buttons "
The unzzziiip, his arugula. Lol tricky dick you.
Making yourself pretty for big harley dude! And then closes with pure intimacy. Adjusted his buttons.
I loved this!!!!!!!
calamitygin said:Wow!! Rabbit, this is a one of a kind write.
I didnt know where you were going from one sec to the next! Doesnt mean it wasnt well crafted, i feel exactly the opposite. It feeels complete in focus without sounding the least bit contrived.
For an instant im thinkin, alright Jen, remember, this is poetry, not every one likes what i say, i dont have to like him. But do need to hear him.
Happy i did.
."Guys in fluffy coats winking at me"
Fluffy c oats! Ha!
n"d that when I'm around men
my eyes drift to staring at their crotch
and imagining the penis underneath
but I digress. this is an erotic thread... "
Brilliant there, the one sexual element of homoerotic writing, and its thrown off, i digress, that cant be sexy, gross!#
But its total admission that there is part of you that wants to see a mans cock! Genius.
Then.....
"My heart fluttered as heard the throaty roar of his Harley
As he opened the door I pounced on him
adjusting his collar buttons "
The unzzziiip, his arugula. Lol tricky dick you.
Making yourself pretty for big harley dude! And then closes with pure intimacy. Adjusted his buttons.
I loved this!!!!!!!
