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Kaiju Haiku

HadesRising
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Poetry Contest

here we go again
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I'm going to jump on the haiku bandwagon here. Write me a six part haiku about a kaiju (strange creature in Japanese.) But here's a twist, you cannot use an existing kaiju like Godzilla, Mothra, Rodan, etc, but must create your own and name it.

TWO WEEKS

5, 7, 5 FORMAT

MAKE IT EXCITING

AMENDED RULE:
EACH POET IS ALLOWED THREE ENTRIES WITH A NEW KAIJU FOR TWO OF THEM, BUT IN THE THIRD PART YOUR TWO KAIJU MUST DO BATTLE!

Krosgood
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They called it Winter

Polar ice cap melts
Awakening the creature
Global warming came

Thrashing through water
It's tail creating a wake
Tidal waves reach land

Birds flock to the mass
An island of horns and flesh
Approaching the shore

Legend tells the tale
Of the spiteful Winter-beast
Who will come to purge

Amphibious god
Breath of cold engulfs us all
The frost is galore

The ice age has come
Like so many times before
Earth belongs to it

HadesRising
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excellent, my friend

I have an idea so I'll amend the rules

Krosgood
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Awesome. I'll be back with the others

Krosgood
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Tectonic

Beneath the freezing
The earth splits a fissure large
Steam billows outward

Volcanic matter
Spewing as the earth trembles
Birthing inferno

Arise Tectonic
Scale covered hardened magma
Eyes like molten rock

Serpentine body
Slithers through the melting snow
Adversary snake

Ash floating away
Shedding to new skin for war
Prepares for battle

Monuments of flame
Halfway across the planet
Searching for Winter

HadesRising
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This is shaping up nice. Well done

Krosgood
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Winter -VS- Tectonic

Man can only watch
As they are all powerless
Cheering for no one

Winter roaring loud
Frost blows from deep within it
And hail falls to earth

Tectonic hisses
Lava spittle pouring out
Molten lakes are formed

Colossus monsters
Tangled in a mess of hate
Shake the earth at foot

A venomous bite
Tectonic wounding Winter
Poison flowing deep

Winter’s strength prevails
But toxins are now heart bound
Both Kaiju lie dead

HadesRising
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Superb, my friend. Excellent

HadesRising
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Anyone else? The bar has been set high

HadesRising
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How about it? The monsters are lurking

Savaja
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No doubt. Sheesh! I've yet to decide: this one or Morgoth, luv! :-p

HadesRising
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Savaja said:No doubt. Sheesh! I've yet to decide: this one or Morgoth, luv! :-pdo both. The more the merrier

gardenlover
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Vase the She Devil

Beware of her trap
She appears as any other girl
But Vaze; a she devil

Beauty in men's eyes
They think they will get the prize
So the chase is on

Bare breasts on display
Splayed legs show the way to go
Why is there delay

Venture near to her
Her embrace will hold so tight
Never letting go

She will suck men dry
Enslave them until they die
Start over again

Her sisters are here
Men face dire dangers everywhere
You have all been warned


HadesRising
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Nice, gardenlover, but you strayed from the 5, 7, 5 format

gardenlover
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Have edited poem and think it is now 5,7,5.

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