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Shoot and Send
KrumblingCookie
Forum Posts: 109
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 25th May 2013Forum Posts: 109
Poetry Contest Description
I do believe in killing the messenger. You know Why? It sends a Message.- Ian Somerhalder
Write a story/poem that has a twist in it dealing with the quote provided above.
Any style, any length (But the shorter the better), old or new , you have a week, get as twisted as you want. Enjoy!
Any style, any length (But the shorter the better), old or new , you have a week, get as twisted as you want. Enjoy!
ScarlettA
Scarlett_A
Forum Posts: 24
Scarlett_A
Thought Provoker
5
Joined 2nd May 2014Forum Posts: 24
Cheated by Life
The sweet faced girl
approached her sister,
"I come to you with a message:
I know you fuck and love him.
I know he does the same.
I'd just assume kill you
and my cheating husband."
Before she pulls the trigger
pressed to her lips,
She whispers through her tears,
"Instead, I'll kill the messenger.
You know why? It sends a Message.
The sweet faced girl
approached her sister,
"I come to you with a message:
I know you fuck and love him.
I know he does the same.
I'd just assume kill you
and my cheating husband."
Before she pulls the trigger
pressed to her lips,
She whispers through her tears,
"Instead, I'll kill the messenger.
You know why? It sends a Message.
Anonymous
I Shot the Procrastinator
There was no message
though I waited
inhaled and exhaled with patience
graceful in spite of my raging questions
pacing the floor
nose pressed to the window
checking the phone
no text or missed call
no-one approaching either door
no email
cool lost and boots on
door bound and hell bent
I left to get it straight myself
and I could say I killed the messenger
but he said it still wasn't sent
so I'll say I shot the procrastinator instead
There was no message
though I waited
inhaled and exhaled with patience
graceful in spite of my raging questions
pacing the floor
nose pressed to the window
checking the phone
no text or missed call
no-one approaching either door
no email
cool lost and boots on
door bound and hell bent
I left to get it straight myself
and I could say I killed the messenger
but he said it still wasn't sent
so I'll say I shot the procrastinator instead
praveengola
Forum Posts: 66
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 23rd Feb 2013Forum Posts: 66
Make it a Spam
Destroying an email ,
I wrote it again ,
that I was the one......
who made You a man.
I send the same....
with a killer smile,
that if it meant you,
then don't make reply.
Just make it a spam ,
as its only a dam,
between You and Me,
who read the same just for a scam.
Destroying an email ,
I wrote it again ,
that I was the one......
who made You a man.
I send the same....
with a killer smile,
that if it meant you,
then don't make reply.
Just make it a spam ,
as its only a dam,
between You and Me,
who read the same just for a scam.
rain1courtel
RainC
Forum Posts: 230
RainC
Tyrant of Words
38
Joined 3rd June 2012 Forum Posts: 230
It speaks more about you….
You brought me rumors wrapped
in bullshit from the lips of my
enemy, and with it came
concerns; questioning
the strength of our
friendship
Pondering why you didn’t squash the
convo before it formed wings
abandoning untruths at the
feet of its malicious creator
sparing my ears the
appalling lies
Now I’m left wondering why my enemy
was so comfortable and content,
so relaxed and familiar with
sharing gossip about me,
with...
you
~Rain~
You brought me rumors wrapped
in bullshit from the lips of my
enemy, and with it came
concerns; questioning
the strength of our
friendship
Pondering why you didn’t squash the
convo before it formed wings
abandoning untruths at the
feet of its malicious creator
sparing my ears the
appalling lies
Now I’m left wondering why my enemy
was so comfortable and content,
so relaxed and familiar with
sharing gossip about me,
with...
you
~Rain~
Comrade
Joined 3rd June 2014
Forum Posts: 16
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 16
If I kill the messenger to send a message,
I suppose that would make me a messanger too...
And if you get my message, I'll be waiting for your reply with a 12gauge.
I'm the messanger waiting to kill the next messanger before he kills me
I suppose I'll call this the postman's paradox
I suppose that would make me a messanger too...
And if you get my message, I'll be waiting for your reply with a 12gauge.
I'm the messanger waiting to kill the next messanger before he kills me
I suppose I'll call this the postman's paradox
octobercry
Joined 1st July 2014
Forum Posts: 6
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 6
The very handsome man
stands and crosses to me
delivering a message
I know its not good news
I know should stand up and walk the other way
But he draws me in with his eyes
He whispers in my ear that I have a week
I know I was late
I knew I was going to die
He touches my face with a knife
Drags the tip down my cheek
Cutting it open
I reach down and pull out my gun
I have my finger on the trigger
I look at him, and then around
I pull the trigger
He falls
Blood spilling everywhere
I put the gun away
I bend down and write a message with his blood
"I will never be caught, I will never stop. Stop sending your messengers to me, you know they are just going to die"
stands and crosses to me
delivering a message
I know its not good news
I know should stand up and walk the other way
But he draws me in with his eyes
He whispers in my ear that I have a week
I know I was late
I knew I was going to die
He touches my face with a knife
Drags the tip down my cheek
Cutting it open
I reach down and pull out my gun
I have my finger on the trigger
I look at him, and then around
I pull the trigger
He falls
Blood spilling everywhere
I put the gun away
I bend down and write a message with his blood
"I will never be caught, I will never stop. Stop sending your messengers to me, you know they are just going to die"
Maenad
Forum Posts: 27
Dangerous Mind
1
Joined 22nd June 2014Forum Posts: 27
He lost the draw
drew the short straw
had to go
tell them no
and when he was sent
he knew it was too late
he didn't even get to the gate
That was the messenger I ate
drew the short straw
had to go
tell them no
and when he was sent
he knew it was too late
he didn't even get to the gate
That was the messenger I ate
rain1courtel
RainC
Forum Posts: 230
RainC
Tyrant of Words
38
Joined 3rd June 2012 Forum Posts: 230
Thanks so much! Great Comp KrumblingC! Congrats to Oct and miki, nice entries everyone.
Anonymous
Congrats Rain and Oct
Enjoed the comp, thank you
Enjoed the comp, thank you