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hiphop battle.

Madintellect
Mike stew
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Honestly man, 11 in a row!? Are you kidding me?
You truly are your own worst enemy

Double rhyme?
What does it mean?

It means I'm smarter-
I.e
Not just OBSCENE!

of course theyre harder to create.
but use it! =its smart in this debate

your heart will have to wait
for an, intelligent fate

its relevant, mate lol


mr brit:


understand, that it-

could be good 4 U  to quit!


Because if your skill is shit?..Youyou'll

HaveNOdouble rhyme?
=
Your just a troubled mind-
someone could find
2 be-
a little blind
=
to the FACT


Double rhyme, has an IMPACT
That you, don't understand-

With the cards in your hand
SO, no offense, but pretend-

At least to kind'A SEE my POINT
nevermind I run this joint
as if wise; you disapoint

....me a little.


how many poems , have you even posted
(THATS A RIDDLE)
...perhaps if would practice?
then u wouldnt get roasted
I.E.
(YOUR SHIT STILL)

but youve boasted
every time, youve posted


that your better
while proving your not..

doesnt matter how many words you write,
your screwed  if your plot


includes:

thinking this is anything poetry
this is not hip or rap, so notice the


fact that is no beat that is playing

so therefore, the sylables should-
flow what your sayin

think your on the way in?

i wish it were true
but double rhyme?
its the dish that I spew

and you gotta eat it.
why even hate it
practice made it

what it is today.
random insults?!
are u kiddin me?


its a no go
as far as thinking goes?
u have slow flow
But don't know so
That's why I call
you a homo

This isn't polo

Its POETRY

RHYME is supposed to be

Respected due to skill
And without practice?
you have mail

your delustions are Real
No matter
What conclusions you feel

Your illusion of skill
Is far from top of the hill
its awkward you still


Don't u get it?!
....your lame!
&
If u were committed?
I woulda read it

but i know your style
all it is, written pile
of shit

you
CANT MATCH IT

with out rhyme talent

noo more kills pathetic
I kinda think your an addict
whose in need of a medic
(anti phycotics)
your rants are narotic
your not a product
(of practice)
my words ?
jumping back flips
over yours

get off the crack
and lets hear some sober words
or nobil thirst
instead rhymingthe worst
your probly be first

with your motivation
but currently
i feel sorry for ya
-
u cause me NO frustration



Or scitzophrenic



You wanna talk about hip hop?
Post me a link when your shit drop

But unless rhymes are tip top?

Your skill will just flip flop


Why can't you learn
Double rhyme concern

Your trouble? I discern

That in the end, u will learn


At least I'm pretty sure
Because
In hip hop

Your skill, would persevere

As quality


I post policy:
..Rhyme SKILL!

DO YA FOLLOW ME?


So swallow your pride
Show concern when u write

Then maybe you might.


Win with that heart to keep going
But until you see u need
To uphill what your following


And raise the quality of it?
you wont even impress
a child who follows the muppets

you rhyme like a puppet



i.e its all a fake show
so say what u want
but please dont mistake  no.


non rhyme as better

thinking its tuffer than leather

that shit couldnt be more cheesy-


IF U STUFF IT WITH CHEDDER!

fuck u do better

then claim your real
with a flame to feel

your insanes the deal
if u truly, want
to gain appeal

do what i say
and take my advice

or else the judge will think

you gotta head full of lice


and no brain

you show pain

with your dream


of winning with no skill
your battle is up hill

this is me nice
not caring of wise

so spare me your wise

to everyone who is not an idiot?
can feel your demise
no matter your tries

my skill soars & flies

far above yours
why even bother
give up, or


double rhyme
perhaps then
for me its trouble time

but hate to burst your bubble, I'm

working double time
with my skill in rhyme

kapeesh








Madintellect
Mike stew
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Ricky song one
Im not done

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Rivky song two
I RHYME POO :-P

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ricky song three:
My skill-
STINKS STRONGLY

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Ricky song four:
I have no skill for war

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Ricky song five:
Scitzophrenia thrive

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See ricky, i can copy u
Now u can admit
That your the-
Shittiest poo

No winnin for you

Youve been mixed
In the stew


That is poisenious


NO ONE ENJOYS YOU DISS

Madintellect
Mike stew
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Ricky you suck budz

Practice skill

OR SHUT THE FUCK
UP!


i am annoying myself even copy'in your crap

Ever word you spit has got'en cock slaapt!

Mr i cannot rap

Mr hand me a flap

Of pcp


So i can rant needlessly

Hahaha

Make like a goast
AND BECOME INVISIBLE

your no

Skilled sylable animal

And i am a canible

Whose landing skill

To brand you well




fucking wanker

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Ricky

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Has

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Zero

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Rhyme skill

and thats a fricken fact

Your just a chicken, who slacked

With no written impact

To get him on track

Basically

Ricky IS....WHACK!!!!!!

the end (for rickey)  



nobody is cheering ya rick
face it
you do suck at the most important part of hip hop...

Rhyme skill


THE END

ps

write a poem or two ya fucking moron

PRACTICE MAKE PERFECT


Cheers




Madintellect
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Aaaw shit....
I didnt think it was over already
Oops lol


Disregard anything thats over the time i guess

Cheers regardless

No hard feeling rick


Peace

the end

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Does anybody know what happened the the host of this competition?? Hopefully he's ok. Pm me if you know what's up k

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