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hiphop battle.

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
Canada 4awards
Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

Im best i can possibly be haha its true(Jk i could.always do better) this hip.hop battle goes against what i stand for but ignorance is bliss. Some times its good to diss another tmake your feel ok.. As shallow as that may sound. Cheers bro.. U get an A++ for effort in my books.  Practice makes perfect. You just need to perfect your technique a.little is all.

Yyyaaaaaaaawn

Sleep=
yaaaaaaaaaaawn!  Zzz

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lightbaron
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Joined 19th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 2374

Lil' ricky is a particularly tricky prick to discuss:
The silly bastard does have passion
but in an entirely fucked up fashion
He's like a meth head looking for zen
in a garden of sudafed and eminems
harvesting nothing but bad timing.
And the pen game is just fucking trash
Barely edible, double syllable, triple wack.
Be more embarressed dog. Please.
Why you have any self esteem is beyond me
You got chesters rubbing their titties
over your words and their immaturity
You are amazingly oblivious. Obvious. Painfully.
You post too damn much. Go outside, pack a lunch
go to the park, read a book, talk about some stuff.
Be more interesting, or more frugal with your yap
no lie man, in real life you woulda been smacked
and I aint the tough guy but with you its simple math

one schmuck
that cant shut the fuck up
plus us, that have had enough
equals a mandate of forced hush
you can call it tough love

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Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
Canada 4awards
Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

Can u count rickey?
All your fingers?

Yelllout: "pick me!"


And your toes to..
Hahaha my double rhymes?
flow true!

You have no two...


In any of your verses
u need a solid surface

Of quality,
To deserve this.



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Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
Canada 4awards
Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

Stare sight glarin
slay.words of light baron
without even slight carin haha biiiiaaach
lol

Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
Canada 4awards
Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

Your mind fucks
Your blind clucks

u fucking chicken
learn 2 count
U suck start quitten


K mart im betting...



Is where u work
i prepare 2 lurk
and care to jerk


your rhyme. Into the shredder
ive competed with better

stay seated!  You better
repeated each letter
needed ease better

Im llike were the fraser meets.the vedder

your loosing blood soon consider

ill take on challenges througj all weather

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Madintellect
Mike stew
Fire of Insight
Canada 4awards
Joined 29th Mar 2014
Forum Posts: 232

Your akl done. My cell?!

lightbaron
Dangerous Mind
United States 15awards
Joined 19th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 2374

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Nah, you right.... Them for real raw dog cats are the ones that get all grizzly on line

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