Who has the most sinister mind, spirt, and soul?

Devilish said:Lmao i Promise you were the first person that ran through my mind the moment i saw the thread.. I swear. lol.

That's funny. If you mean me, then I'm flattered. Welcome to the party

forgive me


forgive me father, for I have sinned
I murdered three women
their names were Mary, Esther and Eve

Mary was a spineless whore
who gave me blowjobs behind the
convenience store
her lips were sweeter than any cunt
her anus smelled like roses
when I slapped her she called me Moses
I slit her throat and still she smiled
I just couldn’t bear that ugly fucking grin
so I stabbed her six times in the face
then I disembowelled her slowly
she is hanging by her entrails as we speak
her blood, her flesh, her spirit – oh so weak

Esther was a part-time model
she always smiled and winked at me
I was so in love with her
my mind was in a constant blur
one day I asked her on a date
with the intent of violent rape
but the clever bitch knew her fate
she knew she would be my bait
she scolded me, looked at me in total disgust
as if my intentions were just pure morbid lust
before she could run away
I grabbed her by the throat
I strangled the living fuck out of her
I mutilated her corpse with a razor blade
for no particular reason did my erection fade
she is laying in a ditch as we speak
her blood screaming to the skies – seeking
the ear of the wise

Eve was an alcoholic
a failed artist and one motherfucking strange slut
her droolings always causing a flood
she was just good for a stress-relieving fuck
she was obsessed with her pet snake – his name
was Drake
she loved him more than my cum
which was pretty fucking dumb
I bludgeoned her to death with my baseball bat
her face was so goddamn flat

please forgive me father
please forgive me
please
stop staring at me in the
fucking mirror

Season of War
(Part II “The Journey”)

The voice was misplaced
A human’s voice in a demons body
Spreading  its wings wide
An incantation sprang from its maw and
The world closed in on me
Snatching me up it threw into its waiting jaws
I was not alone
A clutch of glowing orbs waited inside
Wallowing in the stench of its mouthy secretions
The serpentine usher showed me to my seat
Up it leapt and hovered
The very ground opened to swallow us whole
With a rush of wind, we were gone
Into the all encompassing darkness we were carried
Horrid screams emanated from the depths of this abyss
Some human, some not
The stench of rotting and burning flesh
Permeated every screaming mouth there
As the intensity of our screams increased
I saw the demon smile devilishly,
Taking pleasure in our suffering
My mind raced with constructed beings of horror waiting for me
I struggled to silence my minds ramblings of the things they would do
But it had gone insane in the moment and
All I could do was scream
Fire erupted from the demons nostrils and
The darkness was illuminated for an instant
A bequest not welcome to its benefactors
Hoards of demons,
All ravenous and blood soaked
Writhed over one another
Ripping flesh from human bodies
Their prey still alive screamed in agony and terror
Helpless to stop the unholy beast attacks
Starving and lusting for fresh meat
A frenzied rush sprang throughout the chasm
As the beasts raced to quench their unholy appetites
Bathing in gushing crimson sheets of blood from their feast
They trundled on the cadavers with delight
It stained and permeated the brimstone and fire around them
As we sailed overhead
We were seen and they shrieked in pleasure
Of the banquet yet to come
Ghastly, soul gouging human howls
Pleading for mercy
In a merciless place
From the screaming occupants served up for their sins
Breaks through the brutal, surreal scene
It was deafening and
Could be heard
Above the rapture of the beasts pleasured moans
It sliced threw me with one torrid blow
I cover my ears but to no avail
I cannot keep them out
The sweet serenity of unconsciousness eludes us all and
We must suffer this as it is only the beginning of our condemnation
We are still screaming as we reappear in a vast cavernous dwelling
The place smells of rotting flesh and death
Arches of white marble walls
Dappled with golden gates
Rise from the ground and vanish into the ceilings miles above
Enormous flying fireflies illuminate the ceiling
With an eerie fluorescent glow
Numerous, gigantic, white marbled angels, wearing golden armor, muscles bulging
Strain to hold the walls erect
From some, unseen force
Trying to topple them down
Broken pieces of weapons lie about
Amongst the bones and amputated flesh
Torches light the cavern as we enter and
Our host spits us out disgusted with our taste
Without a second look it quickly turns and disappears
To bring another ill-fated group of predestined inmates, no doubt
Reanimated, born into an unholy place
Quivering, drenched with demon saliva
We are surrounded by other souls
Pieces of flesh dapple their faces and bodies
Zombies dressed in old garbs from different eras gone by stand silent
Watching us as though we are the freaks in this madhouse
Sickened by it all we heave the living essence from our phantom bodies and
The orgy begins
They fight one another for this glorious gift
We have bestowed on them
They lap it up with the fervor of a starving man at his first meal
We are all aghast and frightened by this
We cower at their feet waiting to be torn piece by piece and
Consumed by this undead hoard but
Before our eyes they turn human once again and are able to speak
You are at the gates of hell in the Dead’s World
The leader denotes
To protect the Living World
Your futures are set here
You must obey and fight to complete your judgment
You will battle or be condemned to the other side
The one you glimpsed when you entered here
True Hell!
All body functions cease to exist
You are dead
Save for replenishing the divine essence of life
Which you will consume during the arrival of replacements and
As the watch keepers see fit to bestow upon us
It said and pointed towards the fireflies
We wept as children
With no shame of being adults
For we were children here
With new slates to be filled
With rules and boundaries
Courage and hope
Condemned to fight both the demons
Trying to invade the living world and
The fear threatening to condemn us
To a more horrid existence

暗い悪夢****kurai akumu

Dance dance to thy evil song
We all must sing and play along
But to self and by own must make a lead  
To make your own egocentric breed
Killing me softly with the various doubts  
Not knowing at all what this is about
My little light that's left in me  
I have to find out what ye it ot be
Sketch the picture and draw it well
Morphine in all is my inadequate spell
Swap crop and Dance once more
Till the sun dies out and melts to core

La la la boku wa tsuyoi da,
boku wa tsuyoi da
 

To the melody once has gone no more
Evil she is we all just see
It's plan and simple it must be
But must she die this dreadful way
In her grave we all watch her in place she lay
No longer have light in this the dark room
revolting of all floats the tumb

versus  leap like the rock on thou art to wreck
A part of you has grown in her what did you expect?
No longer this melody repeats the play
Knees and hands children pray.

She sought her soul she could not see
she fought the god preached by thee

questions whispered with made trees fall
but if ye lack love thou art shall call

so fantasy and dreams may never come true
this girl was the akuma deep within you

Dance dance to thy evil song
We all must sing and play along
there is no light thats left in she
to find out what happened we ot to see

-Kumiko yamamoto  
boku wa tsuyoi da- im strong

Alice in wonderland

you think it's a fairy tail
nicely told sweet and well

but all of whats told by she..
isn't what her eyes can see.

she was sucked into a vortex of
bodies that decay.
whispering words to her
even i cant say,

paranoid, insane
told not a meth..
such a wonderland she thought because
it seem not real.

a mirror that she sees
the demons in her place.
darkness and evil, carved apone her face.

no clouds no sun, no light that appear.
creepy it was..
Alice surrounded by all her fear.

her mind shakes, brakes and fall..
no matter how loud she screams
her voice wont call.

not a place of god a place of spiritual hearts
only darkness and evil ready to tear apart.

run Alice run, try to save her soul
never should have Alice fallowed Akumas roul

eyes tearing, Dark red blood that fell....
Alice is stuck in the hibbits of hell.


Kumiko Yamamoto

Little Kevin, one of seven.
Lying on the cold ground.
With his love, no where to be found.
He was sold to the "Devil" himself.
The Devil being his, Mother, of course.
The Devil pushing him in the murky black waters.
" Oh.. My poor baby, Dont worry I will clean you" my Mother spoke in a sarcastic tone.
This was her "game".
Everyday is the same.
She made my neck blue and purple.
She pushed me, until I saw the bubbles leave my lips.
The demon gladly sips on my soul.
Dearest mother, why do you hate me so?
I thrashed and struggled under her grip, but it was a half nelson.
Mother left me there is the cold waters, half alive.
"Please come back for me Mother I want to live!" I pleaded to her.
spiders closed in around me trapping me in their cold silk.
Mother put duct tape over my mouth.
How many months will she leave me here?
She held a scythe or was it a bat? over my head.
Red dripped as she looked at me like a creature.
" You should have known better a "it" is never worth dime to God" mother said.
Is there a heaven for a "it"?
God would never allow a flithy boy into his kingdom.
Hiding behind the mask, to protect the scars mother made.
" Now put your head up!" Mother says.
I obey her, who wouldn't?
Putting a cold silver blade at my neck.
Until it drips red.
" Mother.. Please dont kill me, I want to live" I pleaded with Death.
Why do the angels of darkness wait for my soul to make a final cry of mortal terror?
All little Kevin can think is why.
Was it because he was an "it"?
The reflection of "it" showed a sweet little boy or was it a demon reflection?
Heaven forsaked him.
Hell forsaked him.
Mother forsaked him.
"it" forsaked itself.
No one will ever love this seven year old creature.
But now he can forsake others with his silver blade.
Oh... This little boy will have it's day.
but only until his mother of Death, stops killing him.
Little Kevin, one of seven.
has been forsakened by all... indeed.

I hate you for reasons you know very well
For what you put me through and all of that hell
Getting me drunk, getting me high
You left me passed out waiting to die

It was long ago that we were friends of sorts
We were drinking, smoking, and partying cohorts
Inseparable, we lived the same life
You always caused me chaos and tons of strife

Years have passed since our paths crossed; my memory fades
We haven’t seen each other for more than a few decades
Remind me why we were friends
And the story of our friendship and if it ever ends

I’m sure there will come a time when we will meet again
Oh how I would like to tell you how much I hate you, my friend
And that I know that you used me; I used you
Instead of one person, you made me two

There was the fake, pretty, good girl named Sandy
And sometimes she appeared as the real, ugly, always bad girl named Mandy
Whenever we were together, people were in trouble
We would crash parties; make everyone see double

You were trash, and I was treasure
I hate that you used me for your own selfish pleasure
At a time when I was young, afraid, and innocent
And when mother said that I made my bed, and I had to now lay in it

Little did she know that you were the bad seed
It would take years to release your hold, I would almost bleed
Over the pain of change, the release of emotion
Thank you, for the years of undivided devotion

You wouldn’t leave me when I asked you to go
And people never knew that we hurt each other so
Time has healed and the past is now gone and that’s a fact
So stay away from me you little vixen; the former me is never coming back

Congrats Hades I knew you'd win with your dark sinister soul you rule!!!

Congrats also to Darker Half you had some wicked entries

Thank you for the a great comp. and choosing me as a runner up with respect Crim

Woohoo! Thanks for the win and this very entertaining competition. Such great entries all around. Congrats to my good friends, Darker and Crim, well played.

Big Congratulations to you Hades!!
You take this win by a long shot!!

It's an honer to be among awesome writers.
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