Poetry competition CLOSED 3rd June 2011 7:06am
WINNER
Anonymous
Anonymous
WINNER
Dragonyear
Dragonyear
Fictious Character Story Poem Challenge
Poetry Contest Description
Now that this site has outgrown to such an array of beautiful and vivid variety poets I am inviting you all to create a fictious character of your own and frame a story poem not more than in 300 words.
Dear All,
I have hardly run any competitions in this site except one I remember in my earlier days.
Now that this site has outgrown to such an array of beautiful and vivid variety poets I am inviting you all to create a fictious character of your own, new and never heard before, can be funny, evil, ordinary, super-hero, mythic or anybody, a girl or a boy, a man or a woman, a knight or a king or a Queen, may be a soldier and frame a story poem not more than in 300 words.
I think it can be an interesting contest with so many of you talented people around.
I will judge my favorite within a 4 weeks time.c
I have hardly run any competitions in this site except one I remember in my earlier days.
Now that this site has outgrown to such an array of beautiful and vivid variety poets I am inviting you all to create a fictious character of your own, new and never heard before, can be funny, evil, ordinary, super-hero, mythic or anybody, a girl or a boy, a man or a woman, a knight or a king or a Queen, may be a soldier and frame a story poem not more than in 300 words.
I think it can be an interesting contest with so many of you talented people around.
I will judge my favorite within a 4 weeks time.c
you being such a stickler for the rules sir, you must have overlooked the part where the gentleman said " new and never heard before" .not to take away from "The mad king" as its pretty good.i cant help feeling however that you would be the first person to point out the obvious discrepancy.
Anonymous
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Wonder gg
She breaks brick walls with her freshly done nails
She wears the latest fashion with all the glitz and glam
No custume for her she wants to be like you and me
But she different she sees everyone in there undies
She walks this earth everyday looking for fires to put out with her
Killer toes that squirt out water kinda like a hose
This woman does it all dressed in gucci and prada
With her beautiful jet pack bedazzled and jeweled
She's one tough cookie
I wouldn't play her for a fool ;))))
She breaks brick walls with her freshly done nails
She wears the latest fashion with all the glitz and glam
No custume for her she wants to be like you and me
But she different she sees everyone in there undies
She walks this earth everyday looking for fires to put out with her
Killer toes that squirt out water kinda like a hose
This woman does it all dressed in gucci and prada
With her beautiful jet pack bedazzled and jeweled
She's one tough cookie
I wouldn't play her for a fool ;))))
[quote]Gg78 said:
Wonder gg
She breaks brick walls with her freshly done nails
She wears the latest fashion with all the glitz and glam
No custume for her she wants to be like you and me
But she different she sees everyone in there undies
She walks this earth everyday looking for fires to put out with her
Killer toes that squirt out water kinda like a hose
This woman does it all dressed in gucci and prada
With her beautiful jet pack bedazzled and jeweled
She's one tough cookie
I wouldn't play her for a fool ;))))
Really, Quite strange and interesting she is and one really have to be sure for their undies...she's got x-ray eyes:-)
Wonder gg
She breaks brick walls with her freshly done nails
She wears the latest fashion with all the glitz and glam
No custume for her she wants to be like you and me
But she different she sees everyone in there undies
She walks this earth everyday looking for fires to put out with her
Killer toes that squirt out water kinda like a hose
This woman does it all dressed in gucci and prada
With her beautiful jet pack bedazzled and jeweled
She's one tough cookie
I wouldn't play her for a fool ;))))
Really, Quite strange and interesting she is and one really have to be sure for their undies...she's got x-ray eyes:-)
[quote]David.S said:
I call him Viddax, and here is one poem (I have a few) that suit these purposes:http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/1992/
Well, Quite an intelligent piece of work and I apologize for not having read it before. Welcome to the contest Viddax.
I call him Viddax, and here is one poem (I have a few) that suit these purposes:
Well, Quite an intelligent piece of work and I apologize for not having read it before. Welcome to the contest Viddax.
[quote]anandosen said:
[quote][quoted=competitions--648-0-5]Gg78 said:
Wonder gg
She breaks brick walls with her freshly done nails
She wears the latest fashion with all the glitz and glam
No custume for her she wants to be like you and me
But she different she sees everyone in there undies
She walks this earth everyday looking for fires to put out with her
Killer toes that squirt out water kinda like a hose
This woman does it all dressed in gucci and prada
With her beautiful jet pack bedazzled and jeweled
She's one tough cookie
I wouldn't play her for a fool ;))))
[/quote
Yes really.. I pegged her good then because thats me strange and unique
:) it stays lol
Really, Quite strange and interesting she is and one really have to be sure for their undies...she's got x-ray eyes:-)
[quote][quoted=competitions--648-0-5]Gg78 said:
Wonder gg
She breaks brick walls with her freshly done nails
She wears the latest fashion with all the glitz and glam
No custume for her she wants to be like you and me
But she different she sees everyone in there undies
She walks this earth everyday looking for fires to put out with her
Killer toes that squirt out water kinda like a hose
This woman does it all dressed in gucci and prada
With her beautiful jet pack bedazzled and jeweled
She's one tough cookie
I wouldn't play her for a fool ;))))
[/quote
Yes really.. I pegged her good then because thats me strange and unique
:) it stays lol
Really, Quite strange and interesting she is and one really have to be sure for their undies...she's got x-ray eyes:-)
Seeing as you have not stipulated one entry per person then I enter the following piece as well. If there is a one-piece limit as well, then accept this completely new piece as my entry. The other is a favour from me. Might be worth something some day.
This piece is about a fictional God, so that fits into myth I suppose.http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/18984/
This piece is about a fictional God, so that fits into myth I suppose.http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/18984/
[quote]David.S said:
Seeing as you have not stipulated one entry per person then I enter the following piece as well. If there is a one-piece limit as well, then accept this completely new piece as my entry. The other is a favour from me. Might be worth something some day.
This piece is about a fictional God, so that fits into myth I suppose.http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/18984/
Even though I will entertain both of your entries after reading them but I think that this one fits much better in the context of what I have set over-here.
Fellow scholars! I need more of your talents out there and here.
Seeing as you have not stipulated one entry per person then I enter the following piece as well. If there is a one-piece limit as well, then accept this completely new piece as my entry. The other is a favour from me. Might be worth something some day.
This piece is about a fictional God, so that fits into myth I suppose.http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/18984/
Even though I will entertain both of your entries after reading them but I think that this one fits much better in the context of what I have set over-here.
Fellow scholars! I need more of your talents out there and here.
Behind fake courage i hide
Just another nameless one arriving on a foreign shore
My comrades and i equal in our fear
Vomit and piss coat our boots
Bragging about the ladies is replaced by prayer
We alight on shallow water
Poor guy next to me looses his head
before we even reach the sand
I didn't know him too well but his wife is called Suzie
He showed her picture to anyone who'd look
Poor proud bastard
Advancing through a labyrinth of carnage
Ones before us crawl and bleed
Ebbing waves cradle the bodies of braves
In salt and red they marinate like meat soup
This God-forsaken beach is no place for cowards
I make it to a trench with my metal girl at the ready
Finger on her little trigger so i can make her spray some jacketed 'fuck-you's'
Too late
Copper-plated rain drenches me
Runs right through my frame
My legs resemble badly cut butcher meat
I can see a man behind me, searching for his arm, through my flapping eye
Which hangs down my cheek catching in the wind
So this is it?
Shit.
I didn't even get the chance
To take one of the bastards with me..
Just another nameless one arriving on a foreign shore
My comrades and i equal in our fear
Vomit and piss coat our boots
Bragging about the ladies is replaced by prayer
We alight on shallow water
Poor guy next to me looses his head
before we even reach the sand
I didn't know him too well but his wife is called Suzie
He showed her picture to anyone who'd look
Poor proud bastard
Advancing through a labyrinth of carnage
Ones before us crawl and bleed
Ebbing waves cradle the bodies of braves
In salt and red they marinate like meat soup
This God-forsaken beach is no place for cowards
I make it to a trench with my metal girl at the ready
Finger on her little trigger so i can make her spray some jacketed 'fuck-you's'
Too late
Copper-plated rain drenches me
Runs right through my frame
My legs resemble badly cut butcher meat
I can see a man behind me, searching for his arm, through my flapping eye
Which hangs down my cheek catching in the wind
So this is it?
Shit.
I didn't even get the chance
To take one of the bastards with me..
[quote]violet said:
Behind fake courage i hide
Just another nameless one arriving on a foreign shore
My comrades and i equal in our fear
Vomit and piss coat our boots
Bragging about the ladies is replaced by prayer
We alight on shallow water
Poor guy next to me looses his head
before we even reach the sand
I didn't know him too well but his wife is called Suzie
He showed her picture to anyone who'd look
Poor proud bastard
Advancing through a labyrinth of carnage
Ones before us crawl and bleed
Ebbing waves cradle the bodies of braves
In salt and red they marinate like meat soup
This God-forsaken beach is no place for cowards
I make it to a trench with my metal girl at the ready
Finger on her little trigger so i can make her spray some jacketed 'fuck-you's'
Too late
Copper-plated rain drenches me
Runs right through my frame
My legs resemble badly cut butcher meat
I can see a man behind me, searching for his arm, through my flapping eye
Which hangs down my cheek catching in the wind
So this is it?
Shit.
I didn't even get the chance
To take one of the bastards with me..
This is a fabulous entry Violet. So this competition seems lil tough because I cannot see many entries but those here already are awesome to judge. I compel you artists to post more and more.
Behind fake courage i hide
Just another nameless one arriving on a foreign shore
My comrades and i equal in our fear
Vomit and piss coat our boots
Bragging about the ladies is replaced by prayer
We alight on shallow water
Poor guy next to me looses his head
before we even reach the sand
I didn't know him too well but his wife is called Suzie
He showed her picture to anyone who'd look
Poor proud bastard
Advancing through a labyrinth of carnage
Ones before us crawl and bleed
Ebbing waves cradle the bodies of braves
In salt and red they marinate like meat soup
This God-forsaken beach is no place for cowards
I make it to a trench with my metal girl at the ready
Finger on her little trigger so i can make her spray some jacketed 'fuck-you's'
Too late
Copper-plated rain drenches me
Runs right through my frame
My legs resemble badly cut butcher meat
I can see a man behind me, searching for his arm, through my flapping eye
Which hangs down my cheek catching in the wind
So this is it?
Shit.
I didn't even get the chance
To take one of the bastards with me..
This is a fabulous entry Violet. So this competition seems lil tough because I cannot see many entries but those here already are awesome to judge. I compel you artists to post more and more.
