Poetry competition CLOSED 24th November 2009 5:20pm
WINNER
CruelHandedWriter (Jamie Rhodes)
CruelHandedWriter (Jamie Rhodes)
RUNNERS-UP:
Merda
and roonerspism
Love-letter Competition
In this Dream like World
I'm lost with this girl
She swoons to my every touch
Until we are lost in a spiral of lust
In her eyes I can feel no Pain
Im my eyes she can see no shame
With her love, I have no fear
Its a call that always draws me near
With her, my last days I will spend
Love from the beginning, and love to the end
I'm lost with this girl
She swoons to my every touch
Until we are lost in a spiral of lust
In her eyes I can feel no Pain
Im my eyes she can see no shame
With her love, I have no fear
Its a call that always draws me near
With her, my last days I will spend
Love from the beginning, and love to the end
Anonymous
Im afraid the competition is over Juvi, but thank you for your sweet little poem.
raindreams said:
All DUPers out here
Here is a competition for you, well perhaps on the most misappropriated word in history or herstory or whatever.Write the best love-letter u can think of.It can be dark or bright.It can be on love lost or love gained. It can be any kind of love even.It can be of any length. Make it in free verse. I cant wait to read your entries, er, I hope there will be some---
LAST DATE FOR SUBMISSION IS 14th OF NOVEMBER
I await
Priya
All DUPers out here
Here is a competition for you, well perhaps on the most misappropriated word in history or herstory or whatever.Write the best love-letter u can think of.It can be dark or bright.It can be on love lost or love gained. It can be any kind of love even.It can be of any length. Make it in free verse. I cant wait to read your entries, er, I hope there will be some---
LAST DATE FOR SUBMISSION IS 14th OF NOVEMBER
I await
Priya
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IF I DIE WILL YOU CRY?
If l die will you cry
Dear as l laid on my bed tonight
Remembering how beautifully
You have made, decorated my life to be
How you have shown me how love is
It kept me wondering
How it will seem
If you wake up tomorrow
And am gone to the grave of silence
Will you shade tears and cry for me?
I took out my my pen and writes
You this questioning letter;-
If l die will you cry for me dear
I imagine how you will cry
If l die will you surely cry for me?
How will you cry
And if you are to cry
How long will you cry
Is it a seconds, minutes,and hours
Will it be a year,years?
Will you cry my "honey heart"
Will you cry and go hungrying
Looking for me
But how long if you are to search me
Do you think you can find me if dies?
I wonder if you really won't cry
I will be breathtaking
If you don't cry
I will be heart broken if you don't cry
If crying purifies the soul will it do?
Tell me you won't cry
Tell me you will cry
Tell me you won't cry too long
Tell me you will only cry too short
For seeing you cry buries me the more
Sorry for my ugly questionings
Your reply is what am anticipating on
Though don't know what the answer
Might be
But what ever it is l will not cry
Yes l won't cry
For l know am dying yet And you liveth
If finally death comes knocking
I know we will still be in union
In our next world - that will be my joy.
----The Voice Within
IF I DIE WILL YOU CRY?
If l die will you cry
Dear as l laid on my bed tonight
Remembering how beautifully
You have made, decorated my life to be
How you have shown me how love is
It kept me wondering
How it will seem
If you wake up tomorrow
And am gone to the grave of silence
Will you shade tears and cry for me?
I took out my my pen and writes
You this questioning letter;-
If l die will you cry for me dear
I imagine how you will cry
If l die will you surely cry for me?
How will you cry
And if you are to cry
How long will you cry
Is it a seconds, minutes,and hours
Will it be a year,years?
Will you cry my "honey heart"
Will you cry and go hungrying
Looking for me
But how long if you are to search me
Do you think you can find me if dies?
I wonder if you really won't cry
I will be breathtaking
If you don't cry
I will be heart broken if you don't cry
If crying purifies the soul will it do?
Tell me you won't cry
Tell me you will cry
Tell me you won't cry too long
Tell me you will only cry too short
For seeing you cry buries me the more
Sorry for my ugly questionings
Your reply is what am anticipating on
Though don't know what the answer
Might be
But what ever it is l will not cry
Yes l won't cry
For l know am dying yet And you liveth
If finally death comes knocking
I know we will still be in union
In our next world - that will be my joy.
----The Voice Within
