Poetry competition CLOSED 12th October 2013 10:17pm
WINNER
case28 (Alexander Case)
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RELIEF!

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1375

Try hard to bring down eye shutters in angry fumes
As they settle, the imaginary meadows open up quick
With their pure dewdrops on pink petals just in blooms
Each one of these diamonds I stare slow, in convex miniatures
I run over my numerous selves as they hold in row arrangement

Full senses put in a centre, hits even brain through bottom
Kudham Aasana, the magical way horses revive youthfulness
Symbol that inspires others’ desire too, is this breathe-in way

Swift transform Earth takes up daily, pains most in sought solitude
Aches of the heart in search of the unknown makes time a ridicule
Their smallest fraction seems the most lengthy journey
with throbs split-up as yearn-ups and blue-downs of a rollercoaster
A Deep-pooja in fills of aromatic white smoke of incense sticks
bears  a holy sign of forehead vermilion with a tilak of red kum-kum
Keeps the self in rambles to descend in a hypnotic twilight spell, dream-laden
Enlightens as it reveal clues to land in a fine serenity

Cravings deep inside gets a hormonal quench in indulgence with 75% or more
cocoa stock of dark chocolate, each bite melts instant, hits almost orgasmic
Congested webs in spin over mindsets of fear and pessimism
drives clear out of jams just by sips of sizzling astringent tea

case28
Alexander Case
Dangerous Mind
42awards
Joined 16th June 2013
Forum Posts: 2084

Deb, I'm glad you found relief in the Animal [feed], I know I did.... was that an overshare???

Well done to all the entries and thanks Deb for running the comp.

PsychicApocalypse
Darker Half
Dangerous Mind
Belize 30awards
Joined 5th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 1483

Congratz Alexander!
Back to back you should be proud... beautiful pieces!!
you deserved those wins!

\m/

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