Poetry competition CLOSED 21st August 2013 6:43am
WINNER
Atakti
Atakti
RUNNER-UP:
Sterling7147
are you better than the person above you?
Okay cool guys remember you get two posts each you can jump in the second time whenever you feel.Evan you still have your third time waiting being you kicked off the whole thing. Remember focus on the person abovr you!
(I smell Lavender)
Raven of Sorrow ... yeah that's some sorrowful shit
A writer who can't read - in the future check the script
Izzi show some love cause God ain't awful, nor the idea
If you can't match, don't piss yourself outta dark fear
Dear dear Madame, there was a party in DUP nation
But I hacked your PM to steal your invitation
See you're not the only one trying to move up the ranks
And why is it Madame? ... You pimpin' out skanks?
I've peeped your ink and your many sweet wins
Seems you do best when you're penning on sins
You've flipped wins on the Erotic and Prohibition too
An affair of the heart? Don't tell me, you didn't screw!?!
You may love lavender, so did the girl in red
She skipped through my woods, hood on her head
Your ink is deep and comes from the heart
But once in forest the wolf must do his part
So watch yourself as you ascend through my woods
Remember the wolf who can take your best goods
Raven of Sorrow ... yeah that's some sorrowful shit
A writer who can't read - in the future check the script
Izzi show some love cause God ain't awful, nor the idea
If you can't match, don't piss yourself outta dark fear
Dear dear Madame, there was a party in DUP nation
But I hacked your PM to steal your invitation
See you're not the only one trying to move up the ranks
And why is it Madame? ... You pimpin' out skanks?
I've peeped your ink and your many sweet wins
Seems you do best when you're penning on sins
You've flipped wins on the Erotic and Prohibition too
An affair of the heart? Don't tell me, you didn't screw!?!
You may love lavender, so did the girl in red
She skipped through my woods, hood on her head
Your ink is deep and comes from the heart
But once in forest the wolf must do his part
So watch yourself as you ascend through my woods
Remember the wolf who can take your best goods
Lobode San Float-er
Hey, big bad wolf AKA LS, remember me?
It’s Mister Case I’m here to state my case
while you make like a dog, licking
your balls, sitting on your own face
Heard what lengths you went to get off
free, for stalking little Red Riding Hood
huffing and puffing three pigs, you’ve drawn
the short straw, going down blowing wood.
Looking at the mess on your chinny-chin-chin
doubt you’re better off than in jail with a brother.
Being a bitch to three honkey cops or a bitch
to your brothers are as bad as each other.
And I see you’re a hacker, it ain’t too bright
admitting you hacked some har-DUP lady
while you listen to some white boy rapper
Slim Shady, it ain’t fucke-DUP, it’s crazy!!!
You think you float and sting like a champ???
Hang up the gloves LS, your poetry is a farse.
Brother you should know, I’m the beekeeper
and I follow you to blow smoke up your arse.
Oh, I can hear you thinking… “My name ain’t
Lobode San Float-er… Mr Case, you forgot the P.”
Well, excuse me Pedro while I jack my leg up
on your rap, to mark my territory and take a pee.
This rhyme was busted out by MC Case.
Floater is slang for a piece of shit that won't flush.
Hey, big bad wolf AKA LS, remember me?
It’s Mister Case I’m here to state my case
while you make like a dog, licking
your balls, sitting on your own face
Heard what lengths you went to get off
free, for stalking little Red Riding Hood
huffing and puffing three pigs, you’ve drawn
the short straw, going down blowing wood.
Looking at the mess on your chinny-chin-chin
doubt you’re better off than in jail with a brother.
Being a bitch to three honkey cops or a bitch
to your brothers are as bad as each other.
And I see you’re a hacker, it ain’t too bright
admitting you hacked some har-DUP lady
while you listen to some white boy rapper
Slim Shady, it ain’t fucke-DUP, it’s crazy!!!
You think you float and sting like a champ???
Hang up the gloves LS, your poetry is a farse.
Brother you should know, I’m the beekeeper
and I follow you to blow smoke up your arse.
Oh, I can hear you thinking… “My name ain’t
Lobode San Float-er… Mr Case, you forgot the P.”
Well, excuse me Pedro while I jack my leg up
on your rap, to mark my territory and take a pee.
This rhyme was busted out by MC Case.
Floater is slang for a piece of shit that won't flush.
Well, lookie here at
Alexander Case,
the mouthy "poet" with his
twisted up face.
Check yourself, mister, with your claims
of coherence,
from over here, your spoutings are
running interference.
Ya promised us words that are
hot, unchecked
to bring girls to the edge
makin' them beg.
Ya, they begged, they begged
you to desist
that torture of boredom, but your
blah bah persists.
Then ya went kinda peace-out
around the knees
fallin' in love with rivers
and those weird trees.
You're some kinky mofo,
damn, you're fast!
Now I see you blowin' smoke
up a wolf's ass.
If that's the shit that
sells DU ads,
well, hell, take notes people,
of Case gone bad.
Alexander Case,
the mouthy "poet" with his
twisted up face.
Check yourself, mister, with your claims
of coherence,
from over here, your spoutings are
running interference.
Ya promised us words that are
hot, unchecked
to bring girls to the edge
makin' them beg.
Ya, they begged, they begged
you to desist
that torture of boredom, but your
blah bah persists.
Then ya went kinda peace-out
around the knees
fallin' in love with rivers
and those weird trees.
You're some kinky mofo,
damn, you're fast!
Now I see you blowin' smoke
up a wolf's ass.
If that's the shit that
sells DU ads,
well, hell, take notes people,
of Case gone bad.
atta girl ataki
tank girl with the dry wit
satirical eye
now what rhymes with ataki? fuck if i know
last thing i want is to steal your show
you beat down that nutcase that pissed on a log
that smashed through the lavender
(without making even 1 bush joke how did he manage that)
and you did it with style, god love ya you did it with sass
you kicked ass
but i just can't help it I'm better than you
your petty alphabetti in lukewarm soup
cooking up a case of ebola in your apron
I'm cooking up a storm in a spoon and its so good...
it'll waste em
im wasted on this, im wasting myself on this thread
say what you like im ahead of the curve, im living, you're dead
you wank off about meter and form but instead
ill whip out a meter and fuck with your head
what? i said I'll charge you for the time
ticktock it's racking up to a dollar sixty nine
smack you up bitch it's sadism and it's hella divine
cause it's me
im so sweet
when i bite off your feet
what a sweet treat to eat little ataki's feet
now she's an imp with a limp! haha
and i'm her goddamn pimp
(love you ataki)
tank girl with the dry wit
satirical eye
now what rhymes with ataki? fuck if i know
last thing i want is to steal your show
you beat down that nutcase that pissed on a log
that smashed through the lavender
(without making even 1 bush joke how did he manage that)
and you did it with style, god love ya you did it with sass
you kicked ass
but i just can't help it I'm better than you
your petty alphabetti in lukewarm soup
cooking up a case of ebola in your apron
I'm cooking up a storm in a spoon and its so good...
it'll waste em
im wasted on this, im wasting myself on this thread
say what you like im ahead of the curve, im living, you're dead
you wank off about meter and form but instead
ill whip out a meter and fuck with your head
what? i said I'll charge you for the time
ticktock it's racking up to a dollar sixty nine
smack you up bitch it's sadism and it's hella divine
cause it's me
im so sweet
when i bite off your feet
what a sweet treat to eat little ataki's feet
now she's an imp with a limp! haha
and i'm her goddamn pimp
(love you ataki)
If I unleashed my passion, my fire,
It would burn you up, honey.
The consequences would be dire
in nature for you, and you who has been so kind,
I find that would make me sad.
If my tongue did have silver,
how would we kiss without me cutting you apart?
It would hurt my heart to hurt you,
so instead I have to step down my style
to duel with one who hasn't a clue.
Why don't you go back to your coner, love
because you can't take me down while spinning me compliments,
you are the sweetest heaven sent
cherub,
with the cutest little bow and arrow, with shots that don't hurt
and only endear you more.
Unfortunately its boring,
but I will entertain
your weak attempted flame.
But keep it comming lovebird,
because this isn't the best I've heard yet,
and we can't forget we own this competition,
so you better take your best shot,
because if that is all you got, then I'll be dissapointed,
and you will be anointed the loser
Evan, thanks for being a good sport!! loved your response!!!
It would burn you up, honey.
The consequences would be dire
in nature for you, and you who has been so kind,
I find that would make me sad.
If my tongue did have silver,
how would we kiss without me cutting you apart?
It would hurt my heart to hurt you,
so instead I have to step down my style
to duel with one who hasn't a clue.
Why don't you go back to your coner, love
because you can't take me down while spinning me compliments,
you are the sweetest heaven sent
cherub,
with the cutest little bow and arrow, with shots that don't hurt
and only endear you more.
Unfortunately its boring,
but I will entertain
your weak attempted flame.
But keep it comming lovebird,
because this isn't the best I've heard yet,
and we can't forget we own this competition,
so you better take your best shot,
because if that is all you got, then I'll be dissapointed,
and you will be anointed the loser
Evan, thanks for being a good sport!! loved your response!!!
the compliments weren't for you
you egotistical shit .
ok now that's out of the way
see i like ataki but you're just some fuckin hipster
whose brain can't catch up to which way her mouth is runnin
oh so you stepped down your style just for me?
that's cute
one more step and you're in the basement, bitch
condescending shit i don't even believe you meant 1 word of it
and fuck what's that in the coner? oh yeah, me
about to fuckin kill you
staple gun you to the floor and scalp you
that's for bein a bitch
cut your tongue in half with a silver scalpel
that's for bein a bitch
garotte you with your fuckin xmas lights, wrapped tight your glottal stops hurt nobody
they're funny
CALL ME HONEY 1 MORE TIME BITCH...
and that's for bein a bitch
see how this gasoline will inflame your passion? burn your fake tan back into fashion again
guarantee you fame worth having as VICTIM #...hell i lost count
a VICTIM of anna grin
so that's for bein a bitch
you still bored? yeah you are, i can see you yawning
god your breath smells like spunk cunt woah look at that
you could fit about 5 cocks in that maw
fuckin hell woman can you dislocate your jaw or somethin
oh but you really didn't know who you were talking down to
a less than stellar show from you
now i wonder who they're gonna give the crown to?
you egotistical shit .
ok now that's out of the way
see i like ataki but you're just some fuckin hipster
whose brain can't catch up to which way her mouth is runnin
oh so you stepped down your style just for me?
that's cute
one more step and you're in the basement, bitch
condescending shit i don't even believe you meant 1 word of it
and fuck what's that in the coner? oh yeah, me
about to fuckin kill you
staple gun you to the floor and scalp you
that's for bein a bitch
cut your tongue in half with a silver scalpel
that's for bein a bitch
garotte you with your fuckin xmas lights, wrapped tight your glottal stops hurt nobody
they're funny
CALL ME HONEY 1 MORE TIME BITCH...
and that's for bein a bitch
see how this gasoline will inflame your passion? burn your fake tan back into fashion again
guarantee you fame worth having as VICTIM #...hell i lost count
a VICTIM of anna grin
so that's for bein a bitch
you still bored? yeah you are, i can see you yawning
god your breath smells like spunk cunt woah look at that
you could fit about 5 cocks in that maw
fuckin hell woman can you dislocate your jaw or somethin
oh but you really didn't know who you were talking down to
a less than stellar show from you
now i wonder who they're gonna give the crown to?
