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Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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Poetry Contest

The new presidents failures
At first i thought it to be a fresh movement for such a change.. But these days i wonder why he hasn't been assassinated. No offense.

unlimited entries
no word limit
new post
collabs welcome..

Write a poem involving the failures and downfall and so called new movement and one nation idea.. I will submit the winning poem on line to the "We the people care" site for Obama.. Not that it may change anything but if one vote really counts so should one poem.. let's get it on.

MGC
7he
Thought Provoker
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From
The People

To
Mr. Obama

To
Mr. President

To
Mr. Mouthpiece

We the sheeple
voted for a hero and got a villain

War is money
money is blood
villains live forever
heroes die young
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It's Just Business Nothing Personal

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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Oh  my god this is awesome.. yes yes yes .. i feel the same way.. mr mouth piece.. how perfect.. thank you .

kriticool
Fire of Insight
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EVERYTHING TO EVERYBODY


http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7054/6967482183_bff0b705f8_z.jpg


300+  amicable words
Pressed into play like fresh turds
Screw that, it’s more like friendly fire
Everybody ain’t gotta know you’re the occasional liar
C’mon son, heard you still "That One"
That sane purr-son to beat on
So this is the catcall…the one naming you to be all
 
::everything to everybody::
 
For the few who choose not to play
You got to show some balls…
C’mon now, enforce or make some new laws
In need of a bunch we all can respect
At least more than you;
See whatchu say ain’t got to be true
Like times before you don’t even have to do nuthin
Just gotta make like you giving up somethin
Somethin substantial…somethin pumpin
Not useless like all that dry humpin; that will not do

::you gotta govern the brethren who don’t flush their mush while sittin in the loo::

Yeah, you already know how they do
You can afford to be milky even if the cow don’t moo
So c’mon now and be that leader…The Interceder
My moms still crazy in love with you…that’s how you do
Goes all the way back to ’04; saw you on that tour
Givin ‘em the “what for”
Our own Lil’ Othello; sure enough we’ll follow

Moms, she’ll even fund raise wearing Hawaiian leis at The Apollo
All the way from here to the rear of Sleepy Hollow
Don’t ask me how; but she still looks good in them leisure suits
Still a Union faithful, never hateful wearing them sky high boots
It’s that Michelle O. style; been into it for a good while
Just like you; yeah we knows it’s true

::Shucks…it’s only them batty bastids of the family that thinks you’re deceitful::

That’s because most of them is jus cranky & feeble
Them haters ain’t the ones allowed to have it both ways
So they bitch and moan about the bone that gets snatched by strays
No worry…we know you 'bout gettin busy
While every other day *Congress all up inna tizzy  
Especially this here 2nd phase
But for the most part we hear you still the craze
So have a blast son, g’wan now get-er-done
‘till then we’ll just fart around in the loo acting like Romney won
See it ain’t a good dump ‘till you add *another one
Where no one remembers how this shift begun









DolphinAmbassador
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 29th Mar 2013
Forum Posts: 13

to obama

second time around, we hoped for
better. change the first
time, but
hope the second.
well, i hope for change, but
we must change for
hope.

mr. president, mr. president,
don’t worry. you didn’t fail us
any more than
bush or
clinton or
other bush.
so don’t worry. you finish
just as above par as
every man before you.

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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Hell yeah thank god we are all on the same page so far.. awesome awesome awesome...

Prudence
Thought Provoker
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Joined 12th July 2012
Forum Posts: 327

I'm not entering but like you said, I too wonder how he hasn't been assassinated by skin heads mostly. Not saying anything on my views I'm just surprised

lotuslover
Gypsy_Rose
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               Masters Of War


Can't fathom all this pain and degradation,
The rich keep getting richer, and the poor face starvation,
We should start an uprising, a positive retaliation.

The government men are going to continue as planned,
Shipping our jobs over to some foreign land
When you think you are ahead, they kick you down where you stand.

Some call it poverty, a recession, some; another great depression,
All I can see is our government's money obsession,
Look back at Nazi Germany's actions for an early reflection.

Unassuming victims that insurance companies deem population control,
All the money you make, can never buy back your soul,
Idiots not realizing, they are digging their bottomless hole.

Political corruption is a constant, fiery battlefield,
Their mode of destruction has yet to be revealed,
All of us know, when shit hits the fan, our fates are sealed.

Trust in your hearts and believe in your minds,
That our government has illegal experiments of all kinds,
Open your eyes and look around at the blatant signs,

They have caused countless, pointless deaths, someones' daughters and sons,
Bring out their fighter jets,tanks, and bullet filled guns,
Masters' of war, causing blood to in amounts that stun.











Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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Perfect.. i love these  i love all of you for entering..

kriticool
Fire of Insight
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Devilish said:Perfect.. i love these  i love all of you for entering..



Oh’BAM!!

From
The People

War is money
money is blood
villains live forever
heroes die young

so don’t worry. you finish
just as above par as
every man before you

All of us know, when shit hits the fan,
our fates are sealed.

(thank you Devilish w/ shoutouts to Gerard-Michael, DolphinAmbassador & Sasha_Renee)

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