Poetry competition CLOSED 27th February 2013 10:19am
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EngrVV (D_Poetic Engineer)
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Love lost and found

Hidden_Flame
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 7th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 82

Poetry Contest

Write a love poem to someone you wished you confessed your love to but never did.
Only 20 lines no more no less.One subission per contestant.Collaboration allowed.

EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 11th Sep 2012
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Silent Quest

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Am I crazy for loving you my Adelaide?
You are smart and lovely, elegant and compassionate;
you were the girl of my dreams, and never been forgotten.
I beseech you to look at the bright side,
and never to forget why we love each other so.

Here I am my love, hearken to my plea--
I love you then and now, but your heart can’t see.
My childhood glances as I caught your sweet smile,
revealed more than what I could say.
Every time I smiled you knew, there was something more.

We parted ways with feelings locked within our young hearts...
There were nights when you silently screamed my name
and I bit my lips as you came into my dreams;
the silhouette of a girl appeared with long flowing hair
walking slowly down the beach as if floating on air.

Then one day you showed up in the flesh;
our bodies were fusioned by our tight embrace,
as we felt the burning sensations through our lips.
Your undying love, hope never to give up
and the power of love brought us back together.

Hidden_Flame
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 7th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 82

Wonder poem EngrVV.It's so deep,so romantic,so wanting.What a great wasy to kick of the competition.

jaspersilence
Fire of Insight
United States 7awards
Joined 12th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 708

     QUANTUM ENTANGLEMENT

I know your curves.
I know your face.
I know your heart.
Not your embrace.

I've longed for comfort
as warm as yours.
I'll never have,
what I don't deserve.

My silent stares.
My desperate eyes.
I hide the hurt.
When you're with those guys.

I've watched you sleep.
until the sun.
Before you wake.
I'm always gone.

Should I give in?
My love explain?
Then I saw the ring.
I was too late.



Hidden_Flame
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 7th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 82

Intense jasper...I can relate to this poems words alot.

EmotiveSoul
Strange Creature
United Kingdom
Joined 9th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 6

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EmotiveSoul
Strange Creature
United Kingdom
Joined 9th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 6

Apologies, didn't have my glasses on. Missed the part about 20 lines!

poet Anonymous


I should've admitted that I loved you once
and attempted to expect so much less
The hate and dismay didn't allow it

At times, I wish I could have that last conversation
and somehow speak it all differently

My strength was my weakness and now you are gone

I hope heaven is all you expected

More than the rest of my deepest desires
I hope you're looking down here and there

You accomplished a few pretty decent things
but nothing as grand as your only offspring

For his sake, I wish I had tried to forget
Just hold the laughs that we shared, as friends
closer in heart than the despair and contempt

I  suppose there were times when I said I loved you

But those times were empty  and it's taken years to see

Although you weren't  ever really the one...
I remember our laughter in the eyes of our son.

Hidden_Flame
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 7th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 82

Very excelent ink Miki.

poet Anonymous

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Hidden_Flame
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 7th Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 82

Excellent!A flame after my own heart!

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