Poetry competition CLOSED 28th January 2013 9:46pm
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EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
United States 40awards
Joined 11th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 2483

Your Bosom: My Respite


Growing up, you cradled me in your bosom
Tolerated my childish acts as I played possum
Even healed my minor pains and common cold
Hope you still remember me in the days of old

Your white sandy beach was our playground
The deep blue yonder was our source of food
Always teeming with fish of different species
Shores abound with clams and tasty sea grasses

Despite your unconditional love and eternal caring
We poisoned you with lethal and toxic mine tailing
Turned a deaf ear to your constant pleading
And completely ignored your total well-being


What have we done­­?... your ungrateful sons

Many got sick, others were maimed and a few have died
Corals,  sea grasses and benthic habitat were also damaged
For many species can't tolerate the turbid waters
Brought about by acid concentrations and metal leachings


Is that your way of reminding us of our follies?

Your pristine ecosystem once untouched by the gods
Slowly begins to heal, but now threatened by floods
Let's do something to strengthen your dock
As tourists from all over are beginning to flock

Countless moons and sleepless nights have passed
Vivid memories of my childhood still alive in the past
Even when you're angry, you let me ride your fifteen-foot wave
You never forsake me no matter how bad I behave

It would be my regret if my weary soul never set foot again
In your beautiful shores - I want to remain
To feel your white sands once more with my bare feet
And to bequeath my body in your bosom: my final respite

poet Anonymous

Thank you very much for your wonderful entry , Shaunda
That was a great poem, the sea that spoke, or was it the ghost of the martimer? Great entry

poet Anonymous

Thanks so much, Engr A worthy cry for need, the sea is in danger and poems such as these are a true blessing!

zenithquasar77
Marcus cooke
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 10awards
Joined 6th Sep 2012
Forum Posts: 88

The Lonely Fisherman’s Prayer

This knife is an ocean
It carries me away
Life in slow motion
My soul washed away.
The sea screams your name
Childish in taunting
This sea will not kill me
Silent in wanting.
Why die today
When I can live tommrow
This sea won’t harm me
Its secrets eternal
My sins washed away
I record in my journal.
My family, I miss
I will not falter
This ocean return's me
Through high seas
And water.

hemihead
hemi
Dangerous Mind
New Zealand 13awards
Joined 1st Nov 2010
Forum Posts: 1749

(right...you may as well have this bastard as well


mad-cunt whitey





for 5 nights I drank    
in a grass-floored bar    
on an island in the middle of the pacific    
a tried and tested sailor    
come to paradise    
through a storm big enough    
to earn a few free drinks    
   
each night I’d drink until the meaning of everything    
became clear    
then walk down to the cool sand    
look out to the boat ½ a mile away    
resting quietly in ink-black water    
then strip off my shirt    
stuff it down the back of my jeans    
and swim out  
to her  
   
on the 6th night    
nothing changed    
except everything  
because I got talking to a local brown guy    
who asked me straight    
if I was the mad-cunt whitey    
who'd been swimming out to his boat    
and I said yeah fuck yeah    
with more pride    
than the bible allows    
and he said you know this bay is where the pelagics  
come to rest at night?    
I said no I didn’t know that mate    
but she’ll be right    
   
pelagic  
around here
means shark  
   
so here I am again
standing on the night-cool sand  
looking out over the same dark water    
to the boat    
as waves 2 inches tall leap over my toes    
and the world is a wall of fear    

I wade in  
and the water rising up my body    
narrows my thoughts down    
to right here right now    
and I start to swim as quietly as I can    

making no splash    
 
I last about 10 strokes    
then begin to thrash like a dying fish    
and rocket across the bay    
to come up the side of the boat    
like fucking dolphin-man    
   
the skipper is sitting up in the wheelhouse  
hears me drying off    
and says swimming pretty quick tonight    
and I say yeah thought it was getting a bit late    
and he says oh right and here I was  
thinking someone might have told you    
about the sharks  





Abracadabra
Tyrant of Words
Kiribati 21awards
Joined 13th Nov 2009
Forum Posts: 3470

The Good Ship Hanky-Panky

She sailed from Nantucket with a cargo of beans
bound for auld Ontario by way of Orleans
There was grub in her locker and oil in her tanks
a mattress for money, so they'd no need for banks

Hard biscuits with weevils, soft weevils without
double grog to stay lively before the barrel ran out
and the sea barely whispered before it would shout
No, the sea never gave a damn,
damn, damn
The sea never gave a damn

Then one night on late watch, a pirate they spied
flying pink & velvet crossbones with a glint in his eye
They hailed him with a warning:'Only fools cross our bows.
Keep your hands in your pockets, that course ain't allowed'
But the sea ate the words, as she ravished their shrouds
No, the sea never gives a damn,
damn, damn
The sea never gives a damn

Ashore when a woman lets her beauty unfurl
you know where you're headed if she gives you a twirl
but on a long voyage salt shines like a pearl
'till you're no longer certain when a boy's not a girl
though the sea never gives a damn,
damn, damn
The sea never gives a damn

With foul winds recorded in the storm of their dread
marooned miles from nowhere, nine points off their head
they thought about jumping but clung on instead
and I don't think the sea gave a damn
damn, damn
I don't think the sea gives a damn

Now the voyage is over, their fate is revealed
there was not even time to eat their last meal
knocked down in the straits with a rock through the keel
So if they don't want to drown --they better swim like a seal
because the sea doesn't give a damn
damn, damn
The sea doesn't give a damn.

poet Anonymous

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poet Anonymous

Thank you very much Alx, for your wonderful entry to this competition.
I would like to say that due to the high amount of entries, 23 now already, Ill count to 25 and then stop.
MEANING, 25 entries is enough to pick from people...

Due to some stuff in my privat life and work I wont have much time for DU this week

orangesun
Strange Creature
Pakistan 1awards
Joined 30th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 8

City in the sea

Drifting, lashing, groaning, the grand sea slept
Glorious, asleep.
I too, locked in a drowsy spell, muttered in my sleep.
“Are you the sea?” the mermaids asked, the mermaids were looking for a place to stay forever
But they had to be sure this was the sea
I muttered something that they liked
Their voices stroked the inside of my head and
The sea walked around drifting over itself, recreating itself in soft, flowing waves
The waves kept tumbling over each other.
It was like a vast nothingness of everything.
The mermaids were chattering about the weather in the city of the sea
“It is always raining in this city,” one of the mermaids was saying
No I thought, they must be mistaken, it cannot rain in the sea
“But it’s already filled with water” I mumbled
“No” the mermaid turned her face towards me, “I see rain, last year there was a flood”
Flood in the sea?
That rang a bell. I remember the shutters of my brain had been broken.
And the windows had been wet.
The rain had drowned all my socks and my pencils, which I had lost years ago, had turned up.
Only, they were shavings by then.
“Yes, I agreed” it floods every year, she was right after all
After all, last year the shutters of my brain had been broken and all my socks had been drowned
And my pencils had turned up again.
I nodded at her “yes sir, I said, yes sir you are right”
The mermaid smiled at me, and her smile grew brighter till there was an orange accident behind my eye
And the sea swiveled and shook, busting with light and I woke up with a start.
The glare of the empty morning hit my head, and I sat empty and restive on my bed
Wondering if the mermaids were going to live in the city of that sea.

TopsyKretts
Strange Creature
Joined 22nd Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 3

Changing everyday just like the oceans tide . Walking alone even with you by my side . Hiding deep within  the tide of the sea wish i knew what you meant to me. Bleeding me an ocean of mystery , ripples in the tide feeling like thorns in my side for all of which I can not hide. I slowly disappear in the dark like candles without a spark pointless and to no avail wishing just to set sail.

AscensionES
Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
Australia 9awards
Joined 22nd Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 1797

The Oceans and the Black Swan

Commands are given,
the crew stir with haste.
Reef the mainsail
and cast down the oars.
This storm shows us no mercy,
respond in kind
or be taken.
The few I have beside me,
all seek the same.
His goods and his wealth,
cast aside forever.
Once a man makes his choice,
he make no other.
Until he finds his attonement,
may he be free again.

To what end would a man agree,
but the endeavor
of forgiveness?
These only the Swan may give,
can be found in the oceans.
Whether it be the depths
of sub zero trenches.
Or the next harbour one arrives,
it matters little..
Survival isn't the aim,
nor is death.
There's a medium we aspire to
a goal purposely set
to be the end.
It isn't death that sways
or life that phases.

When a man true to his word,
and diehard of his oath.
Finally feel forgiven
from within his soul.
He may depart the vessel,
and set sure foot on land.
That day never comes for many
but those few who find that day
have aged to the tone
of their misery.
Death comes for him.
He always comes..

Those he claims aboard,
the diehard and strong,
welcome him with open arms.
He has no choice now,
death be his fate.
But he dies a free man.
Free of the torment,
his fellow men breathing,
still endure.
As the Black swan,
sails on.

rayheinrich
Death Plane for Teddy
Tyrant of Words
Canada 32awards
Joined 4th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 4409



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           < mighty water >

        close to the breath of the shore
        your sound
        drops from my mouth
 
        sanded      
        birded        
        winded      
        washed in your arms  
        as i mold myself      
        to the in and out of you
        and of the moon      
        pulling our tides
        and of the fish in me  
        begging
        for your hook
       
              - - -


poet Anonymous

Thanks very much, Topsy, Evan and Ray for your entries....I appreciate your works....

DylanThomasPirateM
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 31st Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 15

A Pirate Boy and a Siren Girl
Did you know?
When the rains fall and the winds blow,
When the skies cascade and the leaves swirl
Echos slow
And soft, but true
Water colors green and blue,
A story of both past and new,
'Tween a pirate boy and a siren girl.


The air and sea were one.
All was dark and frightful.

The clouds crackled golden vulcan and icy mist was every breath and a constant creaking from bow to stern whispered of a sailor's death and Neptune's final nightfall.


How he wished to be home again,
A cigar, some gin, a favorite friend,
He'd give all to be home again,
A smoke and drink in the sun.


Then a flash
Now orange and reds
And fire on the sea
Lightning's struck and split the mast
And all the mates, whom he now loved
Forever to the sea
But,
For he,
a sweeter fate,
That of a mermaid's mercy...

♥ "How many young faces had I seen drift by on the oceans wave?
Too many to count.
A welcome sight most always.
How curious?
Bronzed by ages,
Scurrying up and down the lines as mice,
Singing joy,
Straining muscle and sinew.
Sinking in a storm,
I'd called a few,
But no sailor did I save.
But never had I seen a sight like the flame I saw that night,
never had I seen a light quite like the glean that filled the green eyes of this boy."

And from that day...


The air and sun were one.
All was warm and blissful.

Rocky tides were yesterday
Todays and 'morrows that of play
And nights of kisses, thoughtful.
Still,
When the clouds fall down and all the leaves aswirl,
If thunder cracks and lightning sparks
And icy wind is all the air,
Lend an ear to the winter's breeze,
There drifts an ageless love affair
'Tween a pirate boy and a siren girl.
DyMc

poet Anonymous

I like this contest, Mourganna! All the poets here are great, especially that Indigo woman. I hope I can write as good as all of you guys.

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