TWO WINNERS, COLAB MISSY; MRA&AL PLINT
EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
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D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 11th Sep 2012 Forum Posts: 2483
Growing up, you cradled me in your bosom
Tolerated my childish acts as I played possum
Even healed my minor pains and common cold
Hope you still remember me in the days of old
Your white sandy beach was our playground
The deep blue yonder was our source of food
Always teeming with fish of different species
Shores abound with clams and tasty sea grasses
Despite your unconditional love and eternal caring
We poisoned you with lethal and toxic mine tailing
Turned a deaf ear to your constant pleading
And completely ignored your total well-being
What have we done?... your ungrateful sons
Many got sick, others were maimed and a few have died
Corals, sea grasses and benthic habitat were also damaged
For many species can't tolerate the turbid waters
Brought about by acid concentrations and metal leachings
Is that your way of reminding us of our follies?
Your pristine ecosystem once untouched by the gods
Slowly begins to heal, but now threatened by floods
Let's do something to strengthen your dock
As tourists from all over are beginning to flock
Countless moons and sleepless nights have passed
Vivid memories of my childhood still alive in the past
Even when you're angry, you let me ride your fifteen-foot wave
You never forsake me no matter how bad I behave
It would be my regret if my weary soul never set foot again
In your beautiful shores - I want to remain
To feel your white sands once more with my bare feet
And to bequeath my body in your bosom: my final respite
Anonymous
Thank you very much for your wonderful entry , Shaunda
That was a great poem, the sea that spoke, or was it the ghost of the martimer? Great entry
That was a great poem, the sea that spoke, or was it the ghost of the martimer? Great entry
Anonymous
Thanks so much, Engr A worthy cry for need, the sea is in danger and poems such as these are a true blessing!
zenithquasar77
Marcus cooke
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Marcus cooke
Dangerous Mind
10
Joined 6th Sep 2012Forum Posts: 88
The Lonely Fisherman’s Prayer
This knife is an ocean
It carries me away
Life in slow motion
My soul washed away.
The sea screams your name
Childish in taunting
This sea will not kill me
Silent in wanting.
Why die today
When I can live tommrow
This sea won’t harm me
Its secrets eternal
My sins washed away
I record in my journal.
My family, I miss
I will not falter
This ocean return's me
Through high seas
And water.
This knife is an ocean
It carries me away
Life in slow motion
My soul washed away.
The sea screams your name
Childish in taunting
This sea will not kill me
Silent in wanting.
Why die today
When I can live tommrow
This sea won’t harm me
Its secrets eternal
My sins washed away
I record in my journal.
My family, I miss
I will not falter
This ocean return's me
Through high seas
And water.
hemihead
hemi
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hemi
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 1st Nov 2010 Forum Posts: 1749
(right...you may as well have this bastard as well
mad-cunt whitey
for 5 nights I drank
in a grass-floored bar
on an island in the middle of the pacific
a tried and tested sailor
come to paradise
through a storm big enough
to earn a few free drinks
each night I’d drink until the meaning of everything
became clear
then walk down to the cool sand
look out to the boat ½ a mile away
resting quietly in ink-black water
then strip off my shirt
stuff it down the back of my jeans
and swim out
to her
on the 6th night
nothing changed
except everything
because I got talking to a local brown guy
who asked me straight
if I was the mad-cunt whitey
who'd been swimming out to his boat
and I said yeah fuck yeah
with more pride
than the bible allows
and he said you know this bay is where the pelagics
come to rest at night?
I said no I didn’t know that mate
but she’ll be right
pelagic
around here
means shark
so here I am again
standing on the night-cool sand
looking out over the same dark water
to the boat
as waves 2 inches tall leap over my toes
and the world is a wall of fear
I wade in
and the water rising up my body
narrows my thoughts down
to right here right now
and I start to swim as quietly as I can
making no splash
I last about 10 strokes
then begin to thrash like a dying fish
and rocket across the bay
to come up the side of the boat
like fucking dolphin-man
the skipper is sitting up in the wheelhouse
hears me drying off
and says swimming pretty quick tonight
and I say yeah thought it was getting a bit late
and he says oh right and here I was
thinking someone might have told you
about the sharks
mad-cunt whitey
for 5 nights I drank
in a grass-floored bar
on an island in the middle of the pacific
a tried and tested sailor
come to paradise
through a storm big enough
to earn a few free drinks
each night I’d drink until the meaning of everything
became clear
then walk down to the cool sand
look out to the boat ½ a mile away
resting quietly in ink-black water
then strip off my shirt
stuff it down the back of my jeans
and swim out
to her
on the 6th night
nothing changed
except everything
because I got talking to a local brown guy
who asked me straight
if I was the mad-cunt whitey
who'd been swimming out to his boat
and I said yeah fuck yeah
with more pride
than the bible allows
and he said you know this bay is where the pelagics
come to rest at night?
I said no I didn’t know that mate
but she’ll be right
pelagic
around here
means shark
so here I am again
standing on the night-cool sand
looking out over the same dark water
to the boat
as waves 2 inches tall leap over my toes
and the world is a wall of fear
I wade in
and the water rising up my body
narrows my thoughts down
to right here right now
and I start to swim as quietly as I can
making no splash
I last about 10 strokes
then begin to thrash like a dying fish
and rocket across the bay
to come up the side of the boat
like fucking dolphin-man
the skipper is sitting up in the wheelhouse
hears me drying off
and says swimming pretty quick tonight
and I say yeah thought it was getting a bit late
and he says oh right and here I was
thinking someone might have told you
about the sharks
Abracadabra
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 13th Nov 2009Forum Posts: 3470
The Good Ship Hanky-Panky
She sailed from Nantucket with a cargo of beans
bound for auld Ontario by way of Orleans
There was grub in her locker and oil in her tanks
a mattress for money, so they'd no need for banks
Hard biscuits with weevils, soft weevils without
double grog to stay lively before the barrel ran out
and the sea barely whispered before it would shout
No, the sea never gave a damn,
damn, damn
The sea never gave a damn
Then one night on late watch, a pirate they spied
flying pink & velvet crossbones with a glint in his eye
They hailed him with a warning:'Only fools cross our bows.
Keep your hands in your pockets, that course ain't allowed'
But the sea ate the words, as she ravished their shrouds
No, the sea never gives a damn,
damn, damn
The sea never gives a damn
Ashore when a woman lets her beauty unfurl
you know where you're headed if she gives you a twirl
but on a long voyage salt shines like a pearl
'till you're no longer certain when a boy's not a girl
though the sea never gives a damn,
damn, damn
The sea never gives a damn
With foul winds recorded in the storm of their dread
marooned miles from nowhere, nine points off their head
they thought about jumping but clung on instead
and I don't think the sea gave a damn
damn, damn
I don't think the sea gives a damn
Now the voyage is over, their fate is revealed
there was not even time to eat their last meal
knocked down in the straits with a rock through the keel
So if they don't want to drown --they better swim like a seal
because the sea doesn't give a damn
damn, damn
The sea doesn't give a damn.
She sailed from Nantucket with a cargo of beans
bound for auld Ontario by way of Orleans
There was grub in her locker and oil in her tanks
a mattress for money, so they'd no need for banks
Hard biscuits with weevils, soft weevils without
double grog to stay lively before the barrel ran out
and the sea barely whispered before it would shout
No, the sea never gave a damn,
damn, damn
The sea never gave a damn
Then one night on late watch, a pirate they spied
flying pink & velvet crossbones with a glint in his eye
They hailed him with a warning:'Only fools cross our bows.
Keep your hands in your pockets, that course ain't allowed'
But the sea ate the words, as she ravished their shrouds
No, the sea never gives a damn,
damn, damn
The sea never gives a damn
Ashore when a woman lets her beauty unfurl
you know where you're headed if she gives you a twirl
but on a long voyage salt shines like a pearl
'till you're no longer certain when a boy's not a girl
though the sea never gives a damn,
damn, damn
The sea never gives a damn
With foul winds recorded in the storm of their dread
marooned miles from nowhere, nine points off their head
they thought about jumping but clung on instead
and I don't think the sea gave a damn
damn, damn
I don't think the sea gives a damn
Now the voyage is over, their fate is revealed
there was not even time to eat their last meal
knocked down in the straits with a rock through the keel
So if they don't want to drown --they better swim like a seal
because the sea doesn't give a damn
damn, damn
The sea doesn't give a damn.
Anonymous
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Anonymous
Thank you very much Alx, for your wonderful entry to this competition.
I would like to say that due to the high amount of entries, 23 now already, Ill count to 25 and then stop.
MEANING, 25 entries is enough to pick from people...
Due to some stuff in my privat life and work I wont have much time for DU this week
I would like to say that due to the high amount of entries, 23 now already, Ill count to 25 and then stop.
MEANING, 25 entries is enough to pick from people...
Due to some stuff in my privat life and work I wont have much time for DU this week
orangesun
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Strange Creature
1
Joined 30th Dec 2012Forum Posts: 8
City in the sea
Drifting, lashing, groaning, the grand sea slept
Glorious, asleep.
I too, locked in a drowsy spell, muttered in my sleep.
“Are you the sea?” the mermaids asked, the mermaids were looking for a place to stay forever
But they had to be sure this was the sea
I muttered something that they liked
Their voices stroked the inside of my head and
The sea walked around drifting over itself, recreating itself in soft, flowing waves
The waves kept tumbling over each other.
It was like a vast nothingness of everything.
The mermaids were chattering about the weather in the city of the sea
“It is always raining in this city,” one of the mermaids was saying
No I thought, they must be mistaken, it cannot rain in the sea
“But it’s already filled with water” I mumbled
“No” the mermaid turned her face towards me, “I see rain, last year there was a flood”
Flood in the sea?
That rang a bell. I remember the shutters of my brain had been broken.
And the windows had been wet.
The rain had drowned all my socks and my pencils, which I had lost years ago, had turned up.
Only, they were shavings by then.
“Yes, I agreed” it floods every year, she was right after all
After all, last year the shutters of my brain had been broken and all my socks had been drowned
And my pencils had turned up again.
I nodded at her “yes sir, I said, yes sir you are right”
The mermaid smiled at me, and her smile grew brighter till there was an orange accident behind my eye
And the sea swiveled and shook, busting with light and I woke up with a start.
The glare of the empty morning hit my head, and I sat empty and restive on my bed
Wondering if the mermaids were going to live in the city of that sea.
Drifting, lashing, groaning, the grand sea slept
Glorious, asleep.
I too, locked in a drowsy spell, muttered in my sleep.
“Are you the sea?” the mermaids asked, the mermaids were looking for a place to stay forever
But they had to be sure this was the sea
I muttered something that they liked
Their voices stroked the inside of my head and
The sea walked around drifting over itself, recreating itself in soft, flowing waves
The waves kept tumbling over each other.
It was like a vast nothingness of everything.
The mermaids were chattering about the weather in the city of the sea
“It is always raining in this city,” one of the mermaids was saying
No I thought, they must be mistaken, it cannot rain in the sea
“But it’s already filled with water” I mumbled
“No” the mermaid turned her face towards me, “I see rain, last year there was a flood”
Flood in the sea?
That rang a bell. I remember the shutters of my brain had been broken.
And the windows had been wet.
The rain had drowned all my socks and my pencils, which I had lost years ago, had turned up.
Only, they were shavings by then.
“Yes, I agreed” it floods every year, she was right after all
After all, last year the shutters of my brain had been broken and all my socks had been drowned
And my pencils had turned up again.
I nodded at her “yes sir, I said, yes sir you are right”
The mermaid smiled at me, and her smile grew brighter till there was an orange accident behind my eye
And the sea swiveled and shook, busting with light and I woke up with a start.
The glare of the empty morning hit my head, and I sat empty and restive on my bed
Wondering if the mermaids were going to live in the city of that sea.
TopsyKretts
Joined 22nd Jan 2013
Forum Posts: 3
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 3
Changing everyday just like the oceans tide . Walking alone even with you by my side . Hiding deep within the tide of the sea wish i knew what you meant to me. Bleeding me an ocean of mystery , ripples in the tide feeling like thorns in my side for all of which I can not hide. I slowly disappear in the dark like candles without a spark pointless and to no avail wishing just to set sail.
AscensionES
Aptilneilrionaltion
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Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
9
Joined 22nd Jan 2013Forum Posts: 1797
The Oceans and the Black Swan
Commands are given,
the crew stir with haste.
Reef the mainsail
and cast down the oars.
This storm shows us no mercy,
respond in kind
or be taken.
The few I have beside me,
all seek the same.
His goods and his wealth,
cast aside forever.
Once a man makes his choice,
he make no other.
Until he finds his attonement,
may he be free again.
To what end would a man agree,
but the endeavor
of forgiveness?
These only the Swan may give,
can be found in the oceans.
Whether it be the depths
of sub zero trenches.
Or the next harbour one arrives,
it matters little..
Survival isn't the aim,
nor is death.
There's a medium we aspire to
a goal purposely set
to be the end.
It isn't death that sways
or life that phases.
When a man true to his word,
and diehard of his oath.
Finally feel forgiven
from within his soul.
He may depart the vessel,
and set sure foot on land.
That day never comes for many
but those few who find that day
have aged to the tone
of their misery.
Death comes for him.
He always comes..
Those he claims aboard,
the diehard and strong,
welcome him with open arms.
He has no choice now,
death be his fate.
But he dies a free man.
Free of the torment,
his fellow men breathing,
still endure.
As the Black swan,
sails on.
Commands are given,
the crew stir with haste.
Reef the mainsail
and cast down the oars.
This storm shows us no mercy,
respond in kind
or be taken.
The few I have beside me,
all seek the same.
His goods and his wealth,
cast aside forever.
Once a man makes his choice,
he make no other.
Until he finds his attonement,
may he be free again.
To what end would a man agree,
but the endeavor
of forgiveness?
These only the Swan may give,
can be found in the oceans.
Whether it be the depths
of sub zero trenches.
Or the next harbour one arrives,
it matters little..
Survival isn't the aim,
nor is death.
There's a medium we aspire to
a goal purposely set
to be the end.
It isn't death that sways
or life that phases.
When a man true to his word,
and diehard of his oath.
Finally feel forgiven
from within his soul.
He may depart the vessel,
and set sure foot on land.
That day never comes for many
but those few who find that day
have aged to the tone
of their misery.
Death comes for him.
He always comes..
Those he claims aboard,
the diehard and strong,
welcome him with open arms.
He has no choice now,
death be his fate.
But he dies a free man.
Free of the torment,
his fellow men breathing,
still endure.
As the Black swan,
sails on.
rayheinrich
Death Plane for Teddy
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Death Plane for Teddy
Tyrant of Words
32
Joined 4th Dec 2009 Forum Posts: 4409
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/images/uploads/poemimages/19547.jpg
< mighty water >
close to the breath of the shore
your sound
drops from my mouth
sanded
birded
winded
washed in your arms
as i mold myself
to the in and out of you
and of the moon
pulling our tides
and of the fish in me
begging
for your hook
- - -
Anonymous
Thanks very much, Topsy, Evan and Ray for your entries....I appreciate your works....
DylanThomasPirateM
Joined 31st Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 15
Twisted Dreamer
Forum Posts: 15
A Pirate Boy and a Siren Girl
Did you know?
When the rains fall and the winds blow,
When the skies cascade and the leaves swirl
Echos slow
And soft, but true
Water colors green and blue,
A story of both past and new,
'Tween a pirate boy and a siren girl.
The air and sea were one.
All was dark and frightful.
The clouds crackled golden vulcan and icy mist was every breath and a constant creaking from bow to stern whispered of a sailor's death and Neptune's final nightfall.
How he wished to be home again,
A cigar, some gin, a favorite friend,
He'd give all to be home again,
A smoke and drink in the sun.
Then a flash
Now orange and reds
And fire on the sea
Lightning's struck and split the mast
And all the mates, whom he now loved
Forever to the sea
But,
For he,
a sweeter fate,
That of a mermaid's mercy...
♥ "How many young faces had I seen drift by on the oceans wave?
Too many to count.
A welcome sight most always.
How curious?
Bronzed by ages,
Scurrying up and down the lines as mice,
Singing joy,
Straining muscle and sinew.
Sinking in a storm,
I'd called a few,
But no sailor did I save.
But never had I seen a sight like the flame I saw that night,
never had I seen a light quite like the glean that filled the green eyes of this boy."
And from that day...
The air and sun were one.
All was warm and blissful.
Rocky tides were yesterday
Todays and 'morrows that of play
And nights of kisses, thoughtful.
Still,
When the clouds fall down and all the leaves aswirl,
If thunder cracks and lightning sparks
And icy wind is all the air,
Lend an ear to the winter's breeze,
There drifts an ageless love affair
'Tween a pirate boy and a siren girl.
DyMc
Did you know?
When the rains fall and the winds blow,
When the skies cascade and the leaves swirl
Echos slow
And soft, but true
Water colors green and blue,
A story of both past and new,
'Tween a pirate boy and a siren girl.
The air and sea were one.
All was dark and frightful.
The clouds crackled golden vulcan and icy mist was every breath and a constant creaking from bow to stern whispered of a sailor's death and Neptune's final nightfall.
How he wished to be home again,
A cigar, some gin, a favorite friend,
He'd give all to be home again,
A smoke and drink in the sun.
Then a flash
Now orange and reds
And fire on the sea
Lightning's struck and split the mast
And all the mates, whom he now loved
Forever to the sea
But,
For he,
a sweeter fate,
That of a mermaid's mercy...
♥ "How many young faces had I seen drift by on the oceans wave?
Too many to count.
A welcome sight most always.
How curious?
Bronzed by ages,
Scurrying up and down the lines as mice,
Singing joy,
Straining muscle and sinew.
Sinking in a storm,
I'd called a few,
But no sailor did I save.
But never had I seen a sight like the flame I saw that night,
never had I seen a light quite like the glean that filled the green eyes of this boy."
And from that day...
The air and sun were one.
All was warm and blissful.
Rocky tides were yesterday
Todays and 'morrows that of play
And nights of kisses, thoughtful.
Still,
When the clouds fall down and all the leaves aswirl,
If thunder cracks and lightning sparks
And icy wind is all the air,
Lend an ear to the winter's breeze,
There drifts an ageless love affair
'Tween a pirate boy and a siren girl.
DyMc
Anonymous
I like this contest, Mourganna! All the poets here are great, especially that Indigo woman. I hope I can write as good as all of you guys.