Poetry competition CLOSED 20th November 2012 6:57pm
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emoadi
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azrael666
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SADNESS

armandbloodstone
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 20th Jan 2011
Forum Posts: 18

My life is full of emptiness my heart as hard as stone
Will my life be ever peaceful
Of this ill never know
The pain I feel inside is growing
Never ceasing to stop
The way I feel cannot be helped
I sense it will never stop
I feel the only way to stop the strife
Is to forever stop this life.

RSena
Sena
Thought Provoker
Puerto Rico 5awards
Joined 13th May 2011
Forum Posts: 317

If You Only Knew

If you only knew how it feel
And how it chock you deep
Then you would know how it
Hurt, if you knew, the mystery
Of this word, the course of it
You would never go there again.

It comes to you,
Not invitation,
It only do
What it has to do.

Hurting without telling you
Where to go, hiding at times help,
But once you recover it come back
But worst.

there's madness in this word
The sadness is all over the world
I've seen it in a kid face,
It make you weak, loosing your faith
That's why i don't walk to much when
I'm sad because my tears is all over the place,

So I bent,
And think that
There's people
Living worst.

SENA

MrE
C. R. Powers
Thought Provoker
United States
Joined 3rd Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 170

Bury Me in the Deep



Bury me in the deep.
Where I will rest, and stay.
Announce my life to no one.
As the sky falls to grey.
Carry me to my remain.
There is no one left of me to pay.
Bury me in the deep.
A place I shall not stray.
Because I'm going now, and you cannot follow.
Do not try to pray.

Bury me in the deep.
I'm lost now forever.
Death has fallen in my eyes.
And, the deep cuts have no tether.
There was no place for me.
As I'm sent in stormy weather.
Here comes the snow as it falls on soon fogotten grave.

lulumydog
Pip
Thought Provoker
United Kingdom 1awards
Joined 29th Oct 2012
Forum Posts: 154

SADNESS

Emptiness and loneynes
I feel this all the time
the only person that can make me fill like this is me
as it  comes from my insides
its just not my time
i dont know when or if it will ever be
i just know that it has to come from me

no one else can make me feel like this or so Im told
will let you know when i get there
before i get too old...






Scribbler12
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 16awards
Joined 12th Oct 2012
Forum Posts: 93

Sullen as I realize
The acid behind my eyes
Means I am weak
The hand clenching my stomach is
Self-induced nausea
And teardrops under the
Guise of rain
Smacking onto the pavement
Splitting into millions of
Screams all for a million
Sobbing crying reasons
Rope made of steel
Suffocate my hearts pulsing
To make sure I remember the pain
I (me, myself)have forced into existence
Occasionally wondering
The most inane questions
Of us, of loss, of nothing
Now flimsy fabric in a wallowing
Summers night wind
Shredded, torn, ripped
Murky brown and limp
Where has all the fight gone?
All I know is that I don't care
I would end up alone
Either way
I keep this hollow floating
Depression alive
I cling to it, because
I can FEEL it
Can you?



diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 42awards
Joined 18th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 1704

How Much It Hurts    


I can hear the drone
of the tightened bow
it draws across
the strings so slow
I feel the stinging  
inner cold
the music chills
it fills my soul
if only you could ever know .


How much it hurts
how much it pains
I have no worth
no more to gain
the cold of church
take me away
oh steeple high
can I now pray
no time to buy
left in this day
the blue of sky
colours to fade .


Piano help me
with your soft notes
the air of you
it makes me float
the harp of yesteryear
it ripple pools
the diamond water tears
now crushed up jewels .


Just crushed up jewels .



nessferguson
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 19th Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 2

I can’t control it I can’t fathom this sadness.
Its breaking me down driving me to madness.
Im doin drugs tryin to feel better
Letting snow fall on my once clean sweater

In regards to my family my grandpa died
Sittin here wishin he could confide
The past couple days before he died of cancer
He tried calling me I was to messed up to answer

That little fact in kills my confidence within
Knowing all he needed was a friend.

knucker
Strange Creature
Joined 19th Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 2

Today, Tomorrow, Yesterday

Today’s just yesterday’s sorrow
for today is my last stand of tomorrow
everyday’s pain has been borrowed
all to avoid the darkest hour.

What pain shall breathe for me today
lurking in pitch black in open water
hollow dusk leading the way
perpetuity has shortened my hour.

My pain can never be forgotten
recycled agony deep in my sorrow
damping the soul to press on
burying my face deep in horror.

Today, tomorrow, yesterday
pain grasping my sorrow
so similar in everyday
why can’t I bury tomorrow?

Ashadow
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 16th Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 4

Sadness is an emotion that takes over when you think to much or remember memories or people who are gone it makes you feel physical pain at times it makes you wanna cry all it does is make you more unhappy its painful its hollow empty and a emotion that most people hate.

poet Anonymous


A warm THANK YOU to all of those who have joined this competition!
It was fun to do the competition, I think I might have more of these if i come up with more topics.....

Have a nice day, or evening, to all of you
Will let you know the winner soon

GD¤

poet Anonymous

OK, its not the actual time yet but I have already decided on the winner

EMOADI is the winner, CONGRATULATIONS TO YOU

STARLIGHT ANGEL runner up

GreenDragon

azrael666
Lost Thinker
India 1awards
Joined 2nd Nov 2012
Forum Posts: 1

spectacle sombre
to remember
or, incredible
to believe
as not visible,
yet it lives
running like
a hungry worm
crawls and strikes,
shapes a form
that hypnotizes
to stay
within the grave
dreams of pain.
enslavement
of hopes
severely chops
the fragrant
hunger of freedom
was born
in the fragile
glass of eyes.
luring arts
of death
smile,
sterile
becomes
Eros,
a dry river
in dreamy eyes
slowly benumbs
tear drops
what forever
as it chose;
thought-claws
harrow
on bones
and obvertone
in the marrows
a vision-barrows.
a deserted
garden
of broken
hearted
only weaves
a chain
of comatose
blooms pain
of dark rose!

poet Anonymous

On account of having more than twenty entries for this competition,
and since there was a last entry before closure time....
I have decided to have two winners

EMOADI---first winner

Your poem just struck a chord, some poems can do that and this one just came straight in.
I really love the way you describe the tidal sea comparing it to emotions.

AZAERAL666---second winner

Your poem and poetry mesmerizes me with its magic, so did this one

STARLIGHT-ANGEL---runner up

Very nice poem esp about being vulnerable, very delicate poem, loved it!



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