Poetry competition CLOSED 28th July 2012 1:03pm
WINNER
raorrick (Rachel O.)
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RUNNERS-UP: lepperochan and Petite_Renarde

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Through Their Eyes

raorrick
Rachel O.
Dangerous Mind
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Poetryman said:a horse with wings? lol

Poetryman said:monkey?
Orangotang?


too funny...no, no and no

reminds me of the riddle thread

Petite_Renarde
Anouk
Thought Provoker
Tibet 2awards
Joined 2nd July 2012
Forum Posts: 351

To Rachel: A dragon fly?

raorrick
Rachel O.
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Petite_Renarde said:To Rachel: A dragon fly?

No, but that is a beautiful thought :)

DollHardcore
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 11th Apr 2012
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Rachel O: hmm, an eagle?

raorrick
Rachel O.
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DollHardcore said:Rachel O: hmm, an eagle?

Yes, very good :D

DollHardcore
Lost Thinker
United States
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"I am the monarch of the air
and conveyer to the gods"

^-^ Eagles are like the masters of all birds lol
and are great creatures...last lines are what made me think eagle..

beautiful poem btw !

Indie
Miss Indie
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Joined 3rd Sep 2011
Forum Posts: 3265

Never mind...

MrAlptraum
Mr A
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Indie said:Never mind...

No, spit it out.

Indie
Miss Indie
Tyrant of Words
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spits... someone already guessed Rachel's animal. Adding my revelation revealed my laziness in not reading page 3 before I answered lol.

MrAlptraum
Mr A
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I see. Please keep pointless chatter to a minimum on my competition. Thank you.

Indie
Miss Indie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 3rd Sep 2011
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noted...

Poetryman
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raorrick said:[quote-112700-DollHardcore]Rachel O: hmm, an eagle?

Yes, very good :D[/quote]

OH MAN! That's what I was gonna say...

jj

SupHomeboi
Thought Provoker
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Joined 9th Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 276

Cooped Up

People think I'm so afraid
But yet I crossed the road
They make rubber replicas of my friends
But they're not in Madame Tussauds
They're in gag stores used as pranks
Other than that we're trapped on a farm
Forced to shit out eggs all day
No life beyond the barn
It's bad enough the humans scramble our kids
But they still want to chop us up Jesus
Pluck our feathers take our dignity
Cook us anyway and eat us
Barbecued, fried, baked, or grilled
No funeral for us when we get killed
Looking forward to being some human's cusine
I'm just a lean source of protein
My wings, thighs, legs, and breast
Eaten by the man
There's also a possibility of being processed
Cold cuts or packaged in a can
They said our handwriting is very sloppy
The humans call it scratch
They take it a step further by calling us "foul"
Sometimes I wish I wasn't hatched
Or at least have the ability to fly like other birds
So I can escape the plantation
I'm tired of going through this Holocaust
I'm ready for emancipation
I don't want to be a statistic in KFC
Become the colonel original recipe
Riddle of my ancestory oh my God it's the worst
Everybody's dying to know which came first
Wouldn't you all like to know?

xxbvbkatiexx
Katelyn Michelle
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 25th May 2012
Forum Posts: 43

Chicken:D

leonardo
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom
Joined 6th June 2012
Forum Posts: 95

It's hot in the serengeti and when you are as large as me, you need a lot of water, I could murder a bucket of tea.
The first time a human saw me; He thought I had two tails, one thicker than the other, all scientsts are'nt wise. He saw me on our ancestral trails, searching out the grass. He couldn't believe his eyes, When he saw me me tear out a massive clump and stuff it up my arse.

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