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Firebyrd
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Massive Attack

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 24th July 2011
Forum Posts: 1744

Watch the demons get high..

Jonesing for use of a chemical infection
"Rots the mind"... For a mental injection
Kick back. Relax. Watch the demons get high..
Numb the coast. Of the feel. For the dirty you defy..

RSena
Sena
Thought Provoker
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Joined 13th May 2011
Forum Posts: 317

Good ones o ve motive That one is better than the one before posting a couple exceptions make sure the one u post is better than the one before.
Thanks every one for your support.
Sena

RSena
Sena
Thought Provoker
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Joined 13th May 2011
Forum Posts: 317

Good people posting. Very old ones and reconized.Sena

goodest
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 3007

according to the rules here within
it seems the last post should be the 1 to win
because the previous should be inferior to the next
making the last of all in theory the very best....

RSena
Sena
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Forum Posts: 317

goodest said:according to the rules here within
it seems the last post should be the 1 to win
because the previous should be inferior to the next
making the last of all in theory the very best....


YES, YOU HAVE TO WRITE SOMETHING BETTER THAN THE LAST ONE, OF COURSE, YOU HAVE TO COME OUT, WITH SOMETHING GOOD, THAT I CAN SAY, THE LAST IS BETTER, AND THE LAST ONE, IS BETTER I HAVE TO ADMITED, BUT YOU PEOPLE CAN WRITE, BETTER, I KNOW YOU CAN. JUST BURN THOSE NEURONS.

SENA

Naseer
Nas
Lost Thinker
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Joined 13th May 2012
Forum Posts: 55

If life was to pause and
I alone to continue --
At the restart --
I'd predict accurately
All your next moves.

Danii
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 27th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 5152

I'd see through the big plan
Knowing the key to the master game
I know truth and lies
I know why you despise
Life didn't do this, it was you

RSena
Sena
Thought Provoker
Puerto Rico 5awards
Joined 13th May 2011
Forum Posts: 317

nas still good nas did a good one

PierreTheMad
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 7th Dec 2009
Forum Posts: 2808

Rose Petal Dreams

A rose by any other name does not smell the same, nor taste as sweet
I don't feel the thorns when I dream of her.

RSena
Sena
Thought Provoker
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PierreTheMad said:Rose Petal Dreams

A rose by any other name does not smell the same, nor taste as sweet
I don't feel the thorns when I dream of her.


i go WOW.
GOOD. PIECE.
SENA

goodest
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 3007

it flows with the wind
it replenishes Life until the very end
given time it can cleanse any Earthly thing
water is natures gift....the essential joy is what it brings....

RSena
Sena
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goodest said:it flows with the wind
it replenishes Life until the very end
given time it can cleanse any Earthly thing
water is natures gift....the essential joy is what it brings....


GOOD JOB.

SENA

Firebyrd
Dangerous Mind
United States 18awards
Joined 29th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 200

Killing Time

Time stands still,pausing
Like a deer caught in the headlights
because of whats on my mind tonight
I am about to cross that line
A Homicide...Now watch as I Kill Time.

ph8t
b4sic8
Twisted Dreamer
United States
Joined 24th June 2012
Forum Posts: 101

time changed her ;
that smile stayed the same.
slammed that fist on the table
she knew i was unstable
a revolutionist with the mind of a crook
took on time,took on law ,and the puppet master, who controlled all  
the end for crook,but the begging for my revolutionn

Firebyrd
Dangerous Mind
United States 18awards
Joined 29th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 200

The Storm

Winds moving 200 miles an hour
lightn strikn Im feelin the power
Thunder booms as the night moves
iridecsently..and nothing can calm...
the storm within me

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