Sensory
kriticool
Forum Posts: 596
Fire of Insight
32
Joined 1st Nov 2011Forum Posts: 596
.:Senses:.
let’s brighten & redden up your highlights
let’s play doctor
some games
screen and filter out those senses
wrapping some gauze
let’s wrap it around your
pretty little head
and no, we don’t want to pull the gauze too tight
if too tight that would be unethical at this point
but indeed, let’s crisscross both your eyes
one time
that should be enough
two-timing would be surpassing the necessary
because we still want you to partially make out your treat
-meant
still wanting you to be able
able to make
me out even if it’s only a blur
my own senses of seeing and hearing
smelling the bad taste of your tasteless feeling
at this point my senses; they should all be truly attuned
you do believe I could sense you...
yes, the seeing how your fun & games
how it was all true
no matter.
you should know by now
to me your speech has been blurred
the lies you wrapped around
the ones rapped against my head were the proof of this
the lies you would have climb and
enter into both my ears
emanating from a singularly, devious and deceitful mouth
that tongue with its
tweaked twisting
just the seeing and hearing alone
that was such an experience
all ears, all eyes, that glimpse of two
seems we all got our licks in…got them in
so many, many times and
combined with the touch of you
my senses would’ve had me swear
that I only knew the truth
was I just that naïve?
perhaps
and yet I’m still believing that
bad experiences
that they can be severed & forgotten
given up as if they never existed
at the very least
and that even the least of good doctors; they can’t be. . . blamed
as in like now
even with my sick sixth sense
it’s still telling me...all’s well that
ends well
scalpel.
DeadForYou
Joined 1st July 2012
Forum Posts: 9
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 9
In a pool of my own blood
I lie upon the ground
And except my own heartbeat
There is no other sound
Just silence.
Silence through the unearthly night
Silence in the air
Singing a silent song to myself
Praying a silent prayer.
And I taste
The blood that pours from my wounds
Thick, dark and red.
Coating my tongue in a rusty salt,
So much I should be dead.
But I'm not.
I don't know why I'm still alive
When litres of blood are lost
But just to see your face again
This is a worthy cost.
And you came.
On wings so bright my eyes start to hurt
Shimmering in the new found sun
You glide to me, so pure soul'd
Of evil there is none.
Or so i thought.
The blood is now flowing fast
I'm shivering, shaking and cold
A breeze that may as well be daggers
A soul that is now sold.
Because i was wrong.
I hear nothing and taste my blood,
I lie here cold, almost dead.
I smell the rust from my hearts liquid,
And i feel rather light in the head.
It was you.
You were the devil only i didn't know
The hatred you had for me.
And now as I see you in full form,
I writhe in agony.
The pain is all i feel.
The blood is all I smell.
The angel is all i see,
An angel who sent me to Hell.
Silence is all I hear,
Even through my scream.
And i can taste the hatred you hold for me,
Even through my dream.
I lie upon the ground
And except my own heartbeat
There is no other sound
Just silence.
Silence through the unearthly night
Silence in the air
Singing a silent song to myself
Praying a silent prayer.
And I taste
The blood that pours from my wounds
Thick, dark and red.
Coating my tongue in a rusty salt,
So much I should be dead.
But I'm not.
I don't know why I'm still alive
When litres of blood are lost
But just to see your face again
This is a worthy cost.
And you came.
On wings so bright my eyes start to hurt
Shimmering in the new found sun
You glide to me, so pure soul'd
Of evil there is none.
Or so i thought.
The blood is now flowing fast
I'm shivering, shaking and cold
A breeze that may as well be daggers
A soul that is now sold.
Because i was wrong.
I hear nothing and taste my blood,
I lie here cold, almost dead.
I smell the rust from my hearts liquid,
And i feel rather light in the head.
It was you.
You were the devil only i didn't know
The hatred you had for me.
And now as I see you in full form,
I writhe in agony.
The pain is all i feel.
The blood is all I smell.
The angel is all i see,
An angel who sent me to Hell.
Silence is all I hear,
Even through my scream.
And i can taste the hatred you hold for me,
Even through my dream.
Cinny
Forum Posts: 983
Fire of Insight
4
Joined 21st Feb 2012Forum Posts: 983
Love;
Love is such a word that escapes the mind.
Your fingers grasp for it, try to hold it,
But it instead burns you to the touch.
The flavor that touches your tongue,
lingering on your tip like a sour candy
or the sweetest of licorice you've ever had.
The acrid scent burning and tingling your nose,
yet it's so intoxicating you cannot stop inhaling.
Love is the words whispered into your ear late at night,
or thrown at you like daggers from a voice in raised volumes.
It breaks and shatters your ear drums, but makes you want
to listen just a little bit more closely.
For some it is a blossoming rose, or a meadow.
It is soft and easy on the eyes, or rough on the outside.
You cannot truly see it, for if you could,
It would be easily captured and contained.
At the slightest of touch, it will dissolve and escape,
crumble before you if you cannot hold it gently.
Love is such an illusion that it overwhelms the basic 5 senses.
Once truly achieved, such things are left unneeded anyway.
Love is such a word that escapes the mind.
Your fingers grasp for it, try to hold it,
But it instead burns you to the touch.
The flavor that touches your tongue,
lingering on your tip like a sour candy
or the sweetest of licorice you've ever had.
The acrid scent burning and tingling your nose,
yet it's so intoxicating you cannot stop inhaling.
Love is the words whispered into your ear late at night,
or thrown at you like daggers from a voice in raised volumes.
It breaks and shatters your ear drums, but makes you want
to listen just a little bit more closely.
For some it is a blossoming rose, or a meadow.
It is soft and easy on the eyes, or rough on the outside.
You cannot truly see it, for if you could,
It would be easily captured and contained.
At the slightest of touch, it will dissolve and escape,
crumble before you if you cannot hold it gently.
Love is such an illusion that it overwhelms the basic 5 senses.
Once truly achieved, such things are left unneeded anyway.
Whitewand6
Forum Posts: 2251
Dangerous Mind
16
Joined 1st Nov 2011 Forum Posts: 2251
Sense and Sensibility: Five Parts
S I G H T
What turns you on
The sight of a pubescent belle
The nimble nubile form hunched over the rail
The long legs in Library reading Byron
Or the tantalizing cleavage
The bathing slum Cinderella
The mahogany coloured calves
The visible haunches by the open sewage
What holds your sight
A drop of sweat trickling down her neck
An unsuspecting mother feeding her baby
Long silky tresses dancing in the breeze
or may be the willowy figurine
strolling down the lake
or the oblivious couple making love in the park
A thick stack of money under your bed
with unfulfilled promises of base desire
or inviting eyes indicating mischief from the dark
S M E L L
What turns you on
The strong smell of wet mud
or the fresh fragrance of afternoon rain
May be your lover's sweat post-coitus
could it be the overpowering old wine
or the freshly saved eucalyptus wood
The aroma of just washed long tresses
The smell of camphor and lost memories
from an old dress
The faint pheromone from the shredded gown
Wafting lavender or uplifting rose
May be the sinful dark chocolate
or the musk emanated by your lover at foreplay
The old classic by Shelly from college
The old dead rose inside with memories alive
A piping hot mug of mocha at six
or the crushed jasmines of the last one night stand
T O U C H
What turns you on
Your ex-flame's playful fingers
or that faint brush with a stranger in the train
or the touch of flaming lips in the rain
Groping-inexperienced hands in the loo
or slow, methodical thumbs out of the blue
an experienced masseur on a steamy night
The irresistible spell of touch and go
The light caress of the new gentle lover
or the full mouthed affair behind the car
The exploring search causing the explosions inside
May be the tight hug from someone unexpected
An old lover's familiar moves down your body
or the firm hand traveling up inside in a frenzy
That seething tongue rolling over the earlobe
or that heavy warm breath on your nape
T A S T E
What turns you on
Addictive chocolate melting on your tongue
or perfectly brewed coffee on a long evening
A large gulp of Burgundy wine on the beach
Juicy strawberries tantalizing your senses
A small butter cube disappearing in moments
or a perfectly blended Cuban cigar on a slow noon
May be Mediterranean grapes in between romances
A faint smelling meal of smoked salmon
or a gorgeous looking bowl of fresh lamb
Utterly inviting kebabs dipped in green chilly paste
or a regal looking dish of lobsters served with love
S O U N D
What turns you on
The faint murmur teasing your libido
The loud gasps filling up the air
or the quivering lips announcing climax
Well it could be the tremulous singing
or the sonorous voice over the phone
The low moan as fingers travel
The enticing greeting at the front door
or the pitter -patter of falling rain
The soft evening breeze thru the garden
The loud sound of the hard slap on flesh
or the heavy breathing following suit
The shrill chirping of birds early morning
The low whirring of the fan in the dingy hotel room
A mighty thunder storm
or the beeping cell phone
or the champagne fizzing out
The low hissing of the serpant
Devilish
Forum Posts: 1744
Dangerous Mind
15
Joined 24th July 2011 Forum Posts: 1744
Damn I didn't even know about this comp.. I am going to slither through my senses and hope to enter.. I should start checking the comp more often.
HJSHREEVE
Joined 23rd June 2012
Forum Posts: 10
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 10
So petty, The concerns of man.
So petty, the concerns of man
That I would bore out my ears
For but a brief silence
Gouge my eyes,
With glowing iron
In defiance
Of your brighter tomorrow.
The fruit has grown bland,
full of pips and rot.
Once warm, sweet milk
Now Curdles in mouth
I no longer find pleasure in taste
So empty, The talk of man,
That I would tear out my tongue,
To be excused from reply,
Savoring my speechless silence
Sever my nose,
And become your scentless apprentice.
Here, I am among no one.
Here, I am a wanderer, dazed, lost...
So petty, the concerns of man
That I would bore out my ears
For but a brief silence
Gouge my eyes,
With glowing iron
In defiance
Of your brighter tomorrow.
The fruit has grown bland,
full of pips and rot.
Once warm, sweet milk
Now Curdles in mouth
I no longer find pleasure in taste
So empty, The talk of man,
That I would tear out my tongue,
To be excused from reply,
Savoring my speechless silence
Sever my nose,
And become your scentless apprentice.
Here, I am among no one.
Here, I am a wanderer, dazed, lost...
binalith
Joined 3rd July 2012
Forum Posts: 13
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 13
Run with me my brothers!
See you not the Waxing Orb?
We are nearly in our prime
and we are the world!
Run to'ward the scent of flesh
lay your noses to the turf.
The stag and fawn are on the run
and we must hasten forth!
Hear you how the wind keens
shrill and vaunted tales?
From hallowed halls
the father calls
to hunt these ancient vales!
Feel the earth beneath your claws
dig deep for solid purchase.
To spring you on
the sweetest fawn
to feed our clan once more!
And as we drag our prey to ground
Taste the warm and flowing blood!
This young life will feed the flies
when we have had enough!
See you not the Waxing Orb?
We are nearly in our prime
and we are the world!
Run to'ward the scent of flesh
lay your noses to the turf.
The stag and fawn are on the run
and we must hasten forth!
Hear you how the wind keens
shrill and vaunted tales?
From hallowed halls
the father calls
to hunt these ancient vales!
Feel the earth beneath your claws
dig deep for solid purchase.
To spring you on
the sweetest fawn
to feed our clan once more!
And as we drag our prey to ground
Taste the warm and flowing blood!
This young life will feed the flies
when we have had enough!
raorrick
Rachel O.
Forum Posts: 1590
Rachel O.
Dangerous Mind
14
Joined 17th Nov 2011Forum Posts: 1590
Fred
Grace
Dead
Congrats!
Great job all.
Grace
Dead
Congrats!
Great job all.
freddwzz
Naked Satirist
Forum Posts: 496
Naked Satirist
Fire of Insight
6
Joined 5th May 2012Forum Posts: 496
Wow I'm in rapture!
Thank you Rachel!
Thank you Rachel!
Whitewand6
Forum Posts: 2251
Dangerous Mind
16
Joined 1st Nov 2011 Forum Posts: 2251
Fred. My man. You ceaselessly intrigue me. That was such
a marvelous write. Keep them coming.:]