Sensory
raorrick
Rachel O.
Forum Posts: 1590
Rachel O.
Dangerous Mind
14
Joined 17th Nov 2011Forum Posts: 1590
Poetry Contest Description
See. Hear. Taste. Smell. Feel.
I want you to write a poem using all 5 of your senses.
I want this to be very descriptive.
It could be walking outside your door, sitting on the beach, clattering away at the keyboard, or it could be something emotional.
Anything you want.
Two weeks.
New or old.
3 entries a piece.
I don't want to read a book.
You can use see, hear, taste, smell, feel, if you wish, but you are poets, maybe think of another word for some of them.
Here is mine as an example:
Yesterday, Today, Tomorrow
Yesterday
I breathed your intoxicating desire
caressed your inflaming intensity
tasted your awakened demand
absorbed your passionate yearn
witnessed your stimulating euphoria
Yesterday
We were one soul
in two bodies.
Today
I breathe your piercing anguish
caress your persecuting turmoil
taste your suffocating heartache
absorb your punishing nightmare
witness your agonizing plague
Today
We are one soul
on two realms.
Tomorrow
I will breathe my unforgiving devotion
caress my grasping grief
taste my starving tears
absorb my sorrowful shock
witness my violent daze
Tomorrow
I will join you, and
we will be whole again.
I want this to be very descriptive.
It could be walking outside your door, sitting on the beach, clattering away at the keyboard, or it could be something emotional.
Anything you want.
Two weeks.
New or old.
3 entries a piece.
I don't want to read a book.
You can use see, hear, taste, smell, feel, if you wish, but you are poets, maybe think of another word for some of them.
Here is mine as an example:
I breathed your intoxicating desire
caressed your inflaming intensity
tasted your awakened demand
absorbed your passionate yearn
witnessed your stimulating euphoria
Yesterday
We were one soul
in two bodies.
Today
I breathe your piercing anguish
caress your persecuting turmoil
taste your suffocating heartache
absorb your punishing nightmare
witness your agonizing plague
Today
We are one soul
on two realms.
Tomorrow
I will breathe my unforgiving devotion
caress my grasping grief
taste my starving tears
absorb my sorrowful shock
witness my violent daze
Tomorrow
I will join you, and
we will be whole again.
Danii
Forum Posts: 5152
Tyrant of Words
5
Joined 27th Oct 2011Forum Posts: 5152
KINGDOM COME
The summers sun, warmed my face
The roses petals were soft like velvet
The smell brought me home
I say Mama there
She was smiling again
I could hear the children playing in the backyard
There laugher rang like bells to my ears
The iced tea, felt cool and refreshing
Some condensation fell and rolled down my skin
The sweet taste and lemon touch sent my taste buds on a rampage
So, this was what it was like to be where I belong
The summers sun, warmed my face
The roses petals were soft like velvet
The smell brought me home
I say Mama there
She was smiling again
I could hear the children playing in the backyard
There laugher rang like bells to my ears
The iced tea, felt cool and refreshing
Some condensation fell and rolled down my skin
The sweet taste and lemon touch sent my taste buds on a rampage
So, this was what it was like to be where I belong
SmellyFingers
Joined 20th June 2012
Forum Posts: 19
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 19
You Don't Know Me
You don't know me!
I'm lurking in places you don't even know exist, yet
You think you know where to find me
You don't even know the half of it.
I'm what eats away at your soul
I'm everything you know and dread to be.
I know what and who you truly are.
I know you are lost and lonely.
Locked inside your shrinking mind.
You cannot come down deep enough
To find me at the perimeters.
You cannot own or touch me
Like I will own and touch you.
You cannot fathom my enjoyment
In your pathetic isolated comfort.
I will grind you down gradually,
In slow paranoid confusion of your self worthlessness.
There are no choices left for you now.
You cannot break my agreement.
You are forever eternally owned.
Your cowardly tears cannot
penetrate emotions I do not own.
You are tied to the shadows,
miserably denying I exist.
You are immaculately pathetic.
You are the reason I exist.
I breed on your morbid thoughts.
I have tracked you down.
Now we are bonded in melancholy.
You will never be free.
You cannot breathe without me.
You cannot leave without me.
I will strip you bare to your bones.
You have no control anymore.
I am the real underlining secret you
you don't want anybody to see.
You'll hear, see, smell, feel and taste me.
You will be me?
You are me.
We - me - alone.
You don't know me!
I'm lurking in places you don't even know exist, yet
You think you know where to find me
You don't even know the half of it.
I'm what eats away at your soul
I'm everything you know and dread to be.
I know what and who you truly are.
I know you are lost and lonely.
Locked inside your shrinking mind.
You cannot come down deep enough
To find me at the perimeters.
You cannot own or touch me
Like I will own and touch you.
You cannot fathom my enjoyment
In your pathetic isolated comfort.
I will grind you down gradually,
In slow paranoid confusion of your self worthlessness.
There are no choices left for you now.
You cannot break my agreement.
You are forever eternally owned.
Your cowardly tears cannot
penetrate emotions I do not own.
You are tied to the shadows,
miserably denying I exist.
You are immaculately pathetic.
You are the reason I exist.
I breed on your morbid thoughts.
I have tracked you down.
Now we are bonded in melancholy.
You will never be free.
You cannot breathe without me.
You cannot leave without me.
I will strip you bare to your bones.
You have no control anymore.
I am the real underlining secret you
you don't want anybody to see.
You'll hear, see, smell, feel and taste me.
You will be me?
You are me.
We - me - alone.
Grace
IDryad
Forum Posts: 17075
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
126
Joined 25th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 17075
A passing experience
Touches the wind
like gossamer fingers
My cheeks it caresses
like an ardent lover
Gently rumples my hair
Spreading it over my face
Like a naughty friend
The rain kisses my cheeks
I taste the salt of my sweat
Wet hair embracing my skull
Water going into my eyes
My eyes feel the sting of salt
Tears flows, unbidden
Mixed with the falling rain
Running towards shelter
Feet pounding the sand
I hear the soughing of the wind
Over the treetops
The crash of thunder
The bolts of lightning
The storm has come full blast
I feel the crackling of ozone
And fear within
But gentle arms embraced me
and you are there, my comfort
My beloved.
How I love you
I feel safe again.
Touches the wind
like gossamer fingers
My cheeks it caresses
like an ardent lover
Gently rumples my hair
Spreading it over my face
Like a naughty friend
The rain kisses my cheeks
I taste the salt of my sweat
Wet hair embracing my skull
Water going into my eyes
My eyes feel the sting of salt
Tears flows, unbidden
Mixed with the falling rain
Running towards shelter
Feet pounding the sand
I hear the soughing of the wind
Over the treetops
The crash of thunder
The bolts of lightning
The storm has come full blast
I feel the crackling of ozone
And fear within
But gentle arms embraced me
and you are there, my comfort
My beloved.
How I love you
I feel safe again.
goodest
Forum Posts: 3007
Dangerous Mind
14
Joined 22nd Aug 2011Forum Posts: 3007
“Your Flava”
by: Eric L. Boddie
It is, undoubtedly, anyone’s, who has ever heard it, favorite choice
That’s an easy one, sounds like your voice
The most precious, delightful and beautiful thing in the place
Now that looks exactly like your face
The most pleasing thing, of any kind or such
Glory to God, that’s your touch
The aroma of a girl, the way that God meant
Everyone knows that that is your scent
The taste the whole world can’t do anything but savor
To put it plain and simple, that’s your flavor
by: Eric L. Boddie
It is, undoubtedly, anyone’s, who has ever heard it, favorite choice
That’s an easy one, sounds like your voice
The most precious, delightful and beautiful thing in the place
Now that looks exactly like your face
The most pleasing thing, of any kind or such
Glory to God, that’s your touch
The aroma of a girl, the way that God meant
Everyone knows that that is your scent
The taste the whole world can’t do anything but savor
To put it plain and simple, that’s your flavor
Anonymous
THE SENSES
“How do I love thee
Let me count the ways:”
My eyes do see a man
Dark eyes, dark hair
Olive complexion, Mediterranean
As you speak my name
Your low sensuous voice,
Sounds like the wind
Leads to a kiss
Tastes like cloves,
Smells like testosterone
Mixed with pheromones
A manly clean odor
Known to provoke
My sexual desire
To touch you all over
To take my hands
Gently glide
From your cheek down,
To those strong arms
The black fine hairs
So soft you are!
As you lay bare
Skin gleaming and tight
Muscles rippling, a delight
Brilliantly made
Built for love
For when we touch
Our senses ignite,
Touch becomes more
As our bodies meld
Our intimacy sores
So we cannot keep
Our hands and our lips
Off each other
For even a minute,
These five faculties
Were designed by GOD
To help us survive
To propagate with pleasure
It is our human right
To use them to treasure
The beloved so that we bind
Fall in love, delight mankind.
“How do I love thee
Let me count the ways:”
My eyes do see a man
Dark eyes, dark hair
Olive complexion, Mediterranean
As you speak my name
Your low sensuous voice,
Sounds like the wind
Leads to a kiss
Tastes like cloves,
Smells like testosterone
Mixed with pheromones
A manly clean odor
Known to provoke
My sexual desire
To touch you all over
To take my hands
Gently glide
From your cheek down,
To those strong arms
The black fine hairs
So soft you are!
As you lay bare
Skin gleaming and tight
Muscles rippling, a delight
Brilliantly made
Built for love
For when we touch
Our senses ignite,
Touch becomes more
As our bodies meld
Our intimacy sores
So we cannot keep
Our hands and our lips
Off each other
For even a minute,
These five faculties
Were designed by GOD
To help us survive
To propagate with pleasure
It is our human right
To use them to treasure
The beloved so that we bind
Fall in love, delight mankind.
firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Forum Posts: 808
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Fire of Insight
17
Joined 14th Feb 2012 Forum Posts: 808
So Very Close
I am so very close
I can almost feel her touch
I can even hear her breathing
Her heartbeat and such
I can see her light
And beautiful smile
I can see her rain with happiness
Like she's deserved, all the while
I can almost taste her lips..
Though we have yet to even hug
But thats all I can picture
Her safe, soft, and snug..
She can lift my sadness
Like no other...
She can break my sorrow,
With one litle mutter
I am so very close
Yet so far away..
So tell me how come
I feel this way..?
I am so very close
I can almost feel her touch
I can even hear her breathing
Her heartbeat and such
I can see her light
And beautiful smile
I can see her rain with happiness
Like she's deserved, all the while
I can almost taste her lips..
Though we have yet to even hug
But thats all I can picture
Her safe, soft, and snug..
She can lift my sadness
Like no other...
She can break my sorrow,
With one litle mutter
I am so very close
Yet so far away..
So tell me how come
I feel this way..?
Lifeless_Loveless
Chrisella Payne
Joined 24th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 12
Chrisella Payne
Thought Provoker
Forum Posts: 12
Senseless Senses
I look into the night
Without the sight
Of flowing emotions
With a strong devotion
I taste the fear
Not far, but near
Full of regret
When thy shall not fret
I feel the loss
When thee comes across
Its drowning thee
I can not longer see
I smell the despair
Its in the air
I try to leave
But it follows me
I hear death
It calls by breath
Can you hear it too?
I believe it hears you...
So now my sight is gone
And it is nearly dawn
I hope I get it back
There may be an upcoming attack
So now fear tastes me
Greater than sea to sea
Lost and never found
Yet never fully to astound
So now touch tries to kill
After chill, after chill, after chill
We've been waiting for this attack
Yet it is skill that we may lack
So now the odor that once burned my nose
Gave up and finally arose
Not lost, but there
I can barely bare...
So now death, that once screamed my name
Keeps telling me that IM insane
When I was only the one that heard
When he was the one who conferred...
I look into the night
Without the sight
Of flowing emotions
With a strong devotion
I taste the fear
Not far, but near
Full of regret
When thy shall not fret
I feel the loss
When thee comes across
Its drowning thee
I can not longer see
I smell the despair
Its in the air
I try to leave
But it follows me
I hear death
It calls by breath
Can you hear it too?
I believe it hears you...
So now my sight is gone
And it is nearly dawn
I hope I get it back
There may be an upcoming attack
So now fear tastes me
Greater than sea to sea
Lost and never found
Yet never fully to astound
So now touch tries to kill
After chill, after chill, after chill
We've been waiting for this attack
Yet it is skill that we may lack
So now the odor that once burned my nose
Gave up and finally arose
Not lost, but there
I can barely bare...
So now death, that once screamed my name
Keeps telling me that IM insane
When I was only the one that heard
When he was the one who conferred...
freddwzz
Naked Satirist
Forum Posts: 496
Naked Satirist
Fire of Insight
6
Joined 5th May 2012Forum Posts: 496
Squirting streams of blazing greek fire
Aqueous flames riding in my liquid chamber
Fresh serene air invoking latent stimulus
Bold lithium scent of the nonchalant
Shackled when sober these unchained flavours
Subtle sweetness from bitter recollections
Crackling electric threads in quagmire
Ingenious harmony in deranged offbeat rhythm
Romantic potent colon, does monotone digestion
Pulsating rays of bipolar neon colors
I'M IN CHEMICAL RAPTURE
Aqueous flames riding in my liquid chamber
Fresh serene air invoking latent stimulus
Bold lithium scent of the nonchalant
Shackled when sober these unchained flavours
Subtle sweetness from bitter recollections
Crackling electric threads in quagmire
Ingenious harmony in deranged offbeat rhythm
Romantic potent colon, does monotone digestion
Pulsating rays of bipolar neon colors
I'M IN CHEMICAL RAPTURE
SmilesandPretenses
Trevin Michael
Forum Posts: 114
Trevin Michael
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 30th May 2012Forum Posts: 114
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Pure 2 A Loving Master
Do you trust me
Implicitly
Her skin
still warm from the shower
senses even the subtlest shift in the air
as he encircles the bed
Tonight I'm feeling selfish Mayhem
and I wish for you to be my toy
Standing behind her
his hand guides her wrist into a velvet cuff
First her left… then her right
Kneeling down,
he softly kisses her forehead
and whispers
Yes Sir..
yes Sir
In return for your servitude
I can only offer you..
me ..
*I love you*
I will however require 3 things tonight
She feels the strength of his hands
as he grips her leg behind her calf
and begins to tie Kinbaku Rope
around her knee
Number 1, The Blindfold does not come off
Sensory Deprivation
Blocking the vision
heightens the Touch
Number 2, No speaking unless spoken to
Your only reply may be Yes Sir or No Sir
Her other leg lifts
and then bound in rope
The 3rd , you are not allowed to Cum
without permission
To which you can not ask for
*devilish smirk*
Kneeling again behind her
He closes his eyes and pauses
his fingers tracing her jawline
Do you understand these rules?
Yes sir
He places her collar around her neck
appropriately labeled Mayhem
Then let us begin
raorrick
Rachel O.
Forum Posts: 1590
Rachel O.
Dangerous Mind
14
Joined 17th Nov 2011Forum Posts: 1590
Great so far, keep them coming :D
Anonymous
"Expire, Alone, No"
Deodorant sprays keep us from
smelling the real world.
Food additives keep us from
tasting the real world.
Sunglasses keep us from
seeing the real world.
Earphones keep us from
hearing the real world.
Pain keeps us from
touching the real world.
Living in fantasy worlds to
escape blood,
our nightmares,
true love
keeps us from the
magic of the real world.
Come out of hiding or
else die deep inside.
Discover the magic, don’t be tragic.
Pitch a tent, ride a bicycle, milk a cow, float on air,
show others that you really care.
Hey, build a fire, live to your heart’s desire.
Quit being a crier!
It’s really not that dire.
Live life before you expire, alone.
http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy328/Spanishdarkness/live-life.jpg
Deodorant sprays keep us from
smelling the real world.
Food additives keep us from
tasting the real world.
Sunglasses keep us from
seeing the real world.
Earphones keep us from
hearing the real world.
Pain keeps us from
touching the real world.
Living in fantasy worlds to
escape blood,
our nightmares,
true love
keeps us from the
magic of the real world.
Come out of hiding or
else die deep inside.
Discover the magic, don’t be tragic.
Pitch a tent, ride a bicycle, milk a cow, float on air,
show others that you really care.
Hey, build a fire, live to your heart’s desire.
Quit being a crier!
It’s really not that dire.
Live life before you expire, alone.
http://i804.photobucket.com/albums/yy328/Spanishdarkness/live-life.jpg
raorrick
Rachel O.
Forum Posts: 1590
Rachel O.
Dangerous Mind
14
Joined 17th Nov 2011Forum Posts: 1590
Good stuff so far, keep them coming :)
pretty_normal
Pretty Normal
Forum Posts: 76
Pretty Normal
Twisted Dreamer
3
Joined 29th May 2012Forum Posts: 76
She's the easier option, I suppose-
If you don't drop it-
it will rivet
through the fleshier-pupil pivot.
Leaving gasoline curls upon us
kissing your eyes with my lacking fondness.
Treacle-steps of intermission
lead the floor-like pin-cushion
as your words sickle to the rafters
of "what happens now?"
and "there-afters".
With the speech so silent-minded,
and your intent so loudly blinded.
Leaks of pink squealing meaning,
shatter with pitch
and serrate the ceiling.
Of your sweetened lack of feeling,
nothing's left to salt for healing.
Sour breath
licks closed your lip-line,
no longer candied on your eye-line.
The perfume of when you were mine,
binds with the soft scent of moral decline.
I hope she'll seep from nose to soapy-veins,
where that sick acidic breath of yours complains.
as you surrender the last of your brains
to very softly-lacquered chains
and end my least favorite of games.
If you don't drop it-
it will rivet
through the fleshier-pupil pivot.
Leaving gasoline curls upon us
kissing your eyes with my lacking fondness.
Treacle-steps of intermission
lead the floor-like pin-cushion
as your words sickle to the rafters
of "what happens now?"
and "there-afters".
With the speech so silent-minded,
and your intent so loudly blinded.
Leaks of pink squealing meaning,
shatter with pitch
and serrate the ceiling.
Of your sweetened lack of feeling,
nothing's left to salt for healing.
Sour breath
licks closed your lip-line,
no longer candied on your eye-line.
The perfume of when you were mine,
binds with the soft scent of moral decline.
I hope she'll seep from nose to soapy-veins,
where that sick acidic breath of yours complains.
as you surrender the last of your brains
to very softly-lacquered chains
and end my least favorite of games.
kriticool
Forum Posts: 596
Fire of Insight
32
Joined 1st Nov 2011Forum Posts: 596
.:Psilocybin Park:.
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eyes faced this place
after we finished the ripple
faced it with a double, triple
this bubble of blown out aromas
but we knew
the smells which blew
they were new and
they were penetrating my nose
leaving me teary eyed;
my pupils thought my eyes had died
the recklessness of my eyeballing
giving way to a tantrum of tenderized touching
what was felt were ears cupped,
forced fed into cowering while crouching
phonics, they came sonic and my senses
they went senseless attempting to understand
this experience was beyond the bland
unknown to man and
never would I eat in or out
of those mushed rooms…again!