Poetry competition CLOSED 28th May 2012 1:38pm
WINNER
ThePintSizdSlasher (Aaiden)
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In Your Steadfast Love

SupHomeboi
Thought Provoker
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Heart Specialist

My heart is in your iron clad grip
Firm, but tender no accidental slip
My heart is covered with fingerprints
Feeling the pressure of your fingertips
I don't know how you remain so calm
With my heart beating rapidly inside your palm
My blood pumping organ inside your hands
You see way beyond what's inside my pants
You're psychic you see what's inside my head
With my heart in your hands but yet I'm not dead
Never in my life have I felt more alive
You fixed my brokenheart to help me survive
Like a surgeon performing open heart surgery
Because of you we'll celebrate many anniversaries
Without me worrying about cardiac arrest
Now gently sew my heart back inside my chest

Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 25th Aug 2011
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SupHomeboi, thank you so much for entering your poem in the competition.

KahakuHiga-Parker
Twisted Dreamer
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Joined 15th May 2012
Forum Posts: 161

in her steadfast love
she saw acts of ungodly measurements
she was hurt
she was violated
but she stood fast
she thought he loved her
he just needed help
but as the days went by
a hours tick tocked away
more bruises appeared
more cuts
and signs of twisted love
bites and Burns scarred her skin
bruises never disappeared
and it hurt more then her physical being
it hurt her soul
and her stead fast love
turned to run
but it couldn't run to fast for help
for a hero
she was caught in the cancerous twisted love
yet again
but she didn't need to run again for it was seen
and it hurt my soul
for i had promised to be her forever guardian
and i'm my stead fast promise
my love for her
i took matters into my own hands
now stained with the blood of a monster
i stand with her
healing her wounds
in my steadfast love

Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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KahakuHiga-Parker, thank you for being with me. Dear all, I shall be back to pick the winner. Thank you again.

Grace
IDryad
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Congratulations to ThePintSizdSlasher for winning the competition. To me your poem resonates with grief; its like you are chanting within you in remembrance of one that is much loved. To remember one whom you have steadfastly stood by and with thorough the ordeal is steadfast love indeed. Miss Sub: your poems are always so beautifully written and if there were categories of poems within a competition, you are a winner as indeed you are. Star_light angel, the poem was beautiful. The steadfast love of someone for you, the way I see it. Everyone have written fantastically. Some however did not adhere to the 200 words or less as required. Be that as it may, it has been a pleasure reading them. Thank you everyone for joining in the competition.

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