Poetry competition CLOSED 2nd May 2012 6:37pm
WINNER
raorrick (Rachel O.)
raorrick (Rachel O.)
RUNNER-UP:
kriticool
Riddle me this
Anonymous
I eat of this crop everyday.
It's a blur of colours
in quatrain display.
Though this guy's out of work
as there's no jobs anymore,
but not yet redundant
yet creative I'm sure.
It's a blur of colours
in quatrain display.
Though this guy's out of work
as there's no jobs anymore,
but not yet redundant
yet creative I'm sure.
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See son…two different kind but from the same source.
Crystal now gone. Wasn’t here much anyway.
Still, what appears…feels & looks to me like rust
Now, that would be a bust. Could be.
But I would guess that most is just copper flake
Maybe pennies in my thoughts. Sitting here waiting to sprout green.
But yeah, Ms. Green…I felt her coming
Especially when I was sure that Crystal was gone
And I can warm up to her real easy.
Just like last time.
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See son…two different kind but from the same source.
Crystal now gone. Wasn’t here much anyway.
Still, what appears…feels & looks to me like rust
Now, that would be a bust. Could be.
But I would guess that most is just copper flake
Maybe pennies in my thoughts. Sitting here waiting to sprout green.
But yeah, Ms. Green…I felt her coming
Especially when I was sure that Crystal was gone
And I can warm up to her real easy.
Just like last time.
.
.
ok well guessing this stuff isn't as easy as i thought it might be.
I'm thinking nuclear fallout or Smoke for Rachel
I was thinking along the 'sunlight' area for Lemme
sunlight being one of the main reasons for moving furniture around.
Miss sub I think I have the first half but am stumped for now on the second half
Kriticool, I was thinking maybe weed
I'm thinking nuclear fallout or Smoke for Rachel
I was thinking along the 'sunlight' area for Lemme
sunlight being one of the main reasons for moving furniture around.
Miss sub I think I have the first half but am stumped for now on the second half
Kriticool, I was thinking maybe weed
And I can see where one might think "weed" But nah man, it ain't cannabis. hahaha 
Cryptic stuff in here... Codes to decipher...
Where to begin? I'll start at the beginning.
Rachel - hate
Goodest - heart(Mr A beat me to it)
Lemmy - depression
Missub - a poet/poem an artist/paint ???....?!
Kriti - diamond/graphite pearls?? I'm out of sorts with yours...
(Nice competition Eemon.)
Where to begin? I'll start at the beginning.
Rachel - hate
Goodest - heart(Mr A beat me to it)
Lemmy - depression
Missub - a poet/poem an artist/paint ???....?!
Kriti - diamond/graphite pearls?? I'm out of sorts with yours...
(Nice competition Eemon.)
aww man... Meth.. Crystal.. BOTH are nouns. But nah. Matter of fact, I thought my drop would be the easiest. Maybe I'll wait for some peeps to sober up a bit. 
raorrick said:Unknown
building; no one can hold it
exploding; tears all inside us
growling; we know its presence
escaping; to make everyone scatter
ensuring; the airs hard to breathe
spreading; all around quick and freely
controlling; the life of all who let it
My guess: Flatus(Could not use the synonym)
(Pardon me if I am wrong.
)
building; no one can hold it
exploding; tears all inside us
growling; we know its presence
escaping; to make everyone scatter
ensuring; the airs hard to breathe
spreading; all around quick and freely
controlling; the life of all who let it
My guess: Flatus(Could not use the synonym)
(Pardon me if I am wrong.
)
