Poetry competition CLOSED 23rd April 2012 10:42am
WINNER
raorrick (Rachel O.)
raorrick (Rachel O.)
RUNNER-UP:
braggman
What Drug is your Candy...
Cinny said:Thank you Devilish! (:
I am debating whether I want to make it a bit longer but that pretty much sums my addiction for BDSM. xD
I definitely wanna read more of that.. Not alot of people are so honest with such a subjects.. and thats what im pushing for on top of that it opens up the mind to what truly goes on.. how much better can it get?.. I also love rachels thread she has inspired me without realizing it.
I am debating whether I want to make it a bit longer but that pretty much sums my addiction for BDSM. xD
I definitely wanna read more of that.. Not alot of people are so honest with such a subjects.. and thats what im pushing for on top of that it opens up the mind to what truly goes on.. how much better can it get?.. I also love rachels thread she has inspired me without realizing it.
braggman said:Good gal Ms. Devilish. A woman after my own heart. I'm busy working on a couple new ones, but as you said new or old are welcome, here are a couple of older drug/candy/consumption poems that haven't been in a contest yet.
Crane
Just as long
as each line
is filled… time
is held better.
Words, the snare
words, the solution
to themselves
divert from the issue
real issue of living
or not.
Just as long
as they keep
the flow
the rest of this debauchery
passes as just a process
of cultivating character.
I can smoke
until I taste the bloodflow
of collapsing alveoli,
chew up the past
in candy fistfuls of sweet Valium,
scratching out little lies
that give me license
to fill each page
unfolding uncounted, untold years
shedding thoughts I’d barely dared to dream.
I fold ten poems an hour
into paper cranes
polluting the whole stretch
of ancient water
with diluted words.
Wow.. Soooo lovely.....
Crane
Just as long
as each line
is filled… time
is held better.
Words, the snare
words, the solution
to themselves
divert from the issue
real issue of living
or not.
Just as long
as they keep
the flow
the rest of this debauchery
passes as just a process
of cultivating character.
I can smoke
until I taste the bloodflow
of collapsing alveoli,
chew up the past
in candy fistfuls of sweet Valium,
scratching out little lies
that give me license
to fill each page
unfolding uncounted, untold years
shedding thoughts I’d barely dared to dream.
I fold ten poems an hour
into paper cranes
polluting the whole stretch
of ancient water
with diluted words.
Wow.. Soooo lovely.....
Anonymous
Black Bean Brew
I like mine hot and strong
to inhale it's scent
all day long..
and most nights too-
If I really tell the truth.
I need it upon waking-
before I even speak
I need it all throughout the day
It goes so well with weed!
I need it if I'm writing
In my favorite Beatles mug-
I need it if I'm playing
keeps my strange incentive plugged.
For years they said it would kill me
I never really cared...
I once tried to do without it
and had the whole town scared!
So now, like all my fancies
I embrace the happy thoughts
but know I've said so many things,
I think I need two pots!
Anonymous
Devilish said:I never knew but often wondered if anyone felt this way about that.. beautifully written..
Thank you --let me try not to screw this comment us--we know my history
-I have many vices but that's the one that if I do without--take away my weapons-quick..lol..it goes so well with all the other bad things I do..it's essential to my entire existence haha --this was fun-Thank's for the thread!
here goes......
Thank you --let me try not to screw this comment us--we know my history
-I have many vices but that's the one that if I do without--take away my weapons-quick..lol..it goes so well with all the other bad things I do..it's essential to my entire existence haha --this was fun-Thank's for the thread! here goes......
Addicted
Mesmerized by your eyes of steel
cutting through my soul
Tormented by their painful appeal
I lose all control
Fascinated by your vicious tongue
slashing my ev'ry breath
Horrified as you rob each lung
I grow closer to death
Obsessed by the black hole of your heart
beating down my dreams
Bewildered as you rip me apart
I tear at the seams
Addicted to your abusive ways
shredding away my life
Weakened by your fiery blaze
I yearn to be your wife
Mesmerized by your eyes of steel
cutting through my soul
Tormented by their painful appeal
I lose all control
Fascinated by your vicious tongue
slashing my ev'ry breath
Horrified as you rob each lung
I grow closer to death
Obsessed by the black hole of your heart
beating down my dreams
Bewildered as you rip me apart
I tear at the seams
Addicted to your abusive ways
shredding away my life
Weakened by your fiery blaze
I yearn to be your wife
Mr. Columbian
Oh how I love to turn you on first thing in the morning
The mere thought of you gets to me without any warning
Your beautiful ebony color is alluring
Your delectable smell, so reassuring
I can't wait for the moment that you slip between my lips
You do your job well, without any tips
As I suck you in, I feel so alive
This is the only way that I thrive
You have a way of making me go for hours
Like you have some kind of super powers
The taste of you for me is desired
Twice a day or more is required
When I swallow, your essence fills me with pleasure
What you do for me, there is no measure
After I have had you, I can change my perspective
Nothing else is quite this effective
My love for you will always be true
Forever you will be my favorite brew
Thank you coffee for always being there for me.
Oh how I love to turn you on first thing in the morning
The mere thought of you gets to me without any warning
Your beautiful ebony color is alluring
Your delectable smell, so reassuring
I can't wait for the moment that you slip between my lips
You do your job well, without any tips
As I suck you in, I feel so alive
This is the only way that I thrive
You have a way of making me go for hours
Like you have some kind of super powers
The taste of you for me is desired
Twice a day or more is required
When I swallow, your essence fills me with pleasure
What you do for me, there is no measure
After I have had you, I can change my perspective
Nothing else is quite this effective
My love for you will always be true
Forever you will be my favorite brew
Thank you coffee for always being there for me.
raorrick said:Addicted
Mesmerized by your eyes of steel
cutting through my soul
Tormented by their painful appeal
I lose all control
Fascinated by your vicious tongue
slashing my ev'ry breath
Horrified as you rob each lung
I grow closer to death
Obsessed by the black hole of your heart
beating down my dreams
Bewildered as you rip me apart
I tear at the seams
Addicted to your abusive ways
shredding away my life
Weakened by your fiery blaze
I yearn to be your wife
Holy fuck! Girl you just gave me chills . I still got em.. Damn.. I dont even know what to say to this.. WOW! tragically beautiful!
Mesmerized by your eyes of steel
cutting through my soul
Tormented by their painful appeal
I lose all control
Fascinated by your vicious tongue
slashing my ev'ry breath
Horrified as you rob each lung
I grow closer to death
Obsessed by the black hole of your heart
beating down my dreams
Bewildered as you rip me apart
I tear at the seams
Addicted to your abusive ways
shredding away my life
Weakened by your fiery blaze
I yearn to be your wife
Holy fuck! Girl you just gave me chills . I still got em.. Damn.. I dont even know what to say to this.. WOW! tragically beautiful!
