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What Drug is your Candy...

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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Poetry Contest

Confessions of Pleasure..
Ok for those of use who indulge or have usually prefer one specifically. What ever it is I want you to write about it..
200 words or less.. A new or old poem. 2 entries. what you like about it, the sensation it gives you and what it does for you. I'll give an example.. Don't hold back theres no judging here..


HooKed...

Candy man. Sweet candy man. A new flavor to please.
Wrapped in your vagrance.. While down on my knees..
Inhaling the failing of white fairy dust..
Digesting the blessing of poisoness lust..
Embraced by the taste of this chemical dream...
Floating while coating the sickness you breed..

Candy man.. Sweet candy man.. "Oh" sprinkle the love..
Of potion devotion.. I can't get enough...
Intoxicate my mental state. Breathe clarity in vain..
Feed my disease while I render me sane..

nagasaki
pittyfulmind
Twisted Dreamer
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stepping stones

stepping stones stepping stones
stepping stones iv'e found
even though i step on them
they don't make any sound

tippy toes i walk across
in my living room
stepping stones now all around
have some more mushrooms

mushrooms coarsing through my vains
painting pictures bright as day
putting stepping stones in my lounge
time for me to play

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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nagasaki said:stepping stones

stepping stones stepping stones
stepping stones iv'e found
even though i step on them
they don't make any sound

tippy toes i walk across
in my living room
stepping stones now all around
have some more mushrooms

mushrooms coarsing through my vains
painting pictures bright as day
putting stepping stones in my lounge
time for me to play


Love it! Thank you.

Cinny
Fire of Insight
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Slice;

It's so wonderful,
Feeling that
       Pain
And watching the
RED
flowing,
flowing,
flowing down.
It's like strawberry
syrup,
and the razor is
the spoon that ladles it
upon my flesh.
Deliciously sweet,
       oVeRwHeLmInG
my every sense of
sexual desire
and craving.
Slicing down the
SNOW
that is now tainted
bright
RED
again, yet I always
look so
          hApPy
Don't I?

crimsin
Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
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I don't think my poem quite fit but awesome topic!!!

poet Anonymous


My candy is dandy

Legal everywhere

No DEA number

No script to beg for

Phenylethylamine gives me a high

Some say it is better than sex

Anadamide is my legal mary jane

Need no coffee ‘cause of Theobromine


My lover bought me chocolate truffles

With his good loving….I had no cares

Sex and chocolate go together

Better than love and marriage


A chocolate addict can be easily seen

They need to lose weight and hide candy

Just in case there is a crisis

Somehow I have a crisis every day

Chocolate helps in every way…….


_______________________________________________________________

CHEMICALS FOUND IN CHOCOLATE:
1. Anandamide: an endogenous cannabinoid found in the brain. Anandamide is a neurotransmitter that targets the same brain structures as THC, the active ingredient in cannabis.
2. Theobromine: a stimulant frequently confused with caffeine. Theobromine affects humans similarly to caffeine, but on a much smaller scale.
3. Phenylethylamine: earned the nickname 'chocolate amphetamine.' High levels of this neurotransmitter help promote feelings of attraction, excitement, giddiness and apprehension. Phenylethylamine works by stimulating the brain's pleasure centres and reaches peak levels during orgasm. Chocolate has the highest concentration in any food of phenylethylamine, which is the chemical produced in the brain when a person is in love.

firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Fire of Insight
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Sink your cherry red lips
Right into mine..
I have a small confession..
Your kiss is wine..

No one will know..
The truth behind this game..
No I won't mention
Your precious little name..

Don't think I forgot..
Because dear.. I never will..
The kiss that night...
Gave me such thrill..

It was a long time ago..
But I doubt you forgot..
Your delicious little drug..
Got me higher than pot..

Higher than any drug
I ever brought to my lips..
The sensation of your hands
Placed upon my hips...

It was the first time
I ever kissed a girl..
The breathlesness
Set me into a whirl..

Like crank or acid
You fill an empty need..
I saw the signs..
But I did not heed..

Because you little drug..
Got me flying high..
I only wish I had kept you..
To say you were mine..

firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Fire of Insight
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The above said poem...

IS based on a true story.. so I guess you can kinda say..

"I kissed a girl and I LOVED IT!"..

But I am straight.. It was just one of those things you wanted to do..so you did..

braggman
Steve Bragg
Dangerous Mind
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Good gal Ms. Devilish. A woman after my own heart. I'm busy working on a couple new ones, but as you said new or old are welcome, here are a couple of older drug/candy/consumption poems that haven't been in a contest yet.

Crane


Just as long
as each line
is filled… time
is held better.
Words, the snare
words, the solution
to themselves
divert from the issue
real issue of living
or not.
Just as long
as they keep
the flow
the rest of this debauchery
passes as just a process
of cultivating character.
I can smoke
until I taste the bloodflow
of collapsing alveoli,
chew up the past
in candy fistfuls of sweet Valium,
scratching out little lies
that give me license
to fill each page
unfolding uncounted, untold years
shedding thoughts I’d barely dared to dream.
I fold ten poems an hour
into paper cranes
polluting the whole stretch
of ancient water
with diluted words.

braggman
Steve Bragg
Dangerous Mind
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The Hard Way

Searching, broke
scavengers crawl,
pick the floor
smoking bits of plaster
wax and peanuts
chips of fingernail
in an attitude of prayer.

We stare
and earn a cold wisdom,
curtains are drawn against the low rise
of the sun.
My eyes have obsessed
on every spot of the floor
carefully twenty times
or more
wordless.
You peer though the blinds on every window
in rotation,
wordless.
The things that can be owned have all been sold.
The money has all left down its own sleepless paths.
The phone has gone silent, no calls left unmade.
The frantic lighter flashing is exhausted.
The scheming wheels have spun and stopped.
The words have stopped
but that long shallow drone of time just holds
and we wait
wordless.


Crack is a poem
unto itself,
a bare truth written in few words.
It grips you tight, excites
smokeblacks your inside.
It brings you from elation
to disillusion
faster than philosophy
deeper than prose.
We are poor, very poor
to so need truth
to need to learn this
every single time
the hard way.

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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Forum Posts: 1744

crimsin said:I don't think my poem quite fit but awesome topic!!!

What ever is your pleasure sweety.  what ever your drug..  It fits...=)

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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Forum Posts: 1744

Awesome everyone... truly i love it.

Cinny
Fire of Insight
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Joined 21st Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 983

Secret;

I have a dirty secret.
I enjoy being
       TIED UP
And sometimes,
bLiNdFoLdEd
or
WhIpPeD.
Bite my skin,
draw my
      BLOOD
and make me feel
again.
Make me
   CrAvE
again.
Sweet leather,
the ball gag is
a piece of
        CANDY,
making my mouth
sAlIvAtE
so heavily in desire
and EAGERNESS.
I'll share my dirty
SeCrEt
with you
if you promise to make it
                 HuRt So GoOd

Devilish
Dangerous Mind
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Beautiful!

Cinny
Fire of Insight
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Forum Posts: 983

Thank you Devilish! (:
I am debating whether I want to make it a bit longer but that pretty much sums my addiction for BDSM. xD

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