Poetry competition CLOSED 5th May 2012 6:15am
WINNER
Cinny
Cinny
RUNNERS-UP:
PierreTheMad
and Devilish
DU Crazy
Anonymous
any rules?
Lil Suzies Halloween Horror..
Mmmmmm...
That one there
is lil Susie...
With all the costumes...
It's a lil confusing...
But her smell...
I can tell...
She's getting close...
Awe there she is...
Dressed as a ghost...
"Well... Hello there suzanna" ...
"Where's your Nanna?"
"What?"...
"You'r out here all alone?" ...
"Well that's just on heard of!"
"Let's get you home!"
"Come on inside"...
"I'll get my keys"...
"So help yourself...
To the candy and things"...
Aweeeee...
Yes...
She's fast asleep...
Now the neighbors won't hear a peep...
Oh goodness...
She's a sweet lil thing...
Smells like an angel...
My fetish she brings...
Now let me position er' body in ways to get naughty...
Mmmmmm...
Yes...
Just like that...
Soon as I get it...
I'll take her back...
Home...
Before it's known...
That she is missing...
"That was great!"...
"Ok wake up!"...
"It's getting late"...
"Now when your mommy asks where you've been"...
"You just tell her"...
"Trick or Treatin...
With
your
bestest
friend!"
You said anything...
Mmmmmm...
That one there
is lil Susie...
With all the costumes...
It's a lil confusing...
But her smell...
I can tell...
She's getting close...
Awe there she is...
Dressed as a ghost...
"Well... Hello there suzanna" ...
"Where's your Nanna?"
"What?"...
"You'r out here all alone?" ...
"Well that's just on heard of!"
"Let's get you home!"
"Come on inside"...
"I'll get my keys"...
"So help yourself...
To the candy and things"...
Aweeeee...
Yes...
She's fast asleep...
Now the neighbors won't hear a peep...
Oh goodness...
She's a sweet lil thing...
Smells like an angel...
My fetish she brings...
Now let me position er' body in ways to get naughty...
Mmmmmm...
Yes...
Just like that...
Soon as I get it...
I'll take her back...
Home...
Before it's known...
That she is missing...
"That was great!"...
"Ok wake up!"...
"It's getting late"...
"Now when your mommy asks where you've been"...
"You just tell her"...
"Trick or Treatin...
With
your
bestest
friend!"
You said anything...
Set in ways- for an age
Tables set for two,
Mood set for just the one,
Be it lonely nights at the movies,
Troubled times for some.
Whilst desperados lie in bed,
Dieting on tv sex
Being pushed aside leaves no way to express
How hard you wish to love.
Tables set for two,
Mood set for just the one,
Be it lonely nights at the movies,
Troubled times for some.
Whilst desperados lie in bed,
Dieting on tv sex
Being pushed aside leaves no way to express
How hard you wish to love.
[quote-76555-skinnyjean]Set in ways- for an age
Tables set for two,
Mood set for just the one,
Be it lonely nights at the movies,
Troubled times for some.
Whilst desperados lie in bed,
Dieting on tv sex
Being pushed aside leaves no way to express
How hard you wish to love.
good job
Tables set for two,
Mood set for just the one,
Be it lonely nights at the movies,
Troubled times for some.
Whilst desperados lie in bed,
Dieting on tv sex
Being pushed aside leaves no way to express
How hard you wish to love.
good job
This Deaf Dancer
Where do I go from here
how do I rid your fear
I answer
but nothing's clear
this deaf dancer
through the floor
can hear .
I feel every minute
all the seconds
that tick in it
just remember
I'm real
and from no one I steal
if it rolls I'm the wheel
and if nobody get's it
well I do
your magnetic
telecanetic
delectably , hectic
a comprehendable , sceptic
understandable , unhandable
loving , apathetic
I drive myself mad here
going round
mental hemispheres
I know I'm not perfect
kind of glass or a perspex
breakable , flexible
clarity you just can't see
together we are sailing free
untethered , jocularity
heavy feathers are not
you and me
simply because
they just can't be
we endeavour in hilarity .
I pedalled a wipe out
in the street
a dogfight , invite
dinner nightmare
I wore white
the wrong thing to wear
what a night to frighten
the unscared
Horsefly bites
and wine we did share
outdoor delights
of drunken impaired
driving on the right
and you cut my hair
so I thought if I might
recall times
that we shared .
So in all the long
don't get me wrong
I hold your flame and I sing your song
as I sit here
you've nothing at all to fear
don't ever
not remember
this deaf dancer
through the floor
can hear .
Where do I go from here
how do I rid your fear
I answer
but nothing's clear
this deaf dancer
through the floor
can hear .
I feel every minute
all the seconds
that tick in it
just remember
I'm real
and from no one I steal
if it rolls I'm the wheel
and if nobody get's it
well I do
your magnetic
telecanetic
delectably , hectic
a comprehendable , sceptic
understandable , unhandable
loving , apathetic
I drive myself mad here
going round
mental hemispheres
I know I'm not perfect
kind of glass or a perspex
breakable , flexible
clarity you just can't see
together we are sailing free
untethered , jocularity
heavy feathers are not
you and me
simply because
they just can't be
we endeavour in hilarity .
I pedalled a wipe out
in the street
a dogfight , invite
dinner nightmare
I wore white
the wrong thing to wear
what a night to frighten
the unscared
Horsefly bites
and wine we did share
outdoor delights
of drunken impaired
driving on the right
and you cut my hair
so I thought if I might
recall times
that we shared .
So in all the long
don't get me wrong
I hold your flame and I sing your song
as I sit here
you've nothing at all to fear
don't ever
not remember
this deaf dancer
through the floor
can hear .
Cloudy Moons Rising to 9
So you want to bounce
around the room
let it all out
under the moon ,
you're the lunar lady
reflective , confectionary ,
the lion tamer
who really gets to me ,
an avid gamer
writing in pictionary ,
a depression slayer , elevation maker
organical , natural , lover of all animals ,
the lunar leaper
sattelite streaker
hope enchancer
cloud of nine , step dancer ,
I hope you like this
Miki the blissful miss .
If I could , I'd drain the sea
so the planet shrunk
then closer you would be .
So you want to bounce
around the room
let it all out
under the moon ,
you're the lunar lady
reflective , confectionary ,
the lion tamer
who really gets to me ,
an avid gamer
writing in pictionary ,
a depression slayer , elevation maker
organical , natural , lover of all animals ,
the lunar leaper
sattelite streaker
hope enchancer
cloud of nine , step dancer ,
I hope you like this
Miki the blissful miss .
If I could , I'd drain the sea
so the planet shrunk
then closer you would be .
Crazy Me , Sane You
I like crazy
it is my way
clarity , reality
it is too fake ,
you always want a go
at me
your so perfect
and now blame free
what you don't get
is I can see
that things aren't what
they seem to be
devoid
of all
responsibility
paranoid
and with the gaul
to try and judge me
but you cannot buy the call
of a bird who's free
there's only you who'll fall
when your up in a tree
looking down on all the small
that from once you'd feed .
You used to class me
as your mentor
now your nasty
and judgemental .
You cheated the test
that qualify's your fight
your only the best
at living a fat lie
you've a phoney zest
inside a faulse life
with such adamance
at always being right
but you jumped the fence
when things got tight
the pounds the pence
only shine a light
on the shallowness
of your plight
but at least I can rest
when I sleep each night .
I like crazy
it is my way
clarity , reality
it is too fake ,
you always want a go
at me
your so perfect
and now blame free
what you don't get
is I can see
that things aren't what
they seem to be
devoid
of all
responsibility
paranoid
and with the gaul
to try and judge me
but you cannot buy the call
of a bird who's free
there's only you who'll fall
when your up in a tree
looking down on all the small
that from once you'd feed .
You used to class me
as your mentor
now your nasty
and judgemental .
You cheated the test
that qualify's your fight
your only the best
at living a fat lie
you've a phoney zest
inside a faulse life
with such adamance
at always being right
but you jumped the fence
when things got tight
the pounds the pence
only shine a light
on the shallowness
of your plight
but at least I can rest
when I sleep each night .
Anonymous
Crazy-it is...I had 25 and wrote this to the most special one---
You came from something whole-
they cut you up and stored you away
in a dark, cold place
They buried you at last
yet, you found a way out
then they uprooted you
left you for dead
now I cut you to shreds
you poor thing...
I will eat you
sad life it's true
for the likes of you
A potato.
Ha Ha Ha....lol
You came from something whole-
they cut you up and stored you away
in a dark, cold place
They buried you at last
yet, you found a way out
then they uprooted you
left you for dead
now I cut you to shreds
you poor thing...
I will eat you
sad life it's true
for the likes of you
A potato.
Ha Ha Ha....lol
mikimoondancer said:Crazy-it is...I had 25 and wrote this to the most special one---
You came from something whole-
they cut you up and stored you away
in a dark, cold place
They buried you at last
yet, you found a way out
then they uprooted you
left you for dead
now I cut you to shreds
you poor thing...
I will eat you
sad life it's true
for the likes of you
A potato.
Ha Ha Ha....lol
You came from something whole-
they cut you up and stored you away
in a dark, cold place
They buried you at last
yet, you found a way out
then they uprooted you
left you for dead
now I cut you to shreds
you poor thing...
I will eat you
sad life it's true
for the likes of you
A potato.
Ha Ha Ha....lol
Anonymous
I want to be
a flashlight-all out bright
lead the way
I want to be
a matchbox car-the common kind
just drive away
I want to be a four leaf clover
make a wish-call it over
I want to be a DVD-spin all night
live in music's delight
I want to be a ceiling fan- twirl above
and think not about love
I want to be my lap-top-compact and light
A restore button inside.
I want to be the dishcloth-soft and light
Wiping the dirt-then drying up tight.
a flashlight-all out bright
lead the way
I want to be
a matchbox car-the common kind
just drive away
I want to be a four leaf clover
make a wish-call it over
I want to be a DVD-spin all night
live in music's delight
I want to be a ceiling fan- twirl above
and think not about love
I want to be my lap-top-compact and light
A restore button inside.
I want to be the dishcloth-soft and light
Wiping the dirt-then drying up tight.
