Poetry competition CLOSED 27th April 2012 5:49pm
WINNER
kriticool
kriticool
RUNNER-UP:
Devilish
The Loss Of Innocence
Poetry Contest Description
Write on the taste of innocence before and after it is betrayed.
Interpret that however you wish.
No more than two entries please.
At least ONE entry must be new.
Check spelling and grammar.
Please title your work so that I may acknowledge accordingly.
Let me feel the power behind your words.
Also, feel free to break the before and after up in the two poems and have them judged together.
No more than two entries please.
At least ONE entry must be new.
Check spelling and grammar.
Please title your work so that I may acknowledge accordingly.
Let me feel the power behind your words.
Also, feel free to break the before and after up in the two poems and have them judged together.
gone, she never like me i guess,
never felt her, i had her unguard,
but never betreated me,
attached to me, never care,
emotions took me, emotions
attack me, lost everything,
dont miss anything but my innocence.
cant find it, one is gone,
is gone, spreaded on the air
is mixing every day, with
other innocence, left unprotected
crying for us, blaming us. knowing
that one is lost, they cant do nothing
for us.
Sena
never felt her, i had her unguard,
but never betreated me,
attached to me, never care,
emotions took me, emotions
attack me, lost everything,
dont miss anything but my innocence.
cant find it, one is gone,
is gone, spreaded on the air
is mixing every day, with
other innocence, left unprotected
crying for us, blaming us. knowing
that one is lost, they cant do nothing
for us.
Sena
Anonymous
My Gift To You
I have waited
for this
for a
long time
To feel desire
for another
and feel his
desire towards me
To be warmed
by the passion
with out as much
as one finger
across my skin
To see hunger
just by looking
into his eyes
So please sit down
and let me give myself to you
I stand before you
trembling yet intent
I want you to be my first
I want you to watch me
As I unwrap this gift
my gift to you is me
slowly I peel away my clothing
My heart beats fast
as I watch you
the longing look
in your eyes
My bare innocence
has you mesmerized
I come closer and
grab your hands
place them on my breasts
I say to you
my body is now yours
and you can do the rest
I have waited
for this
for a
long time
To feel desire
for another
and feel his
desire towards me
To be warmed
by the passion
with out as much
as one finger
across my skin
To see hunger
just by looking
into his eyes
So please sit down
and let me give myself to you
I stand before you
trembling yet intent
I want you to be my first
I want you to watch me
As I unwrap this gift
my gift to you is me
slowly I peel away my clothing
My heart beats fast
as I watch you
the longing look
in your eyes
My bare innocence
has you mesmerized
I come closer and
grab your hands
place them on my breasts
I say to you
my body is now yours
and you can do the rest
Anonymous
What I Got In Return
I gave myself to you
endured the pain
to reach the pleasure
thought the man I loved
would treat me like his treasure
Instead you
treated me like dirt
you used my body
and all I felt was hurt
you made me feel
as if I were a sex toy
now my purity is gone
and this
you just want to exploit
I felt the passion
enough to give you my flower
and you painfully
removed each petal
as though
I had given you great power
But in a way
I guess I did
when I gave you that gift
not only did I lose my first love...
I lost my Innocence
I gave myself to you
endured the pain
to reach the pleasure
thought the man I loved
would treat me like his treasure
Instead you
treated me like dirt
you used my body
and all I felt was hurt
you made me feel
as if I were a sex toy
now my purity is gone
and this
you just want to exploit
I felt the passion
enough to give you my flower
and you painfully
removed each petal
as though
I had given you great power
But in a way
I guess I did
when I gave you that gift
not only did I lose my first love...
I lost my Innocence
Loss Of Innocence
The whiteness of his soul, was real and pure,
His soul was spotless, of this I'm sure.
It carried blessings of graces unborn.
Be moved by the ignorance of a new baby born!
As the innocence of the newborn
At birth is unleashed,
His mothers heart with relief skips some beats,
Its sound uplifts the hearts of all,
It is as it was a blessing for all.
After the battle of right's and wrong's upheaval,
In the end we concede to the presence of evil,
Innocence is lost by all not most.
This soul is not different, it tricked its host.
This is a mild attempt to recall
the loss of my innocence.
I failed yet again
This I'm saying with confidence;
My own soul's whiteness one day did burn,
My innocence at the sight of evil was gone.
My soul desires the pleasures of sin.
I strive hard everyday,
For purity serene
The whiteness of his soul, was real and pure,
His soul was spotless, of this I'm sure.
It carried blessings of graces unborn.
Be moved by the ignorance of a new baby born!
As the innocence of the newborn
At birth is unleashed,
His mothers heart with relief skips some beats,
Its sound uplifts the hearts of all,
It is as it was a blessing for all.
After the battle of right's and wrong's upheaval,
In the end we concede to the presence of evil,
Innocence is lost by all not most.
This soul is not different, it tricked its host.
This is a mild attempt to recall
the loss of my innocence.
I failed yet again
This I'm saying with confidence;
My own soul's whiteness one day did burn,
My innocence at the sight of evil was gone.
My soul desires the pleasures of sin.
I strive hard everyday,
For purity serene
Unborn Nostalgia (SP Summerscales)
I need you to reinvent
my unborn nostalgia
to strike a dent
in my butterfly neuralgia
a song for when I die
a lament
for us
forever after
to redefine
my scarred memory eye
and sit with me and cry
through to laughter
I greed you too much
I need you badly
for your present state I cannot touch
the arms I would welcome gladly
Instead I act so butch
but apart I fall so sadly
different keys now unlock your doors
but all I ask is open up to me.
I need you to reinvent
my unborn nostalgia
to strike a dent
in my butterfly neuralgia
a song for when I die
a lament
for us
forever after
to redefine
my scarred memory eye
and sit with me and cry
through to laughter
I greed you too much
I need you badly
for your present state I cannot touch
the arms I would welcome gladly
Instead I act so butch
but apart I fall so sadly
different keys now unlock your doors
but all I ask is open up to me.
Its been a couple years now,
but I can still look back.
Forgive me if you hear my heart,
it has been known to snap.
I was a ripe 13 years old,
and this boy treated me wrong.
He talked me into cheating myself,
wrote me a night-time song.
This time was sweet, and unexperienced,
the moon was full and bright.
He put his hand over my innocent mouth,
as he stole away my light.
My blood tainted my cleanliness,
I held back and didn't cry.
He knew I wasn't made for him.
If I could ask him I'd ask, "why?"
I don't like how he did me,
played me like a tune.
Still, I miss the brown-eyed boy,
born on the 11th of June.
but I can still look back.
Forgive me if you hear my heart,
it has been known to snap.
I was a ripe 13 years old,
and this boy treated me wrong.
He talked me into cheating myself,
wrote me a night-time song.
This time was sweet, and unexperienced,
the moon was full and bright.
He put his hand over my innocent mouth,
as he stole away my light.
My blood tainted my cleanliness,
I held back and didn't cry.
He knew I wasn't made for him.
If I could ask him I'd ask, "why?"
I don't like how he did me,
played me like a tune.
Still, I miss the brown-eyed boy,
born on the 11th of June.
Lost
A loss never to be given back
Taken unwillingly
Drugged and abused
Never a little girl again
Over time
Ways are lost
She goes downhill
Yet he still haunts her
Just go away
Thats all she wants
To escape
To never live that again
A loss never to be given back
Taken unwillingly
Drugged and abused
Never a little girl again
Over time
Ways are lost
She goes downhill
Yet he still haunts her
Just go away
Thats all she wants
To escape
To never live that again
Come here litte girl..
Come here little girl.
I welcome you..
To this dark and TwisteD world...
As I watched you play
in your front yard
It did something to me
It got my dick hard.
You ever seen a dick before?
Your daddy never showed you..
What men do to whores?
Does this mean
that I will be your first?
To penetrate you...
Feel your insides burst!
Ooh shit.. Yes!
Shut the fuck up!
Stop all that screamin...
and bleedin...
It's just me...
Your neighbor...
Not some demon!!!
Ohh..
I'm fixin to cum.
Do you feel it to baby?
Or are you finally numb?
Here it goes...
Its right there!
You want it in your mouth
or in your hair?
Fuck it's too late!
I came inside you..
Now get up..
clean up.
and
PUT
ALL
OF
THIS
BEHIND
YOU!!!
Before...
Come here little girl.
I welcome you..
To this dark and TwisteD world...
As I watched you play
in your front yard
It did something to me
It got my dick hard.
You ever seen a dick before?
Your daddy never showed you..
What men do to whores?
Does this mean
that I will be your first?
To penetrate you...
Feel your insides burst!
Ooh shit.. Yes!
Shut the fuck up!
Stop all that screamin...
and bleedin...
It's just me...
Your neighbor...
Not some demon!!!
Ohh..
I'm fixin to cum.
Do you feel it to baby?
Or are you finally numb?
Here it goes...
Its right there!
You want it in your mouth
or in your hair?
Fuck it's too late!
I came inside you..
Now get up..
clean up.
and
PUT
ALL
OF
THIS
BEHIND
YOU!!!
Before...
')oetry were my lungs, i would breath thrrough poetry.Lets Kill Mommy..
Oh mommy..
you show me
so much love..
i couldnt ask for anything more..
its like you were sent
straight
from hell
above..
You say the most
beautiful things
like..
"If only I'd a died
when born..
How daddy couldnt
love a whore"..
Or taught me
how I best perform.."
I live to hear
those sadistic
cheers..
Things ive had to eat
for years..
Wishing
you
could
calm
my
fears
that you indulged me..
No santa claus..
While daddys paws
had me crawlin
up the walls..
i'm folding..
No future for me
beyond the sheets..
"My
back
is
all
im
good
for" ..
So let me introduce myself..
I'm no longer the kid
that you can hit
sell to strangers
or worth a shit..
I'm a bad bitch..
6'2 body rockin
mind of mental
show stoppin..
and true to the game..
A lil insane
damaged in vane
feline..
So for your sake..
dont make
my first crime..
Killin you... BITCH
After..
Oh mommy..
you show me
so much love..
i couldnt ask for anything more..
its like you were sent
straight
from hell
above..
You say the most
beautiful things
like..
"If only I'd a died
when born..
How daddy couldnt
love a whore"..
Or taught me
how I best perform.."
I live to hear
those sadistic
cheers..
Things ive had to eat
for years..
Wishing
you
could
calm
my
fears
that you indulged me..
No santa claus..
While daddys paws
had me crawlin
up the walls..
i'm folding..
No future for me
beyond the sheets..
"My
back
is
all
im
good
for" ..
So let me introduce myself..
I'm no longer the kid
that you can hit
sell to strangers
or worth a shit..
I'm a bad bitch..
6'2 body rockin
mind of mental
show stoppin..
and true to the game..
A lil insane
damaged in vane
feline..
So for your sake..
dont make
my first crime..
Killin you... BITCH
After..
