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A tricky Write

poet Anonymous

ha ha ha, Paul-We got it all figured out-its so funny-and sad, and sick and demented..and sad-Much love 2 ya hunny. peace x

poet Anonymous

Me thinks me should enter
and say in words
that mental impairment
Is your
curse

goodest
Dangerous Mind
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as miki moondances so slow
goodest vibes only show
deep underground go
to know
glow....

poet Anonymous

goodest said:as miki moondances so slow
goodest vibes only show
deep underground go
to know
glow....




That's sweet Goodest, I always love ur writes! Peace x

poet Anonymous

Let's remember I dance slow
or fast, as desired
I just dont
care enough
rise!

goodest
Dangerous Mind
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there is so much care
in you miki everywhere
your heart bare
you share
flair

poet Anonymous

goodest said:there is so much care
in you miki everywhere
your heart bare
you share
flair



Since I like creating awareness of ASD-good place to insert a point Goodest-for those who are good and kind souls-I care to the last breath-to those who hurt those I love=i would fight to the last breath-A common trait in ASD is being obsessed with what you are interested in-and being completely unaware of all else-It's a theme in my life that I have learned to embrace. Always nice to hear ur words , Peace , xx

goodest
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 3007

what is asd.....

lightbaron
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 19th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 2374

mikimoondancer said:[quote-74097-MrAlptraum][quote-73928-lightbaron][quote-73902-MrAlptraum]I'd smile as I kill
what resembles my memory
if you could
only remember,

me.



dig it mr.a[/quote]

Can ya?[/quote]


I have seen an allusion to me and my memory a few times-If there is anything or anyone I need to remember-they better remember my brain injury and speak up---I AM GONNA STATE-FOR THE RECORD-I SEE CLEARLY BEYOND THE CRAP-EITHER SAY-OR STFU[/quote]



miki dear i have no idea what the hell your talking about

MrAlptraum
Mr A
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 24th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 1878

lightbaron said:[quote-74129-mikimoondancer][quote-74097-MrAlptraum][quote-73928-lightbaron][quote-73902-MrAlptraum]I'd smile as I kill
what resembles my memory
if you could
only remember,

me.



dig it mr.a[/quote]

Can ya?[/quote]


I have seen an allusion to me and my memory a few times-If there is anything or anyone I need to remember-they better remember my brain injury and speak up---I AM GONNA STATE-FOR THE RECORD-I SEE CLEARLY BEYOND THE CRAP-EITHER SAY-OR STFU[/quote]



miki dear i have no idea what the hell your talking about[/quote]

I'm a little lost here.

poet Anonymous

MrAlptraum said:[quote-74157-lightbaron][quote-74129-mikimoondancer][quote-74097-MrAlptraum][quote-73928-lightbaron][quote-73902-MrAlptraum]I'd smile as I kill
what resembles my memory
if you could
only remember,

me.



dig it mr.a[/quote]

Can ya?[/quote]

In some places, i should make a quote and in others- just type a note-I have a history in the forums of typing words in the wrong places and mostly just stay out of them-so here i quoted-yet should have noted-and sorry, if u have no clue what I mean ((to anyone)), I don't mean it for you, contest is looking tough to judge, never expected so many entries-lol-peace out, Miki


I have seen an allusion to me and my memory a few times-If there is anything or anyone I need to remember-they better remember my brain injury and speak up---I AM GONNA STATE-FOR THE RECORD-I SEE CLEARLY BEYOND THE CRAP-EITHER SAY-OR STFU[/quote]



miki dear i have no idea what the hell your talking about[/quote]

I'm a little lost here.[/quote]

goodest
Dangerous Mind
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is Life really worth it
how do you interpret
who unearthed it
worked it
perfect.....

Woomaster70
Strange Creature
Australia
Joined 5th Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 3

Take me to the river
Bury me in water
Weighs me down
No breath
Death!

lightbaron
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 19th Jan 2012
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goodest said:is Life really worth it
how do you interpret
who unearthed it
worked it
perfect.....




that would actually sound good as the first three bars in a hip hop track, where who "unearthed it" quick ran into "worked it- perfect"all as the third bar setting up a decent cadence with multiples

goodest
Dangerous Mind
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Forum Posts: 3007

yeah lightbaron....i could ride with that for a long time....glad some1 as talented as you enjoyed it.....

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