Poetry competition CLOSED 16th March 2012 1:36pm
WINNER
Devilish
Devilish
Vent
The blood of Angels..
There's a lynching going on.. Everyones invited..
The Devil has to pay.. We've already decided..
She has the fuckin nerve to be rude.. To ones with out a clue..
As they gathered up the army.. To see my leaving through..
But not before it lingers.. A fifteen second scent...
A crying that the wolves.. Have savored in HeLL BeNt..
I won't be cradled or enabled.. By the wrath of angels blood..
Paint a picture of a saint.. Then drag my name through mud..
Hell.. I thought you knew I liked it rough..
Serve it to me dirty.. Make me feel unworthy..
Let me cry in vane. Feel pleasure from the pain..
Then gather all your voices and insync all say my name..
There's a lynching going on.. Everyones invited..
The Devil has to pay.. We've already decided..
She has the fuckin nerve to be rude.. To ones with out a clue..
As they gathered up the army.. To see my leaving through..
But not before it lingers.. A fifteen second scent...
A crying that the wolves.. Have savored in HeLL BeNt..
I won't be cradled or enabled.. By the wrath of angels blood..
Paint a picture of a saint.. Then drag my name through mud..
Hell.. I thought you knew I liked it rough..
Serve it to me dirty.. Make me feel unworthy..
Let me cry in vane. Feel pleasure from the pain..
Then gather all your voices and insync all say my name..
Commitment lies in butterflies
Dying with each solumn, breathe you steal
Caress the essence of
the best pleasent, coward kiss
Parting through my lips
What a symphony!
Blood is rushing to my head
And as we speak
Reminising of the times we spent
As I let myself gaze onto him
While you're imagining her in your room
Commitment lies in butterflies, such a shame they had to die...
Dying with each solumn, breathe you steal
Caress the essence of
the best pleasent, coward kiss
Parting through my lips
What a symphony!
Blood is rushing to my head
And as we speak
Reminising of the times we spent
As I let myself gaze onto him
While you're imagining her in your room
Commitment lies in butterflies, such a shame they had to die...
Anonymous
Hard Truth
It started off with a date, then it became much more
for reasons we both agreed on... it stayed casual,
we felt that would be the best.
Then feelings got involved
and I later found out
it would turn into such a mess.
You say that you miss me
when we are not together
and when we are,
we want it to be forever.
We have become more then friends
on more than one level.
We talked everyday,
so I felt this was important,
to say what I needed to say.
But the response I got from you...
It simply blew me away
Out of my comfort zone I crawled,
I told you how I felt
I never thought you would hold it against me,
those awful cards that I was dealt
You said to me
"I really love being with you
I wish we could be together...
You are a beautiful person inside and out
But you cant have anymore kids"
Ok that's it... doors closed
Now I feel like shit
Moral of this story is
Don't fall for the friends with benefits!
It started off with a date, then it became much more
for reasons we both agreed on... it stayed casual,
we felt that would be the best.
Then feelings got involved
and I later found out
it would turn into such a mess.
You say that you miss me
when we are not together
and when we are,
we want it to be forever.
We have become more then friends
on more than one level.
We talked everyday,
so I felt this was important,
to say what I needed to say.
But the response I got from you...
It simply blew me away
Out of my comfort zone I crawled,
I told you how I felt
I never thought you would hold it against me,
those awful cards that I was dealt
You said to me
"I really love being with you
I wish we could be together...
You are a beautiful person inside and out
But you cant have anymore kids"
Ok that's it... doors closed
Now I feel like shit
Moral of this story is
Don't fall for the friends with benefits!
Being Fucked With.
I'm not sure who I am
Am I someone's fucking toy
Some little plaything
For someone fucking admusement
Someone to enjoy
They say I love you til...
Death do us part
You think I'm fucking stupid
Not to damn smart
Maybe you need to see how it goes
You lie and break my heart
You kill me with your comments: painful hurtful blows
Not knowing you're tearing me apart
Maybe your the dumb fuck for thinking this
Lesser than you, you say
I bare my ass in which you can kiss
I'm not you door mat, no more today
I will leave you as you came
Made up and dressed for show
I know it's my fault, I'm to blame
So I must tell you just fucking go
No words
No explanation
No I want some slack
I'm going to do to you what you did to me
Turn around I'm going to stab you in the back
I'm not mad nor upset
No even even close to a boil
To hurt me again: I'll never let
Your going home: worm food in the soil
I leave you with this advice
As you fuck with someones head
Know what your dealing with
You will end up dead
I'm not sure who I am
Am I someone's fucking toy
Some little plaything
For someone fucking admusement
Someone to enjoy
They say I love you til...
Death do us part
You think I'm fucking stupid
Not to damn smart
Maybe you need to see how it goes
You lie and break my heart
You kill me with your comments: painful hurtful blows
Not knowing you're tearing me apart
Maybe your the dumb fuck for thinking this
Lesser than you, you say
I bare my ass in which you can kiss
I'm not you door mat, no more today
I will leave you as you came
Made up and dressed for show
I know it's my fault, I'm to blame
So I must tell you just fucking go
No words
No explanation
No I want some slack
I'm going to do to you what you did to me
Turn around I'm going to stab you in the back
I'm not mad nor upset
No even even close to a boil
To hurt me again: I'll never let
Your going home: worm food in the soil
I leave you with this advice
As you fuck with someones head
Know what your dealing with
You will end up dead
milkyway said:Hard Truth
It started off with a date, then it became much more
for reasons we both agreed on... it stayed casual,
we felt that would be the best.
Then feelings got involved
and I later found out
it would turn into such a mess.
You say that you miss me
when we are not together
and when we are,
we want it to be forever.
We have become more then friends
on more than one level.
We talked everyday,
so I felt this was important,
to say what I needed to say.
But the response I got from you...
It simply blew me away
Out of my comfort zone I crawled,
I told you how I felt
I never thought you would hold it against me,
those awful cards that I was dealt
You said to me
"I really love being with you
I wish we could be together...
You are a beautiful person inside and out
But you cant have anymore kids"
Ok that's it... doors closed
Now I feel like shit
Moral of this story is
Don't fall for the friends with benefits!
Only one truly benefits...the one who wants it more. Great vent.
It started off with a date, then it became much more
for reasons we both agreed on... it stayed casual,
we felt that would be the best.
Then feelings got involved
and I later found out
it would turn into such a mess.
You say that you miss me
when we are not together
and when we are,
we want it to be forever.
We have become more then friends
on more than one level.
We talked everyday,
so I felt this was important,
to say what I needed to say.
But the response I got from you...
It simply blew me away
Out of my comfort zone I crawled,
I told you how I felt
I never thought you would hold it against me,
those awful cards that I was dealt
You said to me
"I really love being with you
I wish we could be together...
You are a beautiful person inside and out
But you cant have anymore kids"
Ok that's it... doors closed
Now I feel like shit
Moral of this story is
Don't fall for the friends with benefits!
Only one truly benefits...the one who wants it more. Great vent.
Anonymous
Atropabelladonna said:[quote-66384-milkyway]Hard Truth
It started off with a date, then it became much more
for reasons we both agreed on... it stayed casual,
we felt that would be the best.
Then feelings got involved
and I later found out
it would turn into such a mess.
You say that you miss me
when we are not together
and when we are,
we want it to be forever.
We have become more then friends
on more than one level.
We talked everyday,
so I felt this was important,
to say what I needed to say.
But the response I got from you...
It simply blew me away
Out of my comfort zone I crawled,
I told you how I felt
I never thought you would hold it against me,
those awful cards that I was dealt
You said to me
"I really love being with you
I wish we could be together...
You are a beautiful person inside and out
But you cant have anymore kids"
Ok that's it... doors closed
Now I feel like shit
Moral of this story is
Don't fall for the friends with benefits!
Only one truly benefits...the one who wants it more. Great vent. [/quote]
Thanks A, feelin kinda stupid right now...thought there was more than there actually was
It started off with a date, then it became much more
for reasons we both agreed on... it stayed casual,
we felt that would be the best.
Then feelings got involved
and I later found out
it would turn into such a mess.
You say that you miss me
when we are not together
and when we are,
we want it to be forever.
We have become more then friends
on more than one level.
We talked everyday,
so I felt this was important,
to say what I needed to say.
But the response I got from you...
It simply blew me away
Out of my comfort zone I crawled,
I told you how I felt
I never thought you would hold it against me,
those awful cards that I was dealt
You said to me
"I really love being with you
I wish we could be together...
You are a beautiful person inside and out
But you cant have anymore kids"
Ok that's it... doors closed
Now I feel like shit
Moral of this story is
Don't fall for the friends with benefits!
Only one truly benefits...the one who wants it more. Great vent. [/quote]
Thanks A, feelin kinda stupid right now...thought there was more than there actually was
Anonymous
Real_Tawk_101 said:write poems about your problems only rule is you only get one post
I AM CONDEMNED TO LIVE
I am condemned to live
When I would rather die
Suicide is not a guarantee
That I will get rid of me
Others have tried it
It did not work
Now they live
In hell on earth
I am condemned to live
With my embarrassments
My failed marriage
My failed career
My failing health
My dispersed family
Despite all
I am condemned to live
The good die young
I agree
The nicest people
Have left me
I feel their presence
Sometimes
Why they had to go
Maybe
They
Finished
What
They
Were
Sent to do
And I didn’t
I AM CONDEMNED TO LIVE
I am condemned to live
When I would rather die
Suicide is not a guarantee
That I will get rid of me
Others have tried it
It did not work
Now they live
In hell on earth
I am condemned to live
With my embarrassments
My failed marriage
My failed career
My failing health
My dispersed family
Despite all
I am condemned to live
The good die young
I agree
The nicest people
Have left me
I feel their presence
Sometimes
Why they had to go
Maybe
They
Finished
What
They
Were
Sent to do
And I didn’t
Merciless Killing
You sit there looking at me as if you know me
I am new here and there
some people see me as i walk out of the shadows to gloom upon you all
Come to me and try and be friends
I hate you as much as everyone else i hate
just fuck off
You sit there looking at me as if you know me
I am new here and there
some people see me as i walk out of the shadows to gloom upon you all
Come to me and try and be friends
I hate you as much as everyone else i hate
just fuck off
What's Coming Around
So what do you want
from me ,
you got each eye
so that I can't see ,
I try to look
kind of jolly , happy
I'm blind and I'm struck
by impossibility ,
the kind bestowed
upon , unwantedly ,
my ride you towed
the one you rode
for free ,
now I'm alone
for your hilarity ,
the break
of my bones
a responsibility ,
to take but you don't ,
though my soul
you squeeze ,
such audacity
is attoned with ease ,
a flea's mentality
is at home , with you it seems .
An ignoramous ,
a blood swigger
you're so shameless ,
a truth rigger ,
your totally blameless
so how do you then figure this
a little miss painless ,
a gold digger
who makes no sense .
Reality devoid ,
depravity you employ ,
internally
you're a cavity ,
who strips me of all joy .
Self obsessed
and mercenary ,
your husband , a press
for the money you bleed
you're a self centered mess ,
you think that you're the best
but I know
as I don't guess
you've got it coming , from me .
So what do you want
from me ,
you got each eye
so that I can't see ,
I try to look
kind of jolly , happy
I'm blind and I'm struck
by impossibility ,
the kind bestowed
upon , unwantedly ,
my ride you towed
the one you rode
for free ,
now I'm alone
for your hilarity ,
the break
of my bones
a responsibility ,
to take but you don't ,
though my soul
you squeeze ,
such audacity
is attoned with ease ,
a flea's mentality
is at home , with you it seems .
An ignoramous ,
a blood swigger
you're so shameless ,
a truth rigger ,
your totally blameless
so how do you then figure this
a little miss painless ,
a gold digger
who makes no sense .
Reality devoid ,
depravity you employ ,
internally
you're a cavity ,
who strips me of all joy .
Self obsessed
and mercenary ,
your husband , a press
for the money you bleed
you're a self centered mess ,
you think that you're the best
but I know
as I don't guess
you've got it coming , from me .
I LOVE TO HATE...
I love to hate this black hole town
Where I am suppressed
Depressed
Choking on the sickly sweet tang
Of self denial
And thus so angelic
I am almost insane
Wrapped up in tendrils of guilt
And the feeling
That I am more than a little perverted.
I’m a wall, I’m a cage
I’m not a real person
I’m a robot girl running on auto pilot
Burying the pain and fly-away rage
Until I want to slit my wrists from the inside of my veins
Though trying to become one with the dirt clogged daisies
Would defeat the purpose
Of every glorious step
I take into the world
Outside the psyche ward walls of oppression
This town represents.
While elastic strings hold me tight,
To snap me back into a plasticated reality
And I can feel the panic attack coming
To asphyxiate me with designer pantyhose
Attached to stiletto heels of judgment
Long before I’ve crossed the threshold
Into lipstick smiles and dead eye greetings
Where we might as well be animated blow-up dolls
For all the truth there is in our expressions
(Not to mention our sex lives).
I love to hate this black hole town
With its bogan men and egotistical pretty boys
Neither of whom I want to fuck
When my tastes go in the opposite direction
And religion has too big a foothold
For me to stand up and say
“Fuck you, I’m a lesbian”
Without drowning in the fallout
When I am not the only one
That will get tortured with that great book of fiction
In this pretentious, black hole of a town… that I love to hate
Indie Adams 2012
I love to hate this black hole town
Where I am suppressed
Depressed
Choking on the sickly sweet tang
Of self denial
And thus so angelic
I am almost insane
Wrapped up in tendrils of guilt
And the feeling
That I am more than a little perverted.
I’m a wall, I’m a cage
I’m not a real person
I’m a robot girl running on auto pilot
Burying the pain and fly-away rage
Until I want to slit my wrists from the inside of my veins
Though trying to become one with the dirt clogged daisies
Would defeat the purpose
Of every glorious step
I take into the world
Outside the psyche ward walls of oppression
This town represents.
While elastic strings hold me tight,
To snap me back into a plasticated reality
And I can feel the panic attack coming
To asphyxiate me with designer pantyhose
Attached to stiletto heels of judgment
Long before I’ve crossed the threshold
Into lipstick smiles and dead eye greetings
Where we might as well be animated blow-up dolls
For all the truth there is in our expressions
(Not to mention our sex lives).
I love to hate this black hole town
With its bogan men and egotistical pretty boys
Neither of whom I want to fuck
When my tastes go in the opposite direction
And religion has too big a foothold
For me to stand up and say
“Fuck you, I’m a lesbian”
Without drowning in the fallout
When I am not the only one
That will get tortured with that great book of fiction
In this pretentious, black hole of a town… that I love to hate
Indie Adams 2012
Look check this out.. I'm no body special.. A lil over the top with my subject matter.. but everything i write about is from experience.. I dont need no young ass judgmental sunshine scribbler to comment on my work and on top of that given me orders on what to do and not to do.. I am mentally disturbed and write about my demons and things that have happen to me. theres nothing funny or debatable about it. So if you dont like my work dont read it. its highly offensive but oh so true.. Closeminded sheltered youngsters that dont watch the news or stray far from there mommas tit need to find a place where they can share playground stories instead of shovel out advise on things they've never experiened.
Devilish said:Look check this out.. I'm no body special.. A lil over the top with my subject matter.. but everything i write about is from experience.. I dont need no young ass judgmental sunshine scribbler to comment on my work and on top of that given me orders on what to do and not to do.. I am mentally disturbed and write about my demons and things that have happen to me. theres nothing funny or debatable about it. So if you dont like my work dont read it. its highly offensive but oh so true.. Closeminded sheltered youngsters that dont watch the news or stray far from there mommas tit need to find a place where they can share playground stories instead of shovel out advise on things they've never experiened. what are u talking about?
