Poetry competition CLOSED 10th December 2022 00:28am
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robert43041 (Viking)
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Zinger

clewluss
SMOOKY
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Joined 22nd Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 281

Poetry Contest

Post a Zinger in the Foo-Kai style.
The Foo-Kai has:
a certain number of syllable in the first line

In the second line it has some number of syllable.

In the third line it has the same number as in the first line.

For example a 2-9-2 Foo-Kai:

HOW COME
THE MOST FAMOUS WHITE SUPREMACIST
IS BLACK?


One week

Have at it

Signing out... Yours truly. Clew

robert43041
Viking
Tyrant of Words
Canada 43awards
Joined 30th July 2020
Forum Posts: 918

Denial:
                   So you lie
                   You lie to yourself, you lie to others
                    I do not.

Rew
Fire of Insight
England 15awards
Joined 30th Sep 2022
Forum Posts: 557

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Jordan
D.O.C.
Thought Provoker
United States 13awards
Joined 4th May 2022
Forum Posts: 245

The Mirror Image of Modesty

"By a myriad of reflections Wise,
I am hourly assured
of a Truth beyond all Rational doubt."
-- Humility peerless personified

*

A humble Bard am I --
since mine own mirrors numberless
nor laugh at me nor lie.

*

a dedication of Respect
for
Facts
flawless, clear, and sharp

a revolving helios foo-ku menippean satire on
the loosed ego

december, 2022 -- a pleasant, cool
Critical Thinker

Written by Jordan (D.O.C.)
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robert43041
Viking
Tyrant of Words
Canada 43awards
Joined 30th July 2020
Forum Posts: 918

Cute..

clewluss
SMOOKY
Thought Provoker
Joined 22nd Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 281

"Robert,Rew and Jordan"
Thanks

Rew
Fire of Insight
England 15awards
Joined 30th Sep 2022
Forum Posts: 557

You are very welcome, I'm sure.

Wafflenose
Ellie
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 21awards
Joined 1st Aug 2021
Forum Posts: 1212

Cross-purposes

I was pleased
when Reverend Spooner called me a 'shining wit!'
Now I'm peeved.
Written by Wafflenose (Ellie)
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Wafflenose
Ellie
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 21awards
Joined 1st Aug 2021
Forum Posts: 1212

Wonder-struck

He did not know
where the lightning was coming from—
then it struck him.
Written by Wafflenose (Ellie)
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clewluss
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Joined 22nd Apr 2014
Forum Posts: 281

Thanks everyone
I enjoyed everones responses immeasurably

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