Elegancy from darkness born
Razzerleaf
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Reflections cafe....lake Tekapo (Gloaming)
Janet shuffles towards me
I glance at her swollen ankles
as she pours, oily black
spoon standing coffee
and gives me a minute
to decide.
The dog-eared menu is stained
with rings from Tekapo's basin.
I take a sip of the table top view,
wading out from the shoreline
to float on the thin-air of darkness
back-lit between, sugared southern alps.
My mouth fills with fresh melt-waters
as the sun quenches over grilled Angus,
butter cooked potatoes, glisten
like duck stones in fading lakeside pools.
Janet looms over me, chewing gum.
Have you chosen yet? her pencil resting
on the manila carbon-copy pad.
I point at the Soup of the Moment
and she leaves me lakeside
my colours to be absorbed
as the bright eye of daylight closes.
I glance at her swollen ankles
as she pours, oily black
spoon standing coffee
and gives me a minute
to decide.
The dog-eared menu is stained
with rings from Tekapo's basin.
I take a sip of the table top view,
wading out from the shoreline
to float on the thin-air of darkness
back-lit between, sugared southern alps.
My mouth fills with fresh melt-waters
as the sun quenches over grilled Angus,
butter cooked potatoes, glisten
like duck stones in fading lakeside pools.
Janet looms over me, chewing gum.
Have you chosen yet? her pencil resting
on the manila carbon-copy pad.
I point at the Soup of the Moment
and she leaves me lakeside
my colours to be absorbed
as the bright eye of daylight closes.
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Thank you.
SweetKittyCat5
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Congratulations Cipher_O (Zero_Stillness) on your first DUP poetic competition win. I am thrilled I was there to witness you receive that recognition in merit for such an outstanding entry. Much respect to runaway-mindtrain as a runner up as well. In addition, it was a blessing to be among all the gifted entries.
I humbly bow to the gracious host, RiAN for hosting such a beneficial competition
SKC
I humbly bow to the gracious host, RiAN for hosting such a beneficial competition
SKC
Razzerleaf
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Congratulations Cipher O on the win well done also to Mindtrain and SweetK really great writing. Thank you RiAN for inspiration