Poetry competition CLOSED 10th December 2019 1:24am
WINNER
Bluelulu
Bluelulu
RUNNERS-UP:
wallyroo92
and Jade-Pandora
Four-Letter Word Poem
JOY said:Hi Cab, just so I'm clear, is the poem too offensive for this competition? The rules state "Four-letter-word PROFANITIES disqualify an entry" but I haven't used any profane words. Can you help e understand what words make it profane? I'm not trying to be difficult, would just like clarification so it doesn't happen again. Thanks
Your entry is fine, Joy. I wrote my initial response before you posted it and after reading it changed my response.
Congratulations, you're IN!
Sincerely
Your entry is fine, Joy. I wrote my initial response before you posted it and after reading it changed my response.
Congratulations, you're IN!
Sincerely
A stir
Time made,
Your core,
Have bold eyes like noon,
Made root slip,
Shed gaze into gold,
Glee vote,
Upon mine base,
Fear lead love,
Wind wage your case,
That have been seen amid
wits.
Your core,
Have bold eyes like noon,
Made root slip,
Shed gaze into gold,
Glee vote,
Upon mine base,
Fear lead love,
Wind wage your case,
That have been seen amid
wits.
Written by Poetic_Strength
(Island Breeze)
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A stir
Time made,
Your core,
Have bold eyes like noon,
Made root slip,
Shed gaze into gold,
Glee vote,
Upon mine base,
Fear lead love,
Wind wage your case,
That have been seen amid
wits.
Your core,
Have bold eyes like noon,
Made root slip,
Shed gaze into gold,
Glee vote,
Upon mine base,
Fear lead love,
Wind wage your case,
That have been seen amid
wits.
Written by Poetic_Strength
(Island Breeze)
Go To Page
Poetic_Strength said:
Thaks for your entry, P_S.
You have satisfied the requiremtnts.
Let's wait for the casting of the votes.
Sincerely
Thaks for your entry, P_S.
You have satisfied the requiremtnts.
Let's wait for the casting of the votes.
Sincerely
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Jade-Pandora said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/366158-when-birds-fall-from-blue-skies/
Thanks for your entry, J-P.
What a generous flow of four-letter words!
NB You have allowed yourself a few exceptions not allowed by the competition rules.
Please review and resubmit.
Sincerely
Thanks for your entry, J-P.
What a generous flow of four-letter words!
NB You have allowed yourself a few exceptions not allowed by the competition rules.
Please review and resubmit.
Sincerely
Cats
Purr….
Love them,
kiss them,
need more cats…
tail, paws, nose,
here they glow
like suns’ haze
from warm, fall days.
Need more cats…
want more cats…
coat like silk
purr…. love milk
gray muff ears,
eyes, hold dear.
Love them,
kiss them,
need many cats….
Purr…
Purr….
Love them,
kiss them,
need more cats…
tail, paws, nose,
here they glow
like suns’ haze
from warm, fall days.
Need more cats…
want more cats…
coat like silk
purr…. love milk
gray muff ears,
eyes, hold dear.
Love them,
kiss them,
need many cats….
Purr…
MadameLavender said:Cats
Purr….
Love them,
kiss them,
need more cats…
tail, paws, nose,
here they glow
like suns’ haze
from warm, fall days.
Need more cats…
want more cats…
coat like silk
purr…. love milk
gray muff ears,
eyes, hold dear.
Love them,
kiss them,
need many cats….
Purr…
Wow, ML!
Purrfection and affection attend your contribution. You make cats lucky.
Thanks for your entry.
Sincerely
Purr….
Love them,
kiss them,
need more cats…
tail, paws, nose,
here they glow
like suns’ haze
from warm, fall days.
Need more cats…
want more cats…
coat like silk
purr…. love milk
gray muff ears,
eyes, hold dear.
Love them,
kiss them,
need many cats….
Purr…
Wow, ML!
Purrfection and affection attend your contribution. You make cats lucky.
Thanks for your entry.
Sincerely
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