Poetry competition CLOSED 3rd January 2019 4:25am
WINNER
gothicsurrealism (Daniel Long)
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RUNNERS-UP: Jade-Pandora and LunasChild8

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Natural Proofs of God

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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DecipherMe said:It's a beautiful display. I really like the integration of historical religion that has blurred the line between the natural and divine.

Your lyricality with a pattern of short lines allows the poem to subtly weeve together a exposition. Your word choice rallies older concepts in our lexicon that give the piece a nostalgic aesthetic and authenticity.

Great poem to help start the competition 😊

Thank you, host DecipherMe, for this comp’s heavenly theme, and for your winning choices as the judge.

I congratulate Daniel as receiver of the trophy, and my sister LunasChild as my partner on the podium!

This competition was a fine example of spiritualism on the Deep.

Jadey

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