Natural Proofs of God
Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
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jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 9th Nov 2015 Forum Posts: 5134
DecipherMe said:It's a beautiful display. I really like the integration of historical religion that has blurred the line between the natural and divine.
Your lyricality with a pattern of short lines allows the poem to subtly weeve together a exposition. Your word choice rallies older concepts in our lexicon that give the piece a nostalgic aesthetic and authenticity.
Great poem to help start the competition 😊
Thank you, host DecipherMe, for this comp’s heavenly theme, and for your winning choices as the judge.
I congratulate Daniel as receiver of the trophy, and my sister LunasChild as my partner on the podium!
This competition was a fine example of spiritualism on the Deep.
Jadey
Your lyricality with a pattern of short lines allows the poem to subtly weeve together a exposition. Your word choice rallies older concepts in our lexicon that give the piece a nostalgic aesthetic and authenticity.
Great poem to help start the competition 😊
Thank you, host DecipherMe, for this comp’s heavenly theme, and for your winning choices as the judge.
I congratulate Daniel as receiver of the trophy, and my sister LunasChild as my partner on the podium!
This competition was a fine example of spiritualism on the Deep.
Jadey