Poetry competition CLOSED 24th July 2018 3:32pm
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slipalong
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RUNNERS-UP: Jade-Pandora and Cyndi_Moone

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THROUGH THE BINOCULARS

wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 11th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1873

Recluse

I remember the knock on the door,
But never really seeing his face,
I remember hearing him introducing himself,
As I stood out of sight by the staircase.

He said he was a registered sex offender,
And by law he had to make it known,
He told my parents about his time served,
He had just moved next door to our home.

My bedroom window looked in his backyard,
Sometimes I could see him working in the garage,
Putting together furniture and other things,
Along with paintings that looked like a collage.

But it was one afternoon when I came home early,
From my bedroom window I saw something odd,
He sat on one of his pieces there, weeping,
Talking to himself, as he would rock and nod.

I watched him through binoculars for nearly an hour,
The old man for a year now had been a recluse,
That afternoon he stood up wiping away his tears,
As he walked into the garage carrying a noose.

The next day there was a note,
Left at my door step with my name,
“You watched me, as I watched you,
But never ever play this game”.

poet Anonymous

This is truly a sad, frightening work. Extremely well written, unexpected, and creative. Excellent treatment of the subject matter!

poet Anonymous

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Artemios
Thought Provoker
Greece 12awards
Joined 11th Jan 2016
Forum Posts: 393

Far-a-way

 

Closer and closer, people are coming to enter my eyes
like a forgotten love, that I wasn’t waiting for.

There was a huge mobile phone,
people were dancing, taking selfish pics
and then looking at their phones, growing gray bones.

The music could be Ramones but my cheap binoculars
had no sound on, like a heart without its beats
I was witnessing the end of a selfish “is”
while everybody was getting gray eating cheese.

Suddenly mud was dripping from the ceiling
they all got mad, like tripping was healing.
No more pictures, they all became one with what was going on
by rubbing their bodies towards the screen of the huge mobile phone.

I wonder, what if people were meant to be blind
and just some of us would be able to see?
How selfish would you be, if you had no self for someone to see?

I was burning, my cigarette was under my eyes
the smoke was graying all my horizon like rotten lies,
the lights went off, I’m blind again
an envelope enters from the door of my darker desires,
I can now read, even if letters seem clouds:

“There is no -close- and no -faraway-“
Written by Artemios
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Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 5134

With thanks to our host for the unique opportunity...

My congratulations to Slip & Cyndi, having the honor of joining them on the podium!


~Jade🐾

slipalong
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 43awards
Joined 1st Jan 2018
Forum Posts: 857

well I did`nt see that coming :joke: always nice to compete against such distinguished company Cindi & Jade and thank our host for the challenge .SLIP  

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