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Prophet
Joined 6th Apr 2011
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Rather than taking them down, (which is far too much effort), just go with the one entitled "Your Gaze", please, Mr. Heslopian
Anonymous
[font=Verdana]Okay sure.
Anonymous
[font=Verdana]Contest closes in four days, everyone.
ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
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The Gardener
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 10th Oct 2010Forum Posts: 1347
Is this correct? Sorry, H.
Trapped in a tumbler.
The moonlit tendrils fall like racing stars
across her timeless, porcelain face.
He breathes in heavy and bruises in corners,
smokes a cigar for the virginal space.
The moonlit tendrils fall like racing stars.
She kneels silently at any mans altar, his plebeian sin.
the moonlit tendrils fall like racing stars
across her timeless, porcelain face.
Trapped in a tumbler.
The moonlit tendrils fall like racing stars
across her timeless, porcelain face.
He breathes in heavy and bruises in corners,
smokes a cigar for the virginal space.
The moonlit tendrils fall like racing stars.
She kneels silently at any mans altar, his plebeian sin.
the moonlit tendrils fall like racing stars
across her timeless, porcelain face.
Prophet
Joined 6th Apr 2011
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I believe the structure needs a bit of work
Bonang
Joined 26th July 2011
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Lost Thinker
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Hi Jack
Here's a last minute entry:
POETRY
Poetry is distillation,
of the musings of the sou.
Held highly in veneration,
poetry is distilation:
a lyric purification,
every writer's totem pole.
Poetry is distillation
of the musings of the soul.
Its sort of my philosophy on poetry and is therefore a more accurate representation of me,so if you are going to choose which of my poems to judge for the competition,then please use this one.
Here's a last minute entry:
POETRY
Poetry is distillation,
of the musings of the sou.
Held highly in veneration,
poetry is distilation:
a lyric purification,
every writer's totem pole.
Poetry is distillation
of the musings of the soul.
Its sort of my philosophy on poetry and is therefore a more accurate representation of me,so if you are going to choose which of my poems to judge for the competition,then please use this one.
Bonang
Joined 26th July 2011
Forum Posts: 9
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 9
Hi Jack
Here's a last minute entry:
POETRY
Poetry is distillation,
of the musings of the sou.
Held highly in veneration,
poetry is distilation:
a lyric purification,
every writer's totem pole.
Poetry is distillation
of the musings of the soul.
Its sort of my philosophy on poetry and is therefore a more accurate representation of me,so if you are going to choose which of my poems to judge for the competition,then please use this one.
Here's a last minute entry:
POETRY
Poetry is distillation,
of the musings of the sou.
Held highly in veneration,
poetry is distilation:
a lyric purification,
every writer's totem pole.
Poetry is distillation
of the musings of the soul.
Its sort of my philosophy on poetry and is therefore a more accurate representation of me,so if you are going to choose which of my poems to judge for the competition,then please use this one.
Anonymous
[font=Verdana]Sorry for the delay in choosing a winner. I got my deadlines mixed up. Anandosen wins the trophy.
Prophet
Joined 6th Apr 2011
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Congratulations! This one has similar themes to mine.
I love your poetic style. This one really worked for me.
I love your poetic style. This one really worked for me.
anandosen
Forum Posts: 316
Fire of Insight
6
Joined 22nd Aug 2009Forum Posts: 316
Thank you Jack. It means a lot to me and the contest was really interesting with some of the best entries I have read so far. Thank you Prophet and I am glad if you enoyed this one. Hey I wont forget to thank Ray for supporting my rhymic pattern and the syntax by providing us the correct data.
rayheinrich
Death Plane for Teddy
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Death Plane for Teddy
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Joined 4th Dec 2009 Forum Posts: 4409
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Yes anan, one of my favs. You got the melody synced with the blues mood!
Yes anan, one of my favs. You got the melody synced with the blues mood!