Poetry competition CLOSED 20th August 2011 4:38pm
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anandosen
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Triolets

poet Anonymous

Prophet said:K...taken up enough time & space 4 now!
I'll add a few more before the deadline on the 20th

(BTW, if it's a 1 per limit, I'll choose my best.)


Yes, I'd rather you post just one entry, Prophet.

Prophet
Thought Provoker
United States
Joined 6th Apr 2011
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Rather than taking them down, (which is far too much effort), just go with the one entitled "Your Gaze", please, Mr. Heslopian

poet Anonymous

[font=Verdana]Okay sure.

poet Anonymous

[font=Verdana]Contest closes in four days, everyone.

ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
Tyrant of Words
United Kingdom 28awards
Joined 10th Oct 2010
Forum Posts: 1347

Is this correct? Sorry, H.



Trapped in a tumbler.

The moonlit tendrils fall like racing stars
across her timeless, porcelain face.
He breathes in heavy and bruises in corners,
smokes a cigar for the virginal space.
The moonlit tendrils fall like racing stars.
She kneels silently at any mans altar, his plebeian sin.
the moonlit tendrils fall like racing stars
across her timeless, porcelain face.

Prophet
Thought Provoker
United States
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 12

I believe the structure needs a bit of work

Bonang
Lost Thinker
Zimbabwe
Joined 26th July 2011
Forum Posts: 9

Hi Jack
Here's a last minute entry:
POETRY
Poetry is distillation,
of the musings of the sou.
Held highly in veneration,
poetry is distilation:
a lyric purification,
every writer's totem pole.
Poetry is distillation
of the musings of the soul.

Its sort of my philosophy on poetry and is therefore a more accurate representation of me,so if you are going to choose which of my poems to judge for the competition,then please use this one.

Bonang
Lost Thinker
Zimbabwe
Joined 26th July 2011
Forum Posts: 9

Hi Jack
Here's a last minute entry:
POETRY
Poetry is distillation,
of the musings of the sou.
Held highly in veneration,
poetry is distilation:
a lyric purification,
every writer's totem pole.
Poetry is distillation
of the musings of the soul.

Its sort of my philosophy on poetry and is therefore a more accurate representation of me,so if you are going to choose which of my poems to judge for the competition,then please use this one.

poet Anonymous

[font=Verdana]Sorry for the delay in choosing a winner. I got my deadlines mixed up. Anandosen wins the trophy.

Prophet
Thought Provoker
United States
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 12

Congratulations! This one has similar themes to mine.
I love your poetic style.  This one really worked for me.

anandosen
Fire of Insight
India 6awards
Joined 22nd Aug 2009
Forum Posts: 316

Thank you Jack. It means a lot to me and the contest was really interesting with some of the best entries I have read so far. Thank you Prophet and I am glad if you enoyed this one. Hey I wont forget to thank Ray for supporting my rhymic pattern and the syntax by providing us the correct data.

rayheinrich
Death Plane for Teddy
Tyrant of Words
Canada 32awards
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 Yes anan, one of my favs. You got the melody synced with the blues mood!

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