Poetry competition CLOSED 26th May 2012 7:57pm
WINNER
Jestalessa
Jestalessa
HOW MUCH YOU THINK YOU KNOW A MAN.
Starlight_angel said:Ah, Gigi, your inside information announcement makes it all so hopeless. How can this be a competition with a winner already decided and there are still three days to submit an entry? Is it a fixed competition? If so, what's the point in having it?
Jesta may be able to wrap her thoughts in words better than I, but I just may know men a little better than her.
So perhaps could you. Not challenging or insulting you, Jesta, you know I love you!
Take her insane amount of talent as an automatic defeat, or take it as a challenge to rise above yourself.
Seriously though, is this fixed?
Haha fixed no I wouldn't say that.
Jesta may be able to wrap her thoughts in words better than I, but I just may know men a little better than her.
So perhaps could you. Not challenging or insulting you, Jesta, you know I love you! Take her insane amount of talent as an automatic defeat, or take it as a challenge to rise above yourself.
Seriously though, is this fixed?
Haha fixed no I wouldn't say that.
Anonymous
Gg78, I am real sorry that you withdrew your poem from this competition but you need to remember this: jestalessa’s poem is just but one in a thousand swimming in the internet Interpol of underground poetry, and while I consider her poem profound it is also merely an opinion. If every woman woo’d a man in the same fashion (now using jestalessa’s poem for example, and I pray to God she doesn’t bite my head off:) ) then every woman would be so fucking boring. Every woman is different in that sense, it’s called individuality. There’s a number of reasons why men fall in love with women and women fall in love with men; there is no genuine manual on how to make either party fall in love, it will just happen. Love for a man (and a woman) may start with a smile, a gesture, a kiss, a spoken word, a conversation, etc., etc., and we mustn’t forget the chase or the mystery or the adrenaline of just falling in love. In my opinion every poetress’s poem here in this comp is just as important as they are profound.
Good luck, ladies, peace!
Good luck, ladies, peace
! That's not why I withdrew. I know this place and I know it very well. I just don't feel up to the write . I thank you very much for looking out for me it's very kind. I am in between writing two poems and i'm into a really good book. I think you would love it, it's all sex so good 50 shades of grey it's called. But no harm no foul just don't want to really show my skills on how to love a man. Truthfully I don't know how lol.
Thanks
Thanks
Anonymous
Gg78 said:That's not why I withdrew. I know this place and I know it very well. I just don't feel up to the write . I thank you very much for looking out for me it's very kind. I am in between writing two poems and i'm into a really good book. I think you would love it, it's all sex so good 50 shades of grey it's called. But no harm no foul just don't want to really show my skills on how to love a man. Truthfully I don't know how lol.
Thanks
50 Shades of Grey is getting alot of publicity as well as generating alot of negativity. Did you read Newsweeks article on women wanting to be spanked hence, 50 Shades of Grey? Good article for these times. If you ever come across it, I urge you to read it. I think it's online, but I'm not sure. Hell, everything else is!
Sorry RSena for commenting rather than submitting.
Thanks
50 Shades of Grey is getting alot of publicity as well as generating alot of negativity. Did you read Newsweeks article on women wanting to be spanked hence, 50 Shades of Grey? Good article for these times. If you ever come across it, I urge you to read it. I think it's online, but I'm not sure. Hell, everything else is!
Sorry RSena for commenting rather than submitting.
DevlinDLC said:[quote-89635-Gg78]That's not why I withdrew. I know this place and I know it very well. I just don't feel up to the write . I thank you very much for looking out for me it's very kind. I am in between writing two poems and i'm into a really good book. I think you would love it, it's all sex so good 50 shades of grey it's called. But no harm no foul just don't want to really show my skills on how to love a man. Truthfully I don't know how lol.
Thanks
50 Shades of Grey is getting alot of publicity as well as generating alot of negativity. Did you read Newsweeks article on women wanting to be spanked hence, 50 Shades of Grey? Good article for these times. If you ever come across it, I urge you to read it. I think it's online, but I'm not sure. Hell, everything else is!
Sorry RSena for commenting rather than submitting. [/quote]
No I haven't read anything about it. Except they are turning it into a movie. Do I like the whole spank me thing! No it kinda freaks me out. But this book isn't just about that. It's good really good
Thanks
50 Shades of Grey is getting alot of publicity as well as generating alot of negativity. Did you read Newsweeks article on women wanting to be spanked hence, 50 Shades of Grey? Good article for these times. If you ever come across it, I urge you to read it. I think it's online, but I'm not sure. Hell, everything else is!
Sorry RSena for commenting rather than submitting. [/quote]
No I haven't read anything about it. Except they are turning it into a movie. Do I like the whole spank me thing! No it kinda freaks me out. But this book isn't just about that. It's good really good
[center]~COLD WAR~
This is a cold war you better know
what you're fighting for~!!!
Come to me; I demand respect~!!!
I demand that you know what I stand for~!!!
I’ll Suckle your cock as you Suckle my vagina,,,
Lick me from head to toe with your intelligence ...
I will lick you in return if indeed you
can make my mind burn with the utmost desire~!!!
I will please you in ways no one ever has,
Or ever will...
Plummet you into the depths of this passion I hold
for you alone....
Come to me; this is a cold war and you better
know what you're fighting for...
Here I lay all spread out for you to devour,
waiting to be explored, mind, body and soul...
I will enamor your mind, build you up, not tear you
down...
This is a cold war; and you better know what
you're fighting for~!!!
I want to please you into intellectual Ecstasy...
I am yours you are mine; it is plain to see...
Come and release to me the juices of your mind
waiting to flow so luscious and freely~!!!
THIS IS A COLD WAR. YOU BETTER KNOW WHAT YOU'RE FIGHTING FOR...
DevlinDLC said:Gg78, I am real sorry that you withdrew your poem from this competition but you need to remember this: jestalessa’s poem is just but one in a thousand swimming in the internet Interpol of underground poetry, and while I consider her poem profound it is also merely an opinion. If every woman woo’d a man in the same fashion (now using jestalessa’s poem for example, and I pray to God she doesn’t bite my head off:) ) then every woman would be so fucking boring. Every woman is different in that sense, it’s called individuality. There’s a number of reasons why men fall in love with women and women fall in love with men; there is no genuine manual on how to make either party fall in love, it will just happen. Love for a man (and a woman) may start with a smile, a gesture, a kiss, a spoken word, a conversation, etc., etc., and we mustn’t forget the chase or the mystery or the adrenaline of just falling in love. In my opinion every poetress’s poem here in this comp is just as important as they are profound.
Good luck, ladies, peace!
Every woman is different in that sense, it’s called individuality. There’s a number of reasons why men fall in love with women and women fall in love with men>>>> same thing i said before. same thing., and is ok, i undertand, you will submit on my next one, i promise you that.
Good luck, ladies, peace
! Every woman is different in that sense, it’s called individuality. There’s a number of reasons why men fall in love with women and women fall in love with men>>>> same thing i said before. same thing., and is ok, i undertand, you will submit on my next one, i promise you that.
drogedarain said:
[center]~COLD WAR~
This is a cold war you better know
what you're fighting for~!!!
Come to me; I demand respect~!!!
I demand that you know what I stand for~!!!
I’ll Suckle your cock as you Suckle my vagina,,,
Lick me from head to toe with your intelligence ...
I will lick you in return if indeed you
can make my mind burn with the utmost desire~!!!
I will please you in ways no one ever has,
Or ever will...
Plummet you into the depths of this passion I hold
for you alone....
Come to me; this is a cold war and you better
know what you're fighting for...
Here I lay all spread out for you to devour,
waiting to be explored, mind, body and soul...
I will enamor your mind, build you up, not tear you
down...
This is a cold war; and you better know what
you're fighting for~!!!
I want to please you into intellectual Ecstasy...
I am yours you are mine; it is plain to see...
Come and release to me the juices of your mind
waiting to flow so luscious and freely~!!!
THIS IS A COLD WAR. YOU BETTER KNOW WHAT YOU'RE FIGHTING FOR... [/center]
im pro womans, especially when they demand, the 50-50. i give you a 4.
[center]~COLD WAR~
This is a cold war you better know
what you're fighting for~!!!
Come to me; I demand respect~!!!
I demand that you know what I stand for~!!!
I’ll Suckle your cock as you Suckle my vagina,,,
Lick me from head to toe with your intelligence ...
I will lick you in return if indeed you
can make my mind burn with the utmost desire~!!!
I will please you in ways no one ever has,
Or ever will...
Plummet you into the depths of this passion I hold
for you alone....
Come to me; this is a cold war and you better
know what you're fighting for...
Here I lay all spread out for you to devour,
waiting to be explored, mind, body and soul...
I will enamor your mind, build you up, not tear you
down...
This is a cold war; and you better know what
you're fighting for~!!!
I want to please you into intellectual Ecstasy...
I am yours you are mine; it is plain to see...
Come and release to me the juices of your mind
waiting to flow so luscious and freely~!!!
THIS IS A COLD WAR. YOU BETTER KNOW WHAT YOU'RE FIGHTING FOR...
im pro womans, especially when they demand, the 50-50. i give you a 4.
Jestalessa said:[quote-89525-Starlight_angel]
Jesta may be able to wrap her thoughts in words better than I, but I just may know men a little better than her.
are you.... Starlight, are you suggesting... are you sure you're not challenging me? you wanna go, hon? and in those 6 inch heels? *push*shove*face*
[/quote]
Haha. Sweetie, if you and I had a throw down over this, we could definitely rack in the $$$$$ charging for tickets. The mind reels at the kinds of competitions it would take to see who "came out on top". 
No love, I'm not challenging you, but you know that already.
Jesta may be able to wrap her thoughts in words better than I, but I just may know men a little better than her.
are you.... Starlight, are you suggesting... are you sure you're not challenging me? you wanna go, hon? and in those 6 inch heels? *push*shove*face*
[/quote]
Haha. Sweetie, if you and I had a throw down over this, we could definitely rack in the $$$$$ charging for tickets.
The mind reels at the kinds of competitions it would take to see who "came out on top". No love, I'm not challenging you, but you know that already.
Starlight_angel said:[quote-89549-Jestalessa][quote-89525-Starlight_angel]
Jesta may be able to wrap her thoughts in words better than I, but I just may know men a little better than her.
are you.... Starlight, are you suggesting... are you sure you're not challenging me? you wanna go, hon? and in those 6 inch heels? *push*shove*face*
[/quote]
Haha. Sweetie, if you and I had a throw down over this, we could definitely rack in the $$$$$ charging for tickets. The mind reels at the kinds of competitions it would take to see who "came out on top".
No love, I'm not challenging you, but you know that already. [/quote]
oh, i love you, Starlight. you just always seem to balance. [:
(yes, i was completely joking)
i feel kind of awkward about this poem getting so much attention. it's really just an opinion, my main way of seeing; was going to write more for this comp just because it was a great kickstarter for inspiration, but think i'll just leave it now.
i'm happy to be in with you ladies anyway, and i hope some of the female commentors submit. would love to see their views as well.
Jesta may be able to wrap her thoughts in words better than I, but I just may know men a little better than her.
are you.... Starlight, are you suggesting... are you sure you're not challenging me? you wanna go, hon? and in those 6 inch heels? *push*shove*face*
[/quote]
Haha. Sweetie, if you and I had a throw down over this, we could definitely rack in the $$$$$ charging for tickets.
The mind reels at the kinds of competitions it would take to see who "came out on top". No love, I'm not challenging you, but you know that already. [/quote]
oh, i love you, Starlight. you just always seem to balance. [:
(yes, i was completely joking)
i feel kind of awkward about this poem getting so much attention. it's really just an opinion, my main way of seeing; was going to write more for this comp just because it was a great kickstarter for inspiration, but think i'll just leave it now.
i'm happy to be in with you ladies anyway, and i hope some of the female commentors submit. would love to see their views as well.
I do apologize I was under the impression that I only had one vote.
Here are some more:
Gg78 said: Keep him on lock 3.o
Grace said: To woo a man 3.0
CriticalMass: Nothing Taboo 2.9
CriticalMass: Know your role 3.0
CriticalMass: Cold War 3.5
This is a very interesting comp.Applauds you all for your honesty.
Devlin you'd make a great politician
Here are some more:
Gg78 said: Keep him on lock 3.o
Grace said: To woo a man 3.0
CriticalMass: Nothing Taboo 2.9
CriticalMass: Know your role 3.0
CriticalMass: Cold War 3.5
This is a very interesting comp.Applauds you all for your honesty.
Devlin you'd make a great politician
When I first entered this competition, I thought it was just to know a man
I was wrong it was more . It was to love a man
I'm not the one to give that advice for real
But since everyone said I bailed and I cowered away I just came up with this
I know men
What makes them tick
Sometimes I like to push their
buttons
Just to see them eyes light up with rage
And everything they wanna say but never do
comes out right then
I know men
They like to be fucked
Yes they love to love
But don't get it twisted
They like to fuck
It's natural
It's ok to be your mans whore as long as it just that
His whore
I know men
They don't want to be nagged
Oh but they nag us
Wanting things a certain way
Tv on sports or some fishing show
You get the gist
I know men
but I don't know what makes them want to love Anyone
I can't say I'll ever know because
I don't know what love is
I know want , desire , friendship
But I don't know love
Keep a hold of a man is easy
Clamming a man is easier
Loving a man is complicated
They're very complicated individuals
To say I can make him love me is a lie
You can't make anyone love you
It just happens
Even when you don't want it
It happens
That's that.. Lol no more Gigi ran she didn't she doesn't know love point blank it's not odd to be me like me. It's natural I think
I was wrong it was more . It was to love a man
I'm not the one to give that advice for real
But since everyone said I bailed and I cowered away I just came up with this
I know men
What makes them tick
Sometimes I like to push their
buttons
Just to see them eyes light up with rage
And everything they wanna say but never do
comes out right then
I know men
They like to be fucked
Yes they love to love
But don't get it twisted
They like to fuck
It's natural
It's ok to be your mans whore as long as it just that
His whore
I know men
They don't want to be nagged
Oh but they nag us
Wanting things a certain way
Tv on sports or some fishing show
You get the gist
I know men
but I don't know what makes them want to love Anyone
I can't say I'll ever know because
I don't know what love is
I know want , desire , friendship
But I don't know love
Keep a hold of a man is easy
Clamming a man is easier
Loving a man is complicated
They're very complicated individuals
To say I can make him love me is a lie
You can't make anyone love you
It just happens
Even when you don't want it
It happens
That's that.. Lol no more Gigi ran she didn't she doesn't know love point blank it's not odd to be me like me. It's natural I think
