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Animals of the Deep
summultima
uma
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uma
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Poetry Contest Description
write a poetic scribe .. woven centric with the sea creatures.. mythical or the mystical or the real or the extinct

Dear Inspiring & Talented DUzz
Am here again with another comp. this time a different one for anyone to imagine I hope:)
Yes it’s about the Animals of the Deep - the Waters - may it be the sea or oceans or any water bodies ..
It’s kinda tribute for the love of our such beings.. that are mostly not known or ignored or killed indifferently ..or considered as either terrifyingly monstrous or funnily tiny enough too:) may it from the tiny planktons to the mermaids to the octopuses to the whatnots.. i leave it to you to enlighten me dearzzz xx
Simple rules are:
*Any poetic form- but theme needs to be sea creatures- centric with your imagination or content or characters or extension woven to it
* max. 2 entries per poet - no AI generated content
* minimum of 100 words to a max of 200 words only (remember, not lesser than 100 words)
* scores based on your poetic feel ., novelty if content, emotional depths, x- factoring zings you can splash in them
*kindly no erotic or extreme content of any kind
*winner go be decided by myself after the said timeline
* any other asks.. kindly inbox pls
Best for the comp dearzzz❤️✍️🙏👍
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Grace
IDryad
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IDryad
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The deep
Deep darksong of the ocean
calls the mind to murky abyss
unknown as yet uncharted
by human those that stand
on solid ground
should the deep be explored
fully charted by human hands
should the ocean floor be found
could it maybe disappoint?
murky depth and dark greyness
a world of nothingness
or maybe it would be wondrous
with bubbly mermaids in a row
with charming mermen
out a-courting
with sea-flowers on their hands
thrones that shine like coral stones
pearly floors and mother of pearls
of kings and queens
and enchanted kingdoms
the ocean….
yet fantasy calls to mind
the dreams of then
the visions in sleep
where creatures of the sea
play with joy so carefree
can we be as them
you and me..?
calls the mind to murky abyss
unknown as yet uncharted
by human those that stand
on solid ground
should the deep be explored
fully charted by human hands
should the ocean floor be found
could it maybe disappoint?
murky depth and dark greyness
a world of nothingness
or maybe it would be wondrous
with bubbly mermaids in a row
with charming mermen
out a-courting
with sea-flowers on their hands
thrones that shine like coral stones
pearly floors and mother of pearls
of kings and queens
and enchanted kingdoms
the ocean….
yet fantasy calls to mind
the dreams of then
the visions in sleep
where creatures of the sea
play with joy so carefree
can we be as them
you and me..?
Written by Grace
(IDryad)
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Anne-Ri999
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Joined 16th Aug 2023
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Once sea swept
birthing chaos
procrastinating
sounds solely wept
fossilized curtains
rain refrains
journeys through all skies
sunken asunder
volcanic ashen song
whispers not a name
each nautical act an art
of letting go
water spewing
cyclopes
cleanse my molecules
I am one eyed
monocle
humanize me
let dark red roses bloom
from opaque
hold these hands
they are too empty
to touch transparency
her predictions
spat out one eyed
saints sailors
merfolk finned folk
paved these surfaces
digging up ideologies
where god lay
in his cemented center
amoeba cells
altered each shape
octopus oceanic
ballet beckons
melancholic
mantic
lucidity
returns
refrained
sea lies adrift
among deathbeds
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procrastinating
sounds solely wept
fossilized curtains
rain refrains
journeys through all skies
sunken asunder
volcanic ashen song
whispers not a name
each nautical act an art
of letting go
water spewing
cyclopes
cleanse my molecules
I am one eyed
monocle
humanize me
let dark red roses bloom
from opaque
hold these hands
they are too empty
to touch transparency
her predictions
spat out one eyed
saints sailors
merfolk finned folk
paved these surfaces
digging up ideologies
where god lay
in his cemented center
amoeba cells
altered each shape
octopus oceanic
ballet beckons
melancholic
mantic
lucidity
returns
refrained
sea lies adrift
among deathbeds
copyrights © owned by Rianne 2025
all rights reserved
Written by Anne-Ri999
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Ahavati
Tams
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Tams
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The Torchbearer
Deep
within the ocean's heart
light is scarce
yet sometimes rare
—a little angler fish’s torch
illuminates
the darkness there
A fishing lure
it softly sways
temptation
in an endless haze
so seldom seen
amid the dark
a false beacon
of appetite
Her humpbacked nature
in eerie depths
where silence holds
its secrets tight
this strange visage
both fierce and shy
a fish of fables
with haunting rites
Its world
a place of liquid ink
where ancient currents run
beneath
a ghostly melody
no human ear
will ever know
nor voice ever sing
This creature of nature
—not lost but true
a marvel hidden
from our view
revealed herself
within our sight
lured to death
by a brighter light
Choosing to die
as she had lived
to free herself
from karmic debt
within the ocean's heart
light is scarce
yet sometimes rare
—a little angler fish’s torch
illuminates
the darkness there
A fishing lure
it softly sways
temptation
in an endless haze
so seldom seen
amid the dark
a false beacon
of appetite
Her humpbacked nature
in eerie depths
where silence holds
its secrets tight
this strange visage
both fierce and shy
a fish of fables
with haunting rites
Its world
a place of liquid ink
where ancient currents run
beneath
a ghostly melody
no human ear
will ever know
nor voice ever sing
This creature of nature
—not lost but true
a marvel hidden
from our view
revealed herself
within our sight
lured to death
by a brighter light
Choosing to die
as she had lived
to free herself
from karmic debt
Written by Ahavati
(Tams)
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summultima
uma
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Joined 3rd Feb 2012
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uma
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Aww that’s a mind-blowingly wondrous start to this comp. by all the wise adored poets in here! Couldn’t have asked more…
Thanks dear Grace, Rianne & Ahavati .. fir rising the bar high.. & for really truly lighting the deepest of the deep .. the connect we have with them, the love, the jubilance, adorations & more unsaid magic... are in such feltness!!
though this now holds all .. though would love to get the presently crafted poetics ever for a comp. .. since I forgot to mention that in rules.. will accept both old or new writes
Keep them coming more my lovable poets.. 🧜♀️🐙f🦈🐬🐳 ✍️🙏♥️👍

Thanks dear Grace, Rianne & Ahavati .. fir rising the bar high.. & for really truly lighting the deepest of the deep .. the connect we have with them, the love, the jubilance, adorations & more unsaid magic... are in such feltness!!
though this now holds all .. though would love to get the presently crafted poetics ever for a comp. .. since I forgot to mention that in rules.. will accept both old or new writes

Keep them coming more my lovable poets.. 🧜♀️🐙f🦈🐬🐳 ✍️🙏♥️👍
Vision_of_insanity
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Joined 22nd Jan 2024
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Iku-Turso
My sleep was awoken by the noise of a Lion, a Cricket and a Raccoon . It was weird. I looked outside and there was a red brick road that led to my garage. I walked into the garage and their were the three having tea with cookies. They all stopped whispering and looked at me in disgust. They asked me to please leave and follow the blue brick road for wisdom and the truth. I asked if I could have one cookie. The cricket stood up and said, "if you don't leave were going to chew on your body."
I left. I decided to follow the blue brick road. As I did, I noticed the sky & atmosphere was becoming very thick and dense. The smell of the salt air was heavy. I really couldn't see much in front of me. Also, in the distance I heard this loud shrieking noise. I couldn't make sense of it, cause I couldn't see too well. Within a few yards, I saw men with torches. They were standing on the shoreline fighting off this large ass sea creature. The creature and I made eye contact. It stopped it's torment and terror with the men on the shoreline. He leaned towards me, since he was like 200 feet tall and said politely, "Today is hump day. Cheer Fia up, cause she don't like Wednesdays." I said will do. I left and went back home.
I left. I decided to follow the blue brick road. As I did, I noticed the sky & atmosphere was becoming very thick and dense. The smell of the salt air was heavy. I really couldn't see much in front of me. Also, in the distance I heard this loud shrieking noise. I couldn't make sense of it, cause I couldn't see too well. Within a few yards, I saw men with torches. They were standing on the shoreline fighting off this large ass sea creature. The creature and I made eye contact. It stopped it's torment and terror with the men on the shoreline. He leaned towards me, since he was like 200 feet tall and said politely, "Today is hump day. Cheer Fia up, cause she don't like Wednesdays." I said will do. I left and went back home.
Written by Vision_of_insanity
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summultima
uma
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Joined 3rd Feb 2012
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uma
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~selkie:: in the sempiternal inner calling
“The one thing which we seek with insatiable desire is to forget ourselves, … to lose our sempiternal memory, and to do something without knowing how or why….” ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson
she
has appeared
for me ..
watching me
following me ..
an intervention
decodes me this
now…
will i be able to
sense her presence ..
she had risen for me
from the deep seas
.. in her enchanted seal
form .. her dense shiny skin
still intact, her ancient
aquatic spirit
calls & hums
my name.. in an
ultrasonic undercurrent..
could feel those whispering
vibrations.. in a goosepimpilicious
uprising .. a sudden chilly piercing
a shivering wave .. that dies
down swiftly .. only to be in
a fluctuating~ alternating wave
of a series of impinging
arousals..
she sheds her hefty seal skin
to a rapid peeling off human.. as
a captivating woman.. walking
the shores along me.. as me .. in
search of her longing desires.. to
the deeply spiralling inner dreams..
she makes me feel them in her touch
of my third eye .. makes me dare go..
beyond the reddening horizons .. unto
the forbidden yet the primally~ needfully
quenching realms of love.. giving in &
fusing in.. with the musky pheromonal
stenches of a magnetic masculine form..
that’s wildly yet delicately pulling me in..
the playful ebbs & tides goes on in.. in
a full firming yet a formless form.. until
the peaking tsunamic tectonic shifts.. hits
to tear & bleed inner me in a rioting chaos..
a pleasure kill.. gushing & channeling in
the vast seven oceans inner me.. thats
cleanses in a spiritual calling connect..
back to the deep seas in calling..
seeking self in the selkie .. sweetly lost in
the dreams n desires of the depths in tge
beautiful resurfacing.. becoming one with
the symbolic selkie .. or even better in
the rapidly catalytic.. a bittersweetly made
transition of an ‘unbecoming’.. as a
sempiteternal sentience.. of merely a naked
nomadic soul in variform shells of a human
or an inborne selkie.. i swim now to the deep
oceans.. the purely conversing calling home
of all homes.. i return in the infinite
turns.. in these ageless births as
forms of craving aloud organisms..
to the formlessly fusing atomic
cosmic stardusts .. in saintly
salience.. a liberating silence
Written by summultima
(uma)
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summultima
uma
34
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
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uma
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~selkie:: in the sempiternal inner calling
“The one thing which we seek with insatiable desire is to forget ourselves, … to lose our sempiternal memory, and to do something without knowing how or why….” ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson
she
has appeared
for me ..
watching me
following me ..
an intervention
decodes me this
now…
will i be able to
sense her presence ..
she had risen for me
from the deep seas
.. in her enchanted seal
form .. her dense shiny skin
still intact, her ancient
aquatic spirit
calls & hums
my name.. in an
ultrasonic undercurrent..
could feel those whispering
vibrations.. in a goosepimpilicious
uprising .. a sudden chilly piercing
a shivering wave .. that dies
down swiftly .. only to be in
a fluctuating~ alternating wave
of a series of impinging
arousals..
she sheds her hefty seal skin
to a rapid peeling off human.. as
a captivating woman.. walking
the shores along me.. as me .. in
search of her longing desires.. to
the deeply spiralling inner dreams..
she makes me feel them in her touch
of my third eye .. makes me dare go..
beyond the reddening horizons .. unto
the forbidden yet the primally~ needfully
quenching realms of love.. giving in &
fusing in.. with the musky pheromonal
stenches of a magnetic masculine form..
that’s wildly yet delicately pulling me in..
the playful ebbs & tides goes on in.. in
a full firming yet a formless form.. until
the peaking tsunamic tectonic shifts.. hits
to tear & bleed inner me in a rioting chaos..
a pleasure kill.. gushing & channeling in
the vast seven oceans inner me.. thats
cleanses in a spiritual calling connect..
back to the deep seas in calling..
seeking self in the selkie .. sweetly lost in
the dreams n desires of the depths in tge
beautiful resurfacing.. becoming one with
the symbolic selkie .. or even better in
the rapidly catalytic.. a bittersweetly made
transition of an ‘unbecoming’.. as a
sempiteternal sentience.. of merely a naked
nomadic soul in variform shells of a human
or an inborne selkie.. i swim now to the deep
oceans.. the purely conversing calling home
of all homes.. i return in the infinite
turns.. in these ageless births as
forms of craving aloud organisms..
to the formlessly fusing atomic
cosmic stardusts .. in saintly
salience.. a liberating silence
Written by summultima
(uma)
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summultima
uma
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Joined 3rd Feb 2012
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uma
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Bumping this thread.:) hello great afored poeyic friends.. come on in .. dive in the deep waters.. & enlighten me with your animals of thd deep..!:)
Thanks Keith for an amazing n monstrously hilarious entry in there above!:) Best for you & all those who planning to enter:) 👍❤️✍️🙏
Thanks Keith for an amazing n monstrously hilarious entry in there above!:) Best for you & all those who planning to enter:) 👍❤️✍️🙏