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IDryad
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IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Poetry Contest Description
Create a World from your own imagination
Write out a World of your own imagination. It can be a future world or a past, a world of fantasy etc and create your story around it. Any length but not a book.
1. No erotica
2. No collaboration
3. AI not encouraged
4. No chatting on comp thread
1. No erotica
2. No collaboration
3. AI not encouraged
4. No chatting on comp thread
ThePalestRider
Forum Posts: 32
Thought Provoker
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Joined 14th Sep 2018 Forum Posts: 32
Canto I:The New Jerusalem
Beneath the ash-gray skies they roamed
The faithful few with heads bent low
Across the endless, barren loam
To where the desert winds did blow
A voice, like thunder, called them forth
The patriarch, his eyes aflame
A shepherd from the hollow North
Who wore a tattered prophet’s name
With cross held high, he led them on
To build anew Jerusalem
Upon the bones of ages gone
Beneath a sky that knew no sun
He called the land a holy waste
The prairies wide, the broken plain
A place where sins could be erased
And man could taste of death and pain
Canto II: The Chant of Ash and Dust
In worn procession through the dust
They carried icons black with rust
And kissed the wood, and kissed the stone
In whispered tongues, in solemn tone
“Rejoice, O Mother,” came the cry
“For we have left the world behind
To walk this path where martyrs lie
And cleanse the blood from mortal mind.”
Yet in the night strange visions came
The saints they saw were twisted, pale
With faces veiled in shadow’s flame
And halos cracked and dimmed and frail
Canto III:The Patriarch’s Sermon
“O sons and daughters,” cried their priest
His voice like fire, his robe like night
“This place was wrought for holy feasts
This ground will purge all earthly blight
We build a kingdom here in dread
The city of the prophet’s tale
Where angels fear and devils tread
We raise our prayers, though voices fail.”
Yet murmurs stirred beneath his words
The faithful’s faces, gaunt and gray
For death had stalked them like a bird
That knew the scent of souls astray
Canto IV: The Vision of Bones
Beneath the moon’s relentless stare
The dead rose up in silent rows
The prophets, saints, and martyrs fair
Arrayed in robes, in crimson glows
They gathered ‘round with hollow eyes
Their fingers long as twisted reeds
And sang as mourners, bleak and wise
Of holy fire and mortal needs
“We built the walls of Heaven’s gate,”
The phantoms cried in ghostly song
“We carved the stones of blood and hate
And died in faith, yet suffered wrong.”
And there the patriarch did kneel
To kiss the bones of saints laid bare
Yet in his heart a frozen steel
A silence void of love or prayer
Canto V: The End of Days
At dawn they saw, in eastern light
The city risen, sharp and black
A kingdom in the morning’s blight
Where towers cast their shadows back
Yet none dared enter through its doors
For shrieks did rise from deep within
As if some ancient, restless war
Had found new voice in songs of sin
And there the patriarch, alone
Stood silent ‘neath the barren sun
A king upon a shattered throne
Where time and faith had come undone
In that desolate New Jerusalem
No trumpets sang, no candles burned
And all who sought to be redeemed
Were lost to dust, and never learned
Beneath the ash-gray skies they roamed
The faithful few with heads bent low
Across the endless, barren loam
To where the desert winds did blow
A voice, like thunder, called them forth
The patriarch, his eyes aflame
A shepherd from the hollow North
Who wore a tattered prophet’s name
With cross held high, he led them on
To build anew Jerusalem
Upon the bones of ages gone
Beneath a sky that knew no sun
He called the land a holy waste
The prairies wide, the broken plain
A place where sins could be erased
And man could taste of death and pain
Canto II: The Chant of Ash and Dust
In worn procession through the dust
They carried icons black with rust
And kissed the wood, and kissed the stone
In whispered tongues, in solemn tone
“Rejoice, O Mother,” came the cry
“For we have left the world behind
To walk this path where martyrs lie
And cleanse the blood from mortal mind.”
Yet in the night strange visions came
The saints they saw were twisted, pale
With faces veiled in shadow’s flame
And halos cracked and dimmed and frail
Canto III:The Patriarch’s Sermon
“O sons and daughters,” cried their priest
His voice like fire, his robe like night
“This place was wrought for holy feasts
This ground will purge all earthly blight
We build a kingdom here in dread
The city of the prophet’s tale
Where angels fear and devils tread
We raise our prayers, though voices fail.”
Yet murmurs stirred beneath his words
The faithful’s faces, gaunt and gray
For death had stalked them like a bird
That knew the scent of souls astray
Canto IV: The Vision of Bones
Beneath the moon’s relentless stare
The dead rose up in silent rows
The prophets, saints, and martyrs fair
Arrayed in robes, in crimson glows
They gathered ‘round with hollow eyes
Their fingers long as twisted reeds
And sang as mourners, bleak and wise
Of holy fire and mortal needs
“We built the walls of Heaven’s gate,”
The phantoms cried in ghostly song
“We carved the stones of blood and hate
And died in faith, yet suffered wrong.”
And there the patriarch did kneel
To kiss the bones of saints laid bare
Yet in his heart a frozen steel
A silence void of love or prayer
Canto V: The End of Days
At dawn they saw, in eastern light
The city risen, sharp and black
A kingdom in the morning’s blight
Where towers cast their shadows back
Yet none dared enter through its doors
For shrieks did rise from deep within
As if some ancient, restless war
Had found new voice in songs of sin
And there the patriarch, alone
Stood silent ‘neath the barren sun
A king upon a shattered throne
Where time and faith had come undone
In that desolate New Jerusalem
No trumpets sang, no candles burned
And all who sought to be redeemed
Were lost to dust, and never learned