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Sweet Shop

Taylor65
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 27th Nov 2022
Forum Posts: 4

Somewhere between the last heart
blip and the beach road house

there is a permission slip
being written

all the minutes of life,
everything ever unread

all those unwritten
pages

a candy box, tiny chocolate pieces
of unwrapped death inside

Northern_Soul
Tyrant of Words
England 35awards
Joined 10th Jan 2021
Forum Posts: 6075

Hey - are you hoping to receive feedback on your poem? You may be better off posting it as a personal submission.

Click menu > my DU > new submission.

😄

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