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Hullo and welcome
This ccomp is not very clear.
are you looking for people to read your poem and tell you what it's about ?
This ccomp is not very clear.
are you looking for people to read your poem and tell you what it's about ?
mrimac2008
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did i live?
a dusty mask and a old chair
with a scenery of my life
O life,in the end i fell down from that chair
and questioned softly did i live?
while i am falling down
people were happy not me
suddenly,i travelled time
O dusty mask it wasn't funny
finally,but only regret is left
for me to choose,I've chosen by god
the liver is pulled,my throat went down
I've fallen down and everything went dark
with a scenery of my life
O life,in the end i fell down from that chair
and questioned softly did i live?
while i am falling down
people were happy not me
suddenly,i travelled time
O dusty mask it wasn't funny
finally,but only regret is left
for me to choose,I've chosen by god
the liver is pulled,my throat went down
I've fallen down and everything went dark
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I don't understand either tbh. Idk what to post.
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OBSCURE ROSE
Precious petals, rare thorns
'Prohibited to Touch'
Ignoring such matters to get dramatic burns
Love that's shown that intrigues so much
Affection that is there when it hurts....
One's heart is a rose
A rose that opens red
Receiving what all life has to propose
'Frailty in Unity of it Soon Dead'
The new beginning of a prose
The prologue it creates in each stem
that is impossible to ignore
'Meraki Black Gem'
To define what's hidden in it's core
Smiling vines genuine
Cannot deny its dark essence
'The Black Butterfly'
Admiring her elegance
She is uniquely shy
But don't be deceived she is also dangerous
Water drops that look like diamonds
'Twinkles and Signals'
Life's mad laments
Many shattered many happy many individuals
Witnessing all that happens
'Her Midnight Dress'
That blooms at right full moon
Ready to impress and express
For that soul to take her doom
Relating and forgetting the rest
'Prohibited to Touch'
Ignoring such matters to get dramatic burns
Love that's shown that intrigues so much
Affection that is there when it hurts....
One's heart is a rose
A rose that opens red
Receiving what all life has to propose
'Frailty in Unity of it Soon Dead'
The new beginning of a prose
The prologue it creates in each stem
that is impossible to ignore
'Meraki Black Gem'
To define what's hidden in it's core
Smiling vines genuine
Cannot deny its dark essence
'The Black Butterfly'
Admiring her elegance
She is uniquely shy
But don't be deceived she is also dangerous
Water drops that look like diamonds
'Twinkles and Signals'
Life's mad laments
Many shattered many happy many individuals
Witnessing all that happens
'Her Midnight Dress'
That blooms at right full moon
Ready to impress and express
For that soul to take her doom
Relating and forgetting the rest
Written by NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
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???
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NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
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Lol Rew the last thing you said hahaha... Haha you tried that's all that matters in this confusing competition....
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Cheers Nancy thanks for the mention. Good luck with the book.
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You welcome Rew I enjoyed doing so , needed the laugh tbh. Thank you Rew, I am hoping for greatness in it girl.
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