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can you work this poem out ?

poet Anonymous

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lepperochan
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Hullo and welcome

This ccomp is not very clear.

are you looking for people to read your poem and tell you what it's about ?

mrimac2008
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did i live?

a dusty mask and a old chair
with a scenery of my life
O life,in the end i fell down from that chair
and questioned softly  did i live?

while i am falling down
people were happy not me
suddenly,i travelled time
O dusty mask it wasn't funny

finally,but only regret is left
for me to choose,I've chosen by god
the liver is pulled,my throat went down
 I've fallen down and everything went dark
 


 
Written by mrimac2008 (mrimac)
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NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
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I don't understand either tbh. Idk what to post.

NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
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OBSCURE ROSE

Precious petals, rare thorns
 
'Prohibited to Touch'
 
Ignoring such matters to get dramatic burns
 
Love that's shown that intrigues so much
 
Affection that is there when it hurts....
 

One's heart is a rose
 
A rose that opens red
 
Receiving what all life has to propose
 
'Frailty in Unity of it Soon Dead'
 
The new beginning of a prose
 

The prologue it creates in each stem
 
that is impossible to ignore
 
'Meraki Black Gem'

To define what's hidden in it's core
 
Smiling vines genuine
 

Cannot deny its dark essence
 
'The Black Butterfly'

Admiring her elegance
 
She is uniquely shy
 
But don't be deceived she is also dangerous
 

Water drops that look like diamonds
 
'Twinkles and Signals'
 
Life's mad laments
 
Many shattered many happy many individuals
 
Witnessing all that happens
 

'Her Midnight Dress'
 
That blooms at right full moon
 
Ready to impress and express
 
For that soul to take her doom
 
Relating and forgetting the rest
Written by NANCY_RDZ_STORIES (WRITER LYRICIST ARTIST)
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Rew
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???

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NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
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Lol Rew the last thing you said hahaha... Haha you tried that's all that matters in this confusing competition....

Rew
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Cheers Nancy thanks for the mention. Good luck with the book.

NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
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You welcome Rew I enjoyed doing so , needed the laugh tbh. Thank you Rew, I am hoping for greatness in it girl.

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