Concrete Creations
cabcool
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Guardian of Shadows
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Poetry Contest Description
Create a concrete or shape poem on any shape or theme of your choice. The words must define the shape or object.
You may submit the final product as a photo (jpg, png, or pdf), to prevent the words from shifting out of line during submission. You must first submit the poem under your regular profile (New Submission), then add it to the comp from there, after which you may change it out for a Visual Poem with the + image feature.
RULES
1 entry per human being (multiple aliases not allowed)
50 words max
NO linguistic, metaphoric, or (porno)graphic obscenities
NEW and ORIGINAL poems only
ADJUDICATION
Entries will be judged on visual impact as well as message content, by a panel of adjudicators.
ENTRY DEADLINE
Competition closes June 25
PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
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PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Dangerous Mind
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cabcool
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Guardian of Shadows
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You are a brave soul. Paulo, for jumping in headfirst to identify with this shapely adventure!
Thanks for setting the pace for all who will follow.
All the best in the comp.
-cab
Thanks for setting the pace for all who will follow.
All the best in the comp.
-cab
PAR
PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
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PAULO ACACIO RAMOS
Dangerous Mind
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Thank you!!! Poetry is life!
Betty
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 8th May 2012Forum Posts: 512
hangman's scaffold
neurodivergent people can
be tall, thin, brilliant, O
and work a pair C
of fuck-me D
heels
so
very
well
that normative thinkers
forget that we can't actually
deal with breaks in the patterns.
I’m in the audience cheering this time.
Written by Betty
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cabcool
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Guardian of Shadows
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Hi, Betty
Thanks for your entry, so effortlessly clever.
Best regards.
Thanks for your entry, so effortlessly clever.
Best regards.
Jordan
D.O.C.
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D.O.C.
Twisted Dreamer
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cabcool
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Guardian of Shadows
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Thanks for your entry, Jordan.
Just when things were getting too quiet around here, here you come to stir the waters!
Just when things were getting too quiet around here, here you come to stir the waters!
wallyroo92
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Tyrant of Words
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cabcool
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Guardian of Shadows
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Thank you for your entry, wallyroo; and how apt for the concurrent celebration!
You are one word over the limit, but we ca work with that.
Best regards to you.
You are one word over the limit, but we ca work with that.
Best regards to you.
cabcool
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Guardian of Shadows
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I appreciate the effort, Gentle. You still have several hours to rectify the word-count disarray. You are way over the 50-word limit.
Looking forward to your adjustment.
Looking forward to your adjustment.
cabcool
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Guardian of Shadows
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cabcool
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Guardian of Shadows
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Joined 27th Feb 2014Forum Posts: 784
Please note: "the saddle of the wind" and "kitesong" are non-entries included here merely as samples for illustration purposes.
cabcool
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Guardian of Shadows
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CONGRATULATIONS to the winner, Betty, for Hangman's Scaffold. Well done, Wallyroo, for chalking up a close 2nd place with Rainbows. Thanks to all participants for making this so diverse in creative thought.
Big thank you to our judges, Ahavati, lepperochan, and MadameLavender. Let's do another interesting one sometime soon again.
Big thank you to our judges, Ahavati, lepperochan, and MadameLavender. Let's do another interesting one sometime soon again.
Betty
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 8th May 2012Forum Posts: 512
Thank you for hosting Cabcool! I totally dug this. It was a different layer of challenge.